Peer Review History

Original SubmissionJune 28, 2024
Decision Letter - Bart P.H.J. Thomma, Editor, Yuanchao Wang, Editor

Dear MSc Kasteel,

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Reviewer's Responses to Questions

Part I - Summary

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Reviewer #1: The molecular basis of chemoattraction of unicellular eukaryotes is certainly of topic of potential interest to a wider audience.

Reviewer #2: The manuscript provides valuable insights into the chemotactic responses of zoospores of the genus Phytophthora. The use of high-speed cameras to track swimming trajectories and quantify key parameters is a commendable approach that has yielded significant findings. Furthermore, the manuscript distinguishes between chemotaxis deficiencies and chemoreception impairments by analysing the Gα-deficient mutants.

The manuscript is well written and the results are presented in a clear and concise manner. Nevertheless, the following comments should be addressed to improve the clarity of the manuscript:

Reviewer #3: Zoospores is asexual spores of oomycetes and play important roles for the dispersal of these pathogens. These two flagellated single cells swim toward host through chemotaxis mechanism, which is not fully understand until now. The manuscript entitled “Phytophthora zoospores display klinokinetic behaviour in response to a chemoattractant” monitored swimming trajectories of four Phytophthora species and described swimming behaviour with quantitative parameters such as velocity v, curvature K and moving direction θ. With these parameters, the difference of swimming and chemotaxis behaviour of four Phytophthora species were compared. Moreover, a P. infestans Gα mutant was used to compare swimming behaviour and chemotaxis. The manuscript provided another avenue to understand swimming and chemotaxis behaviour of Phytophthora species, which are suitable for publication in Plos Pathogens.

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Part II – Major Issues: Key Experiments Required for Acceptance

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Reviewer #1: The present study does not take into account some very old literature about the role of calcium and its affect on the frequency of turning. I surmise that a calcium influx mediated via a G coupled receptor almost certainly provides the central intracellular signal to coordinate the same response from different types of chemoreceptors.

Reid, B., Morris, B. W., and Gow, N. A. R. 1995. Calcium-dependent,

genus specific, autoaggregation of zoospores of phytopathogenic fungi.

Exp. Mycol. 19: 202–213.

Donaldson, S. P., and Deacon, J.W. 1993. Changes in motility of Pythium

zoospores induced by calcium and calcium-modulating drugs. Mycol.

Res. 97: 877–883.

Connolly MS, Williams N, Heckman CA, Morris PF. Soybean isoflavones trigger a calcium influx in Phytophthora sojae. Fungal Genet Biol. 1999 Oct;28(1):6-11. doi: 10.1006/fgbi.1999.1148. PMID: 10512667.

Xu, C., & Morris, P. F. (1998). External calcium controls the developmental strategy of Phytophthora sojae cysts. Mycologia, 90(2), 269–275. 10.1080/00275514.1998.12026906

I too have noted that 1mM Ca promotes very straight swimming in response to a chemotactic signal.

Reviewer #2: (No Response)

Reviewer #3: No modifications are required.

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Part III – Minor Issues: Editorial and Data Presentation Modifications

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Reviewer #1: (No Response)

Reviewer #2: 1 Could the authors provide a rationale for not including L-Phenylalanine as a control in the experiment analysing zoospore movement of P. infestans gs2? The inclusion of L-phenylalanine as an additional control could help to further validate that the ability of gs2 to respond to chemotaxis was not affected.

2 In the Results section, lines 153 and 174-177, the manuscript refers to figures as Fig. S2a, b, c. However, the sub-figures do not have the corresponding letter annotations in Fig. S2, and there is no description of the letter annotations in the figure legend.

3. On lines 301 and 303, the manuscript refers to Fig. 3d, but this figure is not included in the submitted material. Could this be a case of mislabelling, and did you intend to refer to Fig. 4d instead?

4 Line 270, the second half of the sentence beginning with "and why" seems disjointed and unclear in its current form. It would benefit from rephrasing to ensure that the reason for oomycete zoospores' tendency to tumble upon collision with a surface is explained in a way that is logically connected to the first part of the sentence.

Reviewer #3: No modifications are required.

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Reviewer #1: Yes: Paul F. Morris

Reviewer #2: No

Reviewer #3: No

 

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Decision Letter - Bart P.H.J. Thomma, Editor, Yuanchao Wang, Editor

Dear MSc Kasteel,

We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript 'Phytophthora zoospores display klinokinetic behaviour in response to a chemoattractant' has been provisionally accepted for publication in PLOS Pathogens.

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Yuanchao Wang

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Bart Thomma

Section Editor

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Michael Malim

Editor-in-Chief

PLOS Pathogens

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Formally Accepted
Acceptance Letter - Bart P.H.J. Thomma, Editor, Yuanchao Wang, Editor

Dear MSc Kasteel,

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