Peer Review History

Original SubmissionSeptember 2, 2025
Decision Letter - Alexandra Tosun, Editor

Dear Dr Le Vance,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript entitled "Teleultrasound in obstetrics: a systematic review and meta-analysis" for consideration by PLOS Medicine. Apologies for the delay in providing you with an initial decision.

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Revision 1
Decision Letter - Alexandra Tosun, Editor

Dear Dr Le Vance,

Many thanks for submitting your manuscript "Teleultrasound in obstetrics: a systematic review and meta-analysis" (PMEDICINE-D-25-03073R1) to PLOS Medicine. The paper has been reviewed by subject experts and a statistician; their comments are included below and can also be accessed here: [LINK]

Please note that we have invited some of the same reviewers who evaluated the previous version of the manuscript and invited new reviewers as well.

As you will see, the reviewers find that the meta-analysis strengthened the paper. However, they still have some additional questions and concerns, e.g. about the inclusion and exclusion of studies. After discussing the paper with the editorial team and an academic editor with relevant expertise, I'm pleased to invite you to revise the paper in response to the reviewers' comments. We plan to send the revised paper to some or all of the original reviewers, and we cannot provide any guarantees at this stage regarding publication.

In addition to these revisions, you may need to complete some formatting changes, which you will receive in a follow up email. A member of our team will be in touch with a set of requests shortly. If you do not receive a separate email within a few days, please assume that checks have been completed, and no additional changes are required.

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We ask that you submit your revision by Nov 24 2025. However, if this deadline is not feasible, please contact me by email, and we can discuss a suitable alternative.

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Best regards,

Alexandra

Alexandra Tosun, PhD

Senior Editor

PLOS Medicine

atosun@plos.org

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Comments from the reviewers:

Reviewer #1: See attachment

Michael Dewey

Reviewer #2: The authors have performed the requested systematic review and meta-analysis, which has strengthened the main conclusions of the revised version of the manuscript. Therefore, I confirm my initial recommendation to accept it.

Reviewer #3: I reviewed manuscript 01111R2 but was not a reviewer of the initial submission of 03073.

Having examined this revised version, it is clear that the authors have addressed the main issues raised previously.

The results, which were formerly lengthy and somewhat repetitive, are now better structured, supported by summary tables and figures, and enriched by the addition of a meta-analysis.

This is the most important improvement, moving the work beyond narrative synthesis to provide quantitative pooled evidence on feasibility, diagnostic accuracy, and non-inferiority compared with conventional ultrasound.

The clinical indications are more clearly delineated, with diagnostic accuracy now stratified by anatomical structure and indication.

Risk of bias assessments, previously relegated to supplementary materials, are integrated into the main text, which strengthens the critical appraisal.

The discussion has also been broadened to include ethical, regulatory, and equity considerations, with greater attention to barriers such as infrastructure, digital literacy, and social determinants of uptake.

The roadmap for future research is more specific and operational, identifying methodological standards and clinically relevant outcomes.

Some limitations remain, especially the reliance on studies of low methodological quality and a still somewhat superficial treatment of ethical and regulatory issues, but overall the manuscript now represents a rigorous and substantially improved contribution.

It is the most comprehensive and quantitatively informed review to date on obstetric teleultrasound and is in my view suitable for publication once minor refinements are made.

Reviewer #4: The authors seek to perform a review to evaluate if teleultrasound is feasible, acceptable, diagnostically accurate and cost effective for antenatal care.

Main concern: Of the 5781 papers screened, 126 full texts were reviewed, and 61 studies were selected for inclusion. I am impressed with the number of articles that have been left out and that this process has not been performed adequately. For example, looking at Table S4, I found the work by Toscano et al "69 Testing a telediagnostic obstetric ultrasound system without a trained sonographer in a low-resource Peruvian clinic". This work was left out since it was a conference abstract. However, there is a full text article appears that can be found in:

Toscano, Marika, et al. "Testing telediagnostic obstetric ultrasound in Peru: a new horizon in expanding access to prenatal ultrasound." BMC Pregnancy and Childbirth 21.1 (2021): 328.

Furthermore, this article appears in other reviews about the same topic, including Kariman et al, a work which is cited as [3] in references of this submission. I strongly suggest the authors validate thoroughly that their inclusion/exclusion criteria have been followed correctly.

The article presents an adequate organization, presenting a table with the articles considered for the results and discussion of each section. Something that I found odd is that at the beginning of each section, the authors referenced all the considered articles. However, this list of references does not match exactly the articles presented in the table of that section. For instance, in Section 3.4.5 Three- and four-dimensional ultrasound, they mentioned they investigated 5 studies [23,39,52,60,63]. However, in Table 6, they show studies [22,23,39,52,60,63]. Same thing happens in Section 3.4.7 Low- and middle-income countries. At the beginning of the Section, they introduced studies [35,38,47,49,76,78]. However, the Table 8 shows [37,38,47,49,76,78]. Please, verify.

