Peer Review History
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-->PONE-D-25-66742-->-->Small vertebrate consumption by capuchin monkeys (Sapajus libidinosus): Insights into the human predatory pattern-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Carvalho, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS One. I have received feedback from two expert reviewers, both of whom have requested major revisions to several sections of the manuscript. I encourage you to address their requests and ensure that all your submission materials are complete and available for review. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 09 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: Manuscript PONE-D-25-66742 Title: Small vertebrate consumption by capuchin monkeys (Sapajus libidinosus): Insights into the human predatory pattern Authors: Carvalho, S. and collaborators I am glad to read and revise this well-written manuscript, which presents a robust and reliable database on vertebrate consumption by bearded capuchin monkeys in an ecotonal site in Brazil. Dozens of studies were previously published on this population and study site. Understanding and correlating vertebrate consumption is important due to its contribution to the diet and features linked to behaviour. But here, it is treated or associated with the diet aspects and human predatory patterns. I made some minor comments on the attached document, and here I would like to bring up a few major concerns in order to clarify the manuscript for the readers. Hypothesis #6, Necessity: I believe that this hypothesis is more linked to the absence or reduction of the fruit and invertebrate availability than to environmental factors. We need to think (ecologically) that such variables can indirectly affect the fruit and invertebrate availabilities. So, the better fashion - I think - to test or think is associating with the food resources. The variable influencing diet and behaviour is food items and not rainfall, temperature, and humidity. These can or not influence the appearance of fruit and invertebrates in a given site. Furthermore, to test this hypothesis, perhaps it is better to relate vertebrate consumption with fruit consumption. Thus, the authors could demonstrate the necessity to exploit other food resources. Environmental variables The manuscript works with three variables – rainfall, temperature, and humidity – to potentially explain the variation in vertebrate consumption by capuchins. However, two of these variables (rainfall and humidity) will have an effect on fruit and insect availability. So, I do not believe that both can contribute to the understanding of the findings. Thus, to test Energy shortfall hypothesis I believe that a correlation between vertebrate consumption vs. fruit consumption could help us to understand this hypothesis. The fruit availability is a great measure. But, it does not demonstrate whether the fruit consumption is (positively or negatively) linked to vertebrate intake. However, it needs to know if fruit consumption is associated with vertebrate consumption. Humidity I would like to see a discussion related to the influence of humidity on the probability of an excess zero in the predation events. If such a variable was measured and incorporated in the study (i.e., data analysis) is necessary to discuss it. Figures I do not know the reason, but the figures are not included in the manuscript to review. So, it was not possible to evaluate some scenarios inserted in the text. Reviewer #2: This submission is an analysis of vertebrate predation data from two groups of wild bearded capuchins at a single field site in Brazil. Data were collected periodically over the course of 5 years. The authors aim to test hypotheses concerning the effect of environment, energy needs, and individual skill on vertebrate predation. The authors found that sex, fruit availability and provisioning have a notable effect on predation rates. They highlight the need for study of small vertebrate predation and subsequent faunal assemblages to inform our understanding of the evolution of hominin hunting behavior. I’ll note here that I did not see the six figures mentioned in the results either within the manuscript text (doc or pdf) or as separate files for downloading. Tables and supplementary info were viewable. This omission precluded a complete review of the results and discussion portions of the manuscript. However, I was leaning major revision prior to reading the results, so it did not ultimately impact my accept/revise/reject decision. I recommend figures be included in any revised submission. My major concerns are included below. Introduction: The introduction to this manuscript would benefit from major revisions to tighten it up. While relevant literature is cited, the current structure reads more like an information dump instead of a focused funnel toward the hypotheses. Redundant and overly dense sentences obscure the core theoretically background and the importance of the hypotheses the authors propose to text. Additionally, several references appear to be incorrectly formatted starting in the Into and persisting throughout the manuscript. For instance, line 169 reads "When reviewed by (1),…" where an author name should appear. The paper as whole would benefit from a careful review for these in-text citations. Hypotheses: The authors present a thoughtful hypothesis framework to address the drivers of vertebrate predation in these groups of capuchins. Testing predation rates between provision and non provisioned groups is well conceived. The protein in availability hypothesis is reasonable since predation might be driven by the need for macro and micronutrient needs. Hypothesis 1 and hypothesis 2.1 appeared to be contradictory as written. Hypothesis one predicts that males will have higher vertebrate predation rates because of their increased body mass. Whereas hypothesis 2.1 predicts that females will have higher vertebrate predation rates than adult males because of reproduction and lactation needs. Would a better test of hypothesis 2.1 be