Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 14, 2026 |
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Sun et al. evaluated the reliability and validity of the Chinese version of the GSAQ. While the study addresses an important topic, there are several methodological concerns regarding the study design. Major comments: 1. The authors propose the use of the GSAQ in primary care settings. However, the study was conducted in a highly specialized clinic. This raises concerns about the generalizability of the findings. In addition, the proposed cut-off values for OSA-, insomnia-, RLS-, and parasomnia-related domains appear to be entirely data-driven and lack external validation. 2. The authors introduce a novel point-based system to quantify the overall burden of sleep disorders. However, the validity of this approach is unclear. For instance, it is questionable whether symptom frequency (e.g., “nearly every day”) carries equivalent clinical weight across different domains, such as OSA versus parasomnias. 3. In Figure 2, 19 patients are reported to have a total GSAQ score of 10. Without prior expertise in sleep medicine, it is unclear how clinicians, particularly in primary care, would interpret or apply this information in practice. Furthermore, the GSAQ was originally developed for patients with periodic limb movements, rather than restless legs syndrome. Therefore, the absence of an association between GSAQ scores and IRLS scores is not unexpected. 4. The authors report a positive correlation between GSAQ scores and AHI. It would strengthen the manuscript to include ROC analyses for the OSA domain (cut-off 3) across different severity thresholds (AHI ≥5, ≥15, and ≥30), as well as for the insomnia domain (cut-off 3) against clinically relevant ISI thresholds (e.g., ISI ≥15). Minor comments: 1. Introduction (line 44), it would be appropriate to cite a recent population-based survey on sleep quality in China (PMID: 42004585) which provides relevant epidemiological context. 2. The manuscript states that ICSD-3 criteria were used for clinical diagnosis. Figure 3 indicates that a small number of patients diagnosed with OSA had AHI <5. Reviewer #2: 1. Methods Translation and cultural adaptationThe authors described forward–back translation but did not provide detailed information on cultural adaptation, cognitive debriefing, expert panel composition, or consensus procedures. Please supplement the full adaptation 流程 following international guidelines (Sousa & Rojjanasrirat, 2011). Sample size justificationThe justifications for EFA (n = 110) and CFA (n = 201) are unclear. The statement “5 times the number of items” is oversimplified. Please provide explicit sample size rationale with references. Validity groupingCase–control definitions and gold-standard diagnostic criteria (ICSD-3) for ROC analysis are not fully specified. Please clarify how patients with and without each sleep disorder were defined. Statistical methods Normality tests were not reported to justify Pearson or Spearman correlation. Cutoff values for CFA fit indices (χ²/df, RMSEA, GFI, IFI, CFI) are not provided with references. Test–retest reliability was not assessed; please clearly state the reason in the limitations. 2. Results Factor structure and item retentionFour factors were extracted, but factor labeling and item loading assignments are inconsistently presented. Items 9 and 10 showed low communality and factor loadings but were retained. Please provide a clearer rationale in the Results section. Tables and figures Table 2 is poorly formatted; please reorganize the correlation matrix for readability. Figure 3 lacks clear axis labels, units, and confidence intervals. Complete factor loadings, communalities, eigenvalues, and variance explained should be reported in full. Scoring and cut-off interpretation The manuscript reports both total score and four subscale scores. Please clarify whether total score or subscale scores are recommended for clinical screening. ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Reliability and validity of the Chinese version of Global Sleep Assessment Questionnaire in adult patients with sleep disorders. PONE-D-26-18319R1 Dear Dr. Dong, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Thomas Penzel Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Thank you for answering all questions and queries. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No ********** |
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