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-->-->PCOMPBIOL-D-26-00472 Successful Reinforcement History Suppresses Explicit and Implicit Error Corrections PLOS Computational Biology Dear Dr. Buggeln, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS Computational Biology. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS Computational Biology's publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 29 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at ploscompbiol@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pcompbiol/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. 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Three behavioral experiments build on each other to show, collectively, that longer-term reinforcement history seems to preferentially impact explicit error corrections (experiments 1 and 2), while the immediate effect of reinforcement feedback signaling the absence of task error, despite visual feedback of a motor error, can reduce implicit corrections (experiment 3). In addition to behavioral results, the authors include an analysis using models of hypothesized potential mechanisms underlying the observed behavior. This model analysis shows that two candidate models can approximate the observed behavior. Specifically, a model that accounts for the expected value of actions can account for the modulation of explicit error corrections, while an error-based learning model that accounts for the presence of a task error can account for the modulation of implicit corrections. In both cases, the successful models outperformed alternative models/hypothesized mechanisms. Overall, I found the paper interesting and think it adds to the body of literature attempting to understand the interaction(s) between reinforcement and supervised learning systems. Despite these strengths, I have some concerns/questions that I would like to see addressed before the manuscript is published. My specific comments are below. 1. The mechanistic models and interpretation of the behavioral results in Experiments 1 and 2 make assumptions about the expected value of actions – i.e., that the actions of the 80% group would have a higher expected value than those of the 20% group. However, expected values are typically learned over time, and the analysis of error clamp trials appears to collapse all trials into a single subject mean. If I am correct, participants were not exposed to the probabilistic reinforcement during baseline, so it is not clear that participants would have formed an estimate of expected value until later in the task. Can the authors confirm whether performance was stable over time in their task, and, if so, discuss how this reconciles with typical theories of expected value? 2. Relatedly, did all participants reliably reach within the reward region in Experiments 1 and 2? For example, were there any participants in the 80% group who missed the reward region on enough trials to have had an impact on the total reinforcement rate? 3. For all experiments, the authors report corrections in a single direction (i.e., more positive is larger), but the methods state that the direction of the error clamp was counterbalanced across trials. Am I correct in assuming the authors flipped one of the error-clamp conditions? Given that they are measuring the response to vector error clamp feedback, it is important to ensure that corrections are made in the direction countering the imposed errors; otherwise, it is difficult to be sure that participants were responding to the error at all. Could the authors either clarify how their error corrections are reported or include an analysis of corrections relative to the error direction? 4. In Experiments 1 and 2, why was the baseline variability, which was used to set the width of the reward region, calculated using a mix of trials with and without visual feedback (20 and 20, if I am interpreting the methods correctly)? 5. Were the short history of reward clamp conditions in Experiments 1 and 2 counterbalanced across trials within each reinforcement group? Or did each group get a fixed short-history condition? 6. For Experiment 3, can the authors explain the choice to provide reinforcement feedback whenever participants hit the target in the larger+reinforcement condition, but only provide punishment when participants were in the reward region in the small+punishment condition? How frequently did participants miss the target by reaching outside the reward region in the small+punishment condition? I am concerned that inconsistent punishment feedback could have led participants to discount or ignore it, which could explain the lack of modulation observed in that condition (rather than it resulting from differential processing of reward versus punishment). 7. It is not totally clear how the authors think the results and top-performing models from the three experiments presented here go together. In Experiments 1 and 2, the short-term history of reward is nested within the long-term history. That is, to have a reward prediction error, the system must have some knowledge of the reward history. In Experiment 3, however, the immediate history of reward is treated as something independent of any representation of the reward history. Could the authors clarify their thinking about this in the discussion, or when justifying the design of Experiment 3? 