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| Original SubmissionOctober 29, 2025 |
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IBAS: Interaction-bridged association studies discovering novel genes underlying complex traits PLOS Computational Biology Dear Dr. Wang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS Computational Biology. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS Computational Biology's publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 10 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at ploscompbiol@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pcompbiol/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. 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Reviewer #1: Aiming to account for higher-order interactions of genes, the authors proposed IBAS (Interaction-Bridged Association Study), “a general framework that incorporates interaction patterns into association mapping” as a new TWAS method. Numerical comparisons with some existing methods and application to WTCCC GWAS data showed some advantages of the proposed method. The proposed method has potential to be useful in practice. Main comments. 1. As stated in the abstract, the authors proposed “a general framework that incorporates interaction patterns into association mapping”. More specifically, some components, e.g. PCs, of the expression levels of a set of functionally related genes (taken form GO or KEGG etc) are associated with SNPs; the association parameter estimates are used as weights to form a kernel to test the association between the SNPs and an outcome. My main question is: would the authors show both theoretically and empirically how “interaction patterns” of the genes are in indeed incorporated into the proposed analysis (though for example use of PCs)? 2. The authors' view of TWAS, as demonstrated in a series of their publications, is to use gene expression data to select or weight SNPs, then conduct SNPs-outcome association testing (e.g. by a kernel method). This view is interesting and not wrong, but it is indeed different from the purpose of the mainstream TWAS: either for detecting causal genes to the outcome (in the framework of instrument variable regression) or for associating the genetically regulated gene expression (GReX) with the outcome. It would help the reader if the authors can state this difference clearly. 3. Since the old and much smaller WTCCC GWAS data were used in the application while the authors claim that their proposed IBAS is more powerful, could the authors use the results from some new and larger GWAS to demonstrate that indeed some of their unique discoveries are likely true positives? Minor comments: Some notations or descriptions are not clear. Here are a few examples: 1. Is the same y used in eq (1) to represent an “interaction component in IBAS” and the outcome trait in eq (2)? 2. Eq (2): should y be centered at its sample mean (or generally its mean under H0)? 3. Section “Other Methods compared to IBAS”: are PrediXcan and kTWAS applied to a set of genes (as IBAS), instead of one gene? If so, how? Please write down your models explicitly. Reviewer #2: This manuscript introduces the IBAS (Interaction-Bridged Association Study) method as an improvement over traditional TWAS, emphasizing the incorporation of gene interaction patterns into genotype–phenotype association analysis. The overall concept is innovative, but the methodological details, simulation design, and comparative experiments require further refinement. Below are my specific suggestions: Major Comments 1. In the Methods section, the authors present several formulas (e.g., X, y, W) but do not specify the dimensionality of each matrix. This omission makes it difficult for readers to follow the correspondence between sample size, gene number, and SNP number. I recommend explicitly annotating dimensions in the formulas to improve clarity. 2. In IBAS, each pathway generates a set of SNP weights, but the manuscript does not clearly specify how these weights are integrated into a meta-weight. I recommend presenting explicit formulas for different strategies, such as coefficient-based averaging or p-value based Fisher combination, and evaluating their performance in simulations or real data. 3. The current simulation only perturbs expression matrices under GTEx genotypes but lacks validation of statistical properties. I recommend adding analyses such as: Checking whether null p-values follow a Uniform[0,1] distribution. Plotting ROC curves to compare sensitivity and specificity of IBAS vs other methods. Computing type I error rates to ensure proper error control under the null. 4. The manuscript only compares IBAS with PrediXcan, which is insufficient. I recommend including additional benchmarks such as: S-PrediXcan / MetaXcan: summary-statistics-based TWAS methods. FUSION: another summary-level TWAS framework. MAGMA: gene-set analysis method independent of eQTL. SKAT-O: kernel-based gene-level association test. 5. In the dimensionality reduction of pathway expression matrices, the manuscript applies PCA but does not specify how many principal components are retained. The authors should provide a clear criterion for PCA dimensionality selection (e.g., cumulative variance explained ≥ 80% or a fixed number of top components) and evaluate the impact of different choices on results. Moreover, the manuscript also mentions alternative methods such as UMAP and t-SNE, which do not rely on variance explained. Therefore, it is even more important to clarify parameter selection strategies (e.g., number of neighbors and minimum distance for UMAP, perplexity for t-SNE) and assess robustness under different parameter settings. This would improve methodological transparency and reproducibility. 6. The manuscript consistently uses blood eQTL across all diseases, but certain diseases (e.g., Crohn’s disease, Rheumatoid arthritis, Type 1 diabetes) may require tissue-specific eQTL (e.g., gut, synovium, pancreas). The authors should justify tissue choice and, where possible, incorporate GTEx tissue-specific data. Minor Comments 1. The authors emphasize the importance of gene interaction patterns in disease mechanisms, but the manuscript does not provide biological interpretation of the dimensionality reduction results. For example, PCA loadings can reveal which genes contribute most to interaction components. I recommend presenting gene loadings in supplementary materials and linking them to known pathway functions. 2. In Figure 4, the overlap of significant genes across methods is very limited. The authors should explain this phenomenon. I suspect it is due to the relatively small genotype sample size (GTEx ~1000 individuals, WTCCC ~5000 samples per disease). Larger datasets such as UK Biobank (>400,000 individuals) should be tested to validate robustness. 