Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 17, 2025 |
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Dear Dr. Akimoto, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Dear Authors, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. We have now received evaluations from two independent expert reviewers, and I am pleased to say that both found genuine merit in your work. Your study addresses a timely and specific question and both reviewers appreciated the clarity of your hypotheses, the appropriateness of the fNIRS methodology, and the transparency and caution with which you interpret your findings. On the basis of these reviews, I am inviting you to submit a Major Revision. I am confident that the concerns raised are addressable and that a revised manuscript has strong potential for publication. The reviewers' main points can be grouped around three themes: First, both reviewers raised the question of sample size and statistical power. Given that some conditions include as few as 6–7 infants, it is difficult to determine with confidence whether the developmental difference observed between 5- and 9-month-olds reflects a genuine effect. The reviewers suggest complementing the current analyses with Bayesian approaches, which would help quantify the strength of evidence more informatively than null hypothesis testing alone under these conditions. Second, the reviewers felt that the manuscript would benefit from a stronger theoretical grounding. In the introduction, a deeper engagement with the literature on hemispheric asymmetries and native/non-native speech perception is encouraged. In the discussion, the broader significance of the findings could be more explicitly articulated. Third, the reviewers identified several methodological details that should be specified more clearly for reproducibility purposes, including participant inclusion criteria, stimulus characteristics, session parameters, and the completeness of the OSF repository. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 11 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The study investigated infants' speech perception of a /r/ -/l/ vs /b/-/g/ contrast and explored the question of asymmetrical speech processing. Hereby, the authors tested two groups of infants, 5-month-olds and 9-month-olds, in a behavioural and fNIRS experimental setting. While behaviourally the results showed no asymmetrical perception of the /r/-/l/ contrast, the authors reported asymmetries in the 5 month-olds for the /l/- /r/ (with lower oxy-Hb in the direction from /r/ to /l/ in the right hemisphere) and /b/-/g/ (with lower oxy-Hb in the direction from /g/ to /b/ in the right hemisphere). No asymmetries were found in the group of 9-month-old infants The study presents valuable insights into Japanese infants' perception of non-native speech sounds, contributing to our understanding of speech perception. Introduction: 1. The introduction provides a foundation but could benefit from a more detailed discussion of the theoretical aspects for/ against asymmetrical perception. 2. Also I am missing a deeper discussion on the brain imaging studies on asymmetries and the relation to native/nonnative perception and the lateralisation in the brain 3. Please add a justification for the two ages tested in the current study The distinction between the explorative analysis and the other behavioural and nirs experiment is not clear to me. What was the difference and why were the two groups separated? What is the difference? First, I thought it was the age, because in the behavioural experiment, only the 5-month-olds were reported, but then also the 5-month-olds were mentioned as part of the exploratory analysis. Statistical analyses: Were the looking times normally distributed? Please consider whether log transforms might be necessary from a statistical point of view, and whether the assumption of running ANOVAs (similarly, for the NIRS analysis and the used t-tests) holds true. Behavioural results: why would it be the case that the interstimulus interval (and the difference between the 5mo and 9mo) is relevant for the direction of the /b/-/g/ contrast but not for the /l/-/r/ contrast? Fnirs analysis: why was only the right hemisphere analysed? Discussion: The authors mention that the stimuli and the greater acoustic variation might be one reason why 5-month-olds cannot discriminate the /r/-/l/ contrast. Did the authors conduct some acoustic analyses for comparison? The discussion ties together key findings, but could be strengthened by a deeper theoretical foundation. Emphasising why these findings are important beyond simply filling a gap in the literature would enhance the study’s broader relevance. Reviewer #2: This exploratory study investigates the behavioral responses and neural basis of directional asymmetry in speech sound discrimination by measuring NIRS responses in 5- and 9-month-old infants to /la–ra/ and /ba–ga/ contrasts. The hypotheses are clearly grounded in prior literature and well motivated. Although the results are only partially consistent with previous findings, they are presented in a transparent and accessible manner. I also appreciate the authors’ appropriately cautious interpretation of the findings, particularly in light of the relatively small sample sizes and the likely limited statistical power. Overall, I see some value in this work. The manuscript is well structured, identifies a specific gap (the neural basis of directional asymmetry) and addresses it using an appropriate method alongside a developmental comparison. Studies of this kind are particularly valuable, and empirical contributions in this area are very much welcomed, despite inherent difficulties. Having said that, I have several concerns, especially regarding methodological specifications that could be addressed to strengthen the manuscript. 