8. The authors’ interpretation of their results seems to treat explicit and implicit error corrections as non-overlapping, but it is likely that both correction processes operate together to drive behavior in daily life. I am wondering whether the authors could discuss the ways their results elucidate the interaction between explicit and implicit corrections. I think this issue is particularly relevant when interpreting the result of Experiment 3, which included a manipulation of task errors. The authors point out that task errors are considered by some to be reinforcement signals, but task errors are also thought to be a significant driver of explicit corrections (and that the link to reinforcement learning is via explicit mechanisms). 9. I noticed a few typographical errors: Page 2, line 55, should be modulates Page 14, line 242, either “corrected” or “to” is incorrect here Page 26, line 531, missing “subjects” Reviewer #2: In the article “Successful reinforcement history suppresses explicit and implicit error corrections,” the authors look to determine the impact of reinforcement history on explicit (cognitive) and implicit (involuntary) motor corrections. Three experiments were conducted in which the authors compared two competing hypotheses: (1) reward prediction errors (surprise) modulate explicit and implicit error corrections and (2) expected value (average reward) modulates explicit and implicit error corrections. Results, experimental behaviour and computational modeling, suggest that expected value modulates explicit error corrections. An immediate history of reinforcement modulates implicit error corrections. Together, results indicate that a successful reinforcement history suppress explicit and implicit error corrections. The authors ask an interesting question, and I appreciate the clever methodology adapted to manipulate reward prediction errors and expected value. Below I outline several questions, mainly dealing with clarification around the methodology. The word reinforcement is used to refer to movement outcome (success or failure), as well as additional extrinsic feedback. How do these reinforcement sources interact? To clarify methodology: 1. Do participants see cursor feedback throughout the reach? If not, how does this influence sensory prediction errors and underlying implicit corrections? 2. Participants were to move through the target. If they reached through a reward zone, they then had a 20% or 80% chance of receiving feedback on each trial in Experiments 1 and 2. Did this ensure that participants received feedback on 2 and 8 of the 10 initial trials? 3. In the error clamp trials (t-3 and t-2), did the cursor feedback go through the target? What happened on trial (t-2) if reinforcement feedback was not provided? 4. In Figure caption 1 it indicates that reinforcement feedback was not contingent on performance. Is this the case? Previous text indicated that feedback was only provided if reaches were through a reward region. 5. Can the reinforcement and punishment feedback be considered equivalent? Is the reinforcement feedback processed as rewarding as the punishment feedback is processed as punishing? 6. Was the target shown before the go signal? If so, how did this long preparation time influence the engagement of explicit/implicit processes? 7. Was there only 1 target? How does use-dependent error corrections/learning factor into the current results? Is the factor of the short-history of reinforcement clamps factored into the results (RC1 versus RC2)? Was the factor of block (i.e., time) considered in the current results? Previous research has shown early adjustments in reaches are typically driven by explicit processes, with implicit contributions increasing over trials. Conclusions drawn (e.g., lines 204-206; 289-291), assume that explicit and implicit corrections are independent. Research has shown that there are multiple explicit and implicit processes, and that these processes may interact (see Weightman et al., 2022; Larssen and Hodges, 2023). Minor Line 2: Does a basketball player expect to make many shots and is a miss surprising? Average shooting percentage, even for professionals, is less than 50%, so technically players miss more shots than they make. Line 64: missing a word; “ …, but could have been through …” Line 74: please clarify reward valence. Figure caption 1: missing the word ‘to’; “from the 13th to 4th trial prior to an error correction …” Figure caption 1: the phrase ‘participants were shown an error clamp (t-1) is unclear. Did participants not experience an error clamp trial as they reached? Line 210: the phrase “immediate history that could be provided on the same trial as the error clamp” is confusing. Are you referring to the extrinsic reinforcement/punishment feedback being provided on trial (t-1) with the error clamp? Line 318: missing the word ‘a’; “… but they did find a difference …” Line 321: How gradients of feedback? Line 478: How were participants educated on explicit re-aiming strategies? What were they told re the error clamp trials? Line 507: Is the last trial of every block trial (t-1) or trial (t)? Line 547: additional word ‘in’; “… twice within a block …” ********** Have the authors made all data and (if applicable) computational code underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? 