3. The manuscript does not report the computational complexity of IBAS. I recommend that the authors provide both a time complexity analysis and actual runtime results, and compare them with other methods such as TWAS and MAGMA. Reviewer #3: In this paper, Kossina et al. developed IBAS (Interaction-Bridged Association Study), a general framework that incorporates interaction patterns into association mapping without exhaustive testing. IBAS employs statistical learning to derive low-dimensional representations of pathway-level interactions from transcriptomic data, which then serve as mediators in genotype–phenotype association tests. Overall the idea is interesting and reasonable. I have the following questions. The authors kept saying that their IBAS method is able to capture interaction effects within the pathway. I don’t understand why they are saying this. Is interaction indicate gene-gene interaction? If so, why and how? The intermediate phenotypes, also known as endophenotypes in literature, are principal components (PCs) if using PCA, or some transformed gene expression measures if using t-SNE or UMAP. I don’t think these phenotypes can be interpreted as interactions. The authors need to justify their claim using specific example (can be artificial example) or drop the claim if they are unable to do so. I am able to follow the method description up to the point that a gene can be associated with a principal component for the gene expression matrix for a pathway. But from that point, how to connect to a phenotype is confusing. Since there are thousands of pathways. For each gene, there will be hundreds or thousands of association signals, one for each pathway. Not mentioning multiple “interaction components” within each pathway. The authors need to describe how to integrate association signals to calculate association with a phenotype. I am also confused about what is the basic element for association in IBAS. For GWAS, association is calculated at the SNP level. For TWAS, association is calculated at the gene level. I wonder what about IBAS? Can you show a Manhattan plot for IBAS? This will clarify lots of confusion. Related to the above points, how do you comparison performance between TWAS and IBAS? I do not quite get the points the authors are trying to make in Figures 2,3 and 4. How to connect associational signals of “interaction components” to genes? I felt that the Discussion section was not fully developed. The pros and cons of the IBAS method should be discussed at least. Lines 277-278, “Since IBAS works best if there is a high degree of overlap between the GWAS and reference datasets when considering genotypes”. I do not understand what does “overlap” means here? Line 271, it says GWAS “contains samples from 670 individuals”. But in line 276, “Genotype data for 838 individuals and 43,066,422 SNPs were present in the raw VCF data.” This is contradictory. ********** Have the authors made all data and (if applicable) computational code underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data and code underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data and code should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data or code —e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. 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PCOMPBIOL-D-25-02242R1 IBAS: Interaction-bridged association studies discovering novel genes underlying complex traits PLOS Computational Biology Dear Dr. Zhang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS Computational Biology. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS Computational Biology's publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 02 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at ploscompbiol@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pcompbiol/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. 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Kind regards, Can Yang Section Editor PLOS Computational Biology Ilya Ioshikhes Section Editor PLOS Computational Biology Note: If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Reviewer #1: This is one of the most responsive revisions I have seen! A huge “thank you” to the authors! I am satisfied and pleased with the revision! I also just realize that what the authors mean by “gene-gene interaction” is coordinated or co-regulated gene expression, or simply co-expression, instead of typical statistical “interaction” or genetic “epistasis” that I thought it meant; if so, then why dimension reduction techniques like PCA work is more obvious; that’s also why “meta-genes” or “modules” are used in other related techniques/papers. I don’t want to cause more troubles, but feel that if it is possible that the authors can clarify this at the beginning, it would make it much easier to understand; I leave it to the authors to decide. Reviewer #2: I thank the authors for the careful revision. The new Supplementary Note S1, the Type I error analysis, the tissue-specific analyses, the dbGaP replication, and the additional benchmarks together represent a clear improvement, and most of my original concerns have been addressed. Two small points remain. 1. Supplementary Note S1 elegantly shows that PCA recovers block-correlated covariance, i.e., co-expression structure. This is distinct from gene–gene interaction in the statistical-genetics sense. I suggest either softening the terminology throughout to "coordinated activity" or "co-expression structure", or acknowledging this scope in the Introduction. 2. Fig. 3 demonstrates stability under perturbation, but a method that detects nothing would also be perfectly stable. Could the authors add a simulation in which a known set of causal genes is planted within a pathway, and report the empirical power (proportion of these recovered) for IBAS vs. competitors at a fixed significance level? Minor follow-up: A small sensitivity check on the number of retained PCs (e.g., K ∈ {5, 10, 20} on one cohort) would help substantiate the Discussion's claim that IBAS is "robust to reasonable choices of dimensionality", since all current results use K = 10. Reviewer #3: The authors have done an outstanding job revising their paper. All my concerns have been addressed. Great job. ********** Have the authors made all data and (if applicable) computational code underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data and code underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data and code should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data or code —e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. 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