1. A major concern relates to the limited number of participants per condition, which raises questions about the robustness and interpretability of the findings. The authors themselves acknowledge this limitation in the conclusion (“Given the exploratory nature of this study, further investigations with larger sample sizes are needed…”), which is appropriate. However, this also makes it somewhat unclear what can be reliably inferred from the present data. In its current form, the study provides suggestive rather than conclusive evidence regarding the directional asymmetry. One of the more interesting aspects of the results is the apparent developmental difference, with effects observed in 5-month-olds but not in 9-month-olds. However, it is difficult to determine whether this reflects a genuine developmental change or is instead driven by limited power and/or methodological differences across age groups. The ambiguity of the behavioral results and the sample sizes (as few as 6 or 7 infants in some cases) further complicates the interpretation of the findings. Given the practical constraints of infant research, it may not be feasible to substantially increase the sample size, which would be ideal. Alternatively, the authors should consider complementing their analyses with Bayesian approaches, which may help quantify the strength of evidence for (or against) the presence of effects, also regarding the developmental comparison. This could provide a more informative assessment than relying solely on null hypothesis significance testing under conditions of limited power. 2. For reproducibility purposes and to facilitate future comparisons, it would be valuable to clearly specify some methodological aspects: a. Beyond standard hearing screening, did the authors adopted any inclusion criteria regarding language exposure (e.g., monolingual Japanese environment)? b. On p. 8, when reporting on the stimuli the authors state: “After the noisy or atypical tokens were excluded, the third formant frequency transitions of /la/ and /ra/ tokens were visually checked via Praat (Phonetic Sciences, University of Amsterdam, the Netherlands), as it was the critical parameter to distinguish /l/ and /r/.” Could you please specify what was exactly seen for the transitions? c. p. 10 “The test phase began when the average looking time in the last four habituation trials reached <65% of that in the first four habituation trials or when 28 trials were completed.” Please specify the number of participants that met one and the other criterion. d. p. 12: “Approximately half of the infants participated in this experiment following another NIRS study.” Please clarify whether these infants were evenly distributed across the two age groups or belonged specifically to either the 5-month-old or the 9-month-old group. e. P. 13. The authors state that “infants exhibited similar response patterns regardless of whether they had participated in the other NIRS experiment” and therefore the data were analyzed together. It would be important to clarify how this equivalence was assessed. Was this conclusion based on visual inspection of the data, or was it formally tested statistically? If statistical analyses were conducted, these should be explicitly reported. f. P. 13 “…each infant participated in two fNIRS sessions”. Please clarify the length of each session and the time interval between these sessions. Additionally, were any analyses conducted to test for session order or carryover effects (e.g., comparing first vs. second session responses)? g. P. 16 “ Infants with <5 available ROI channels (defined as ≥3 available trials) in any session were excluded. Please specify how many participants were excluded for this reason. h. Plot fNIRS and Plot looking time are not available in the OSF page. Lastly, regarding the deactivation found: in order to confirm/disconfirm their interpretation the authors could directly explore whether the responses progressively increase throughout the study in the baseline and/or decrease in oddball periods, by checking the responses in the single trials over time (without averaging them). ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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<p>An exploratory fNIRS study on directional asymmetry in segmental discrimination: lateral–rhotic (/la–ra/) and labial–dorsal (/ba–ga/) contrasts tested in 5- and 9-month-old Japanese infants PONE-D-25-50423R1 Dear Dr. Akimoto, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Federica Cavicchio Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #2: The manuscript has been extensively revised and, in many respects, now reads as a substantially different version. Nevertheless, the new analyses, strengthened theoretical framework, and more developed discussion have clearly improved the paper. I am satisfied that the main concerns have been adequately addressed. Notwithstanding the exploratory nature of the study and its limitations, particularly the relatively small sample size, the authors have produced a substantially improved manuscript that makes a valuable contribution and is worthy of publication. ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #2: Yes: Silvia Benavides-Varela ********** |
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