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Dear Mr. Buggeln, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript 'Successful Reinforcement History Suppresses Explicit and Implicit Error Corrections' has been provisionally accepted for publication in PLOS Computational Biology, provided that you correct and clarify the sentences pointed out by the reviewers. Before your manuscript can be formally accepted you will need to complete some formatting changes, which you will receive in a follow up email. A member of our team will be in touch with a set of requests. Please note that your manuscript will not be scheduled for publication until you have made the required changes, so a swift response is appreciated. IMPORTANT: The editorial review process is now complete. PLOS will only permit corrections to spelling, formatting or significant scientific errors from this point onwards. Requests for major changes, or any which affect the scientific understanding of your work, will cause delays to the publication date of your manuscript. Should you, your institution's press office or the journal office choose to press release your paper, you will automatically be opted out of early publication. We ask that you notify us now if you or your institution is planning to press release the article. All press must be co-ordinated with PLOS. Thank you again for supporting Open Access publishing; we are looking forward to publishing your work in PLOS Computational Biology. Best regards, Bastien Blain Academic Editor PLOS Computational Biology Daniele Marinazzo Section Editor PLOS Computational Biology *********************************************************** Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Authors: Please note here if the review is uploaded as an attachment. Reviewer #1: The authors have satisfactorily revised the manuscript. I have only very minor comments on typographical and grammatical errors that likely resulted from adding text. Line 155 - missing an "s" on "participant" Line 200 - "nor" should be "or" Lines 216-18 - Something is not right about the sentence beginning "Our behavioral..." Line 236 - Missing a comma Reviewer #2: This is my second review of the article “Successful reinforcement history suppresses explicit and implicit error corrections.” I appreciate the effort the authors have taken to address the previous round of questions/comments raised by myself and the other reviewer. Below, I indicate lines of text that could be clarified for the reader. Lines 25-28: Despite knowledge that key reinforcement computations depend on history,1,2 it is unclear how reinforcement history specifically interacts with error corrections. Understanding these processes’ interactions and temporal dynamics is not just a theoretical exercise, but can generate neurorehabilitation improvements. It is unclear which processes are being referred to with respect to ‘processes’ interactions’. I am not sure I would categorize reinforcement history as a process. Lines 39-41: Reinforcement feedback independently regulates movement variability,29–32 recalibrates the sensorimotor system,33 and drives plasticity changes in the motor cortex. The words plasticity and change are not needed. Lines 106-108: We experimentally controlled the error size to assess participants’ error corrections [i.e., t] on the next trial. I would place [i.e., t] at the end of the sentence, as t does not refer to error corrections; “… on the next trial [i.e., t].” Lines 164-166: We confirmed that participants in the 20% and 80% Reinforcement group had different actual reward rates (18.35% vs. 67.60%, p <0.001). It would be good to indicate the response rates associated with each group (e.g., by putting in the word ‘respectively’). This is also found at Lines 202-204. Lines 269-271: Fig. 4B shows a representative participant illustrating how the feedback conditions were pseudorandomized and how participants responded to error clamps. It would be good to indicate that this figure shows data – even what type of data – for a representative participant. Lines 316-317: Our experiments and models suggest that a higher expected value decreases explicit error corrections. This sentence is rather vague. It would be good to indicate what is being referred to with respect to higher expected value. Lines 516-519: Endpoint feedback has been used effectively to induce implicit and explicit error corrections.7,8,15,81 Endpoint feedback also prevents feedback error corrections, which ensures our metrics were measuring feedforward motor commands. Given the nature of your task and endpoint feedback, I assume that the explicit and implicit corrections you are referring to are on the next trial (or subsequent trials). It would be good to specify that these are offline corrections. The term ‘online’ could also be used in the second sentence to refer to feedback-based corrections during a current trial. Lines 588-592: The explicit process can compensate with greater magnitude and more quickly to large errors. Also, implicit corrections peak at error sensitivity at smaller error sizes.85 These lines are difficult to follow. I assume the comparison in the first sentence is to the implicit process. I am not sure what is meant by ‘peak at error sensitivity at smaller error sizes.’ ********** Have the authors made all data and (if applicable) computational code underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data and code underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data and code should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data or code —e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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