Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 14, 2026 |
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Thank you for stating in your Funding Statement: “The research was partially supported by the MYSpace project (principal investigator Monica Gori), which has received funding from the European Research Council under the European Union’s Horizon 2020 research and innovation program (Grant 948349) and by the Brain and Machines Flagship Programme of the Italian Institute of Technology.” Please provide an amended statement that declares *all* the funding or sources of support (whether external or internal to your organization) received during this study, as detailed online in our guide for authors at http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submit-now. Please also include the statement “There was no additional external funding received for this study.” in your updated Funding Statement. Please include your amended Funding Statement within your cover letter. We will change the online submission form on your behalf. 5. 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Please include captions for your Supporting Information files at the end of your manuscript, and update any in-text citations to match accordingly. Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. 7. If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?-->?> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This study combines a human balance experiment with a neural mass model to examine how visual, proprioceptive, and auditory manipulations affect postural control predictability (Sample Entropy). The behavioral finding that Achilles’ tendon vibration increases CoP entropy is robust. The modeling work is ambitious and valuable, but several methodological and interpretational issues need addressing. N=8 is very small for a repeated-measures design with 3 visual states × 6 auditory/tactile conditions. High risk of Type II errors (false negatives), especially for interactions. Provide a post-hoc power analysis for the main effects observed. Explicitly state in the abstract and discussion that findings are preliminary. Consider using bootstrapped effect size CIs rather than relying solely on p-values. The use of permutation ANOVA is appropriate for small samples, but: The manuscript does not specify whether permutations were within-subjects constrained (i.e., shuffling condition labels within each participant). If not, the test may be invalid for repeated measures. Clarify permutation scheme in Methods → Statistical analysis. The model replicates some behavioral trends (blurred vision → lower entropy) but shows opposite effects for vibration (model: decreased entropy; behavior: increased entropy). The authors interpret this as a “divergence between peripheral and central entropy,” but without direct neural recordings (EEG/fMRI), this remains speculation. Add a dedicated limitations paragraph acknowledging that model-behavior disagreement may indicate missing model components (e.g., spinal or muscle-level dynamics). Show simulated CoP (not just brainstem barycenter) if possible, or explain why brainstem activity must correlate with CoP under all conditions. No behavioral effect of sound is found, but the model shows strong central effects. The conclusion that “dynamic auditory cues may have potential to impact CoP predictability” is speculative without: A control task where auditory cues are behaviorally relevant (e.g., spatial localization task). A more challenging balance task (e.g., Romberg, foam surface). Re-frame as hypothesis-generating, not evidence of a latent effect. “Predictability” is used to mean low Sample Entropy. Define explicitly in the introduction. “Rigid control strategy” (blurred vision) implies stiffness – this is a physiological claim not directly measured. Soften to “less flexible postural dynamics.” Abstract says “first time to our knowledge” – this is fine but verify that no prior neural mass model of postural multisensory integration exists (e.g., work by Kuo, van der Kooij, or Chiba). Reviewer #2: This manuscript reports a methodologically innovative and valuable preliminary study that well meets PLOS ONE’s publication criteria for scientific validity, standard methodology, and incremental academic contribution. The study addresses an important research gap by investigating multisensory integration in postural control using a novel combination of multi-modal sensory perturbations, sample entropy analysis, and neurocomputational modeling. Its key finding—revealing the hidden central modulation of auditory inputs on postural regulation—represents a meaningful addition to the literature. The methodological design is generally rigorous: permutation ANOVA is appropriately adopted for the small sample, and the neural model is reliably validated using the Sensory Organization Test (SOT), showing good logical consistency. This work provides a new integrated approach for evaluating postural control and carries clear translational potential for future research in aging and balance-impaired populations. All concerns raised are minor-to-moderate and fully correctable with targeted revisions; no fatal design flaws or critical scientific issues are present. Major Revision is therefore recommended to further improve methodological transparency, result interpretation, figure quality, and presentation clarity. ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Disentangling Sensory Contributions to Postural Control Regulation Through Sample Entropy and Neural Modeling: a Preliminary Study PONE-D-26-17082R1 Dear Dr. Montagnani, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Yih-Kuen Jan, PhD Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Dear Editor Based on revision paper, i belived that the amendments made by the author are hereby approved. ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Amir Shams, Associate Professor, Sport Sciences Research Institute, Tehran, Iran ********** |
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