In addition, I believe it is also important to differentiate the different clinical applications of tele-ultrasound in antenatal care. Some of the works presented aim to give a final diagnosis, whereas others target an initial screening and adequate referral to the hospital. This will pose different requirements in equipment, connectivity, operator training, etc. Could this explain your wide range of requirements showed in equipment cost or bandwidth needed? Could this also affect the discussion of image quality?

Regarding equipment and besides the previous point, it would be important to weight the year of publication and accessibility (including cost) of the equipment in the analysis. Technology and equipment have evolved considerably from 1995 to 2024. Same consideration should be considered for bandwidth.

Regarding operator training and required skills in LMICs, besides the previous point of the target medical application, it might also be interesting to add a comment about the use of AI complementing blind sweeps for widespread use. Especially, since there is a good part of the discussion focused on this point.

Any attachments provided with reviews can be seen via the following link: [LINK]

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Submitted filename: levance.pdf
Revision 2

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Submitted filename: Response to reviewers.docx
Decision Letter - Alexandra Tosun, Editor

Dear Dr. Le Vance,

Thank you very much for re-submitting your manuscript "Teleultrasound in obstetrics: a systematic review and meta-analysis" (PMEDICINE-D-25-03073R2) for review by PLOS Medicine.

Thank you for your detailed response to the reviewers' and editors’ comments. I have discussed the paper with my colleagues, and it has also been seen again by two of the original reviewers. The changes made to the paper were satisfactory to the reviewers. As such, we intend to accept the paper for publication, pending your attention to the editors' comments below in a further revision. When submitting your revised paper, please once again include a detailed point-by-point response to the editorial comments. The remaining issues that need to be addressed are listed at the end of this email.

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Alexandra Tosun, PhD

Senior Editor

PLOS Medicine

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Comments from Reviewers:

Reviewer #1: The authors have addressed all my points.

Michael Dewey

Reviewer #4: Authors have addressed all my previous comments.

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Requests from Editors:

As discussed via email, please update your searches to within six months of submission. We strongly encourage you to include all 2025 studies that meet your inclusion/exclusion criteria.

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* “on a wide range of clinical outcomes” – We find this rather vague and suggest that you specify or mention a few examples, at least.

* “Identifying fetal and placental structures were frequently high using teleultrasound” – please revise for clarity.

METHODS AND RESULTS

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* “Four studies assessed in the first trimester, five in the second trimester, four in the third trimester, three in the first and second trimesters, 16 in the second and third trimesters, 11 in all trimesters and 20 did not disclose.” – is there a specific reason you do not cite the relevant studies here as done in the text before and after?

* Figure 7: Please note that the figure appears to be cut-off at the bottom.

* “Meta-analysis of identification rates between teleultrasound and the reference standard were available in a select number of studies for a subset of fetal and placental structures (Figure 7).” – It would be useful to mention that (only) two studies were included for meta-analysis for each subgroup.

* “Very low bandwidths (<284 Kb/s) demonstrated significantly worse image quality..” – were these statistically significant?

* “with more recent studies demonstrating a reduction in implementation cost of $10,355 - €19,356 [29,85].” – We find that presenting a range that switches between currencies is not ideal. Please revise.

DISCUSSION

* Please remove the 'conclusions' subheading from the discussion. Please also remove any other subheadings from the discussion.

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Revision 3

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Submitted filename: Response to reviewers v2.docx
Decision Letter - Alexandra Tosun, Editor

Dear Dr Le Vance,

On behalf of my colleagues and the Academic Editor, Jennifer Elizabeth Jardine, I am pleased to inform you that we have agreed to publish your manuscript "Teleultrasound in obstetrics: a systematic review and meta-analysis" (PMEDICINE-D-25-03073R3) in PLOS Medicine.

I appreciate your thorough responses to the reviewers' and editors' comments throughout the editorial process. We look forward to publishing your manuscript, and editorially there are only two remaining points that should be addressed prior to publication. We will carefully check whether the changes have been made. If you have any questions or concerns regarding these final requests, please feel free to contact me at atosun@plos.org.

Please see below the minor points that we request you respond to:

For further transparency, we suggest the following changes to the Abstract:

*Please change to: “Overall meta-analysis demonstrated teleultrasound is non-inferior for identifying anatomical structures versus the reference standard RR 1.02 (95% CI [1.00,1.03]; n= 2 studies).”

*Please change to: “Pooled diagnostic accuracy demonstrated excellent performance, with an AUC of 0.93 (n=8 studies).”

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Sincerely,

Alexandra Tosun, PhD

Senior Editor

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