that pregnant or lactating females would have increased vertebrate predation rates than non-pregnant non lactating females? Or, and it’s not clear if this possible from that dataset, since you know individuals in the dataset could you compare individuals of similar body mass? Hypotheses 5 and 6 should be presented as a null and alternative. As written these two hypotheses are testing if predation rates are influenced by environmental factors. The authors are then interpreting whether it's opportunistic or necessity. In my opinion this would better be presented as a null with an alternative that environment impacts predation rates and save the discussion of opportunity and necessity in the context of different prey types for the discussion. The last hypothesis concerns food transfer and hunting and wild capuchins. This hypothesis is presented differently than the previous hypotheses, with the hypothesis buried within the text of the paragraph. I wonder if the authors could weave in the discussion of hunting and food transfer among primates in general and capuchin specifically somewhere in the main part of the introduction prior to introducing their hypotheses. Methods: The statistical modeling approach is used here appears appropriate and well justified. Maybe I missed this, but why is rainfall in the conditional model but not in the zero inflation model? Was that an a priori decision or was it from AIC comparisons? I assume, perhaps incorrectly, that humidity and rainfall or rainfall and fruit/insect availability covary somewhat. Did the authors test for correlations among predictors? Could this be addressed with a sentence or two in the methods? Results: With the caveat that I can’t evaluate the results completely without the figures, the results are clearly reported. Discussion: I have no major concerns about the discussion. A minor suggestion is to integrate Table 5 into the results. ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy.--> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] To ensure your figures meet our technical requirements, please review our figure guidelines: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/figures You may also use PLOS’s free figure tool, NAAS, to help you prepare publication quality figures: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/figures#loc-tools-for-figure-preparation. NAAS will assess whether your figures meet our technical requirements by comparing each figure against our figure specifications.
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-->-->PONE-D-25-66742R1-->-->Small vertebrate consumption by capuchin monkeys (Sapajus libidinosus): Insights into the human predatory pattern-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Carvalho, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 16 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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As the corresponding author, your ORCID iD is verified in the submission system and will appear in the published article. PLOS supports the use of ORCID, and we encourage all coauthors to register for an ORCID iD and use it as well. Please encourage your coauthors to verify their ORCID iD within the submission system before final acceptance, as unverified ORCID iDs will not appear in the published article. Only the individual author can complete the verification step; PLOS staff cannot verify ORCID iDs on behalf of authors. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Brittany N. Florkiewicz, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS One Journal Requirements: 1. If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. 2. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: I appreciate your patience, and I sincerely apologize for the delay. We needed to find a new reviewer because one of our previous reviewers was unavailable. Both reviewers, one previous and one new, provided additional minor comments for you to address, which are sent as attachments. Therefore, I would like to request that you address their comments and concerns. Once you have revised the manuscript accordingly, I will review the changes before issuing a final decision on its publication. Thank you for resubmitting your manuscript, and I look forward to reviewing the revised version! [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions --> -->Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.--> Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** -->2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: Dear Dr. Carvalho and coauthors, The manuscript was substantially improved, and all comments/suggestions/cavets were incorporated in this revised version. The text is well-written, the hypotheses are clear, and the methods and data analysis are very well described. The graphics and table are excellent (unfortunately). I don't know why they are not in the previous submission. The discussion is clear and direct, and the authors brought up issues related to the potential absence of data. Excellent job. I made a few comments/suggestions in the manuscript - see attached - but I could recommend that all those suggestions that were included at the end of each paragraph in the discussion can be moved to the last topic. The text is ok, but in almost all paragraphs, some suggestions for new studies were proposed. So, please, and if possible, move it to the last topic (after discussion). I can be wrong, but I believe that is the better place. Congratulations. Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy.--> Reviewer #1: Yes: João Pedro Souza-Alves Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] To ensure your figures meet our technical requirements, please review our figure guidelines: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/figures You may also use PLOS’s free figure tool, NAAS, to help you prepare publication quality figures: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/figures#loc-tools-for-figure-preparation. NAAS will assess whether your figures meet our technical requirements by comparing each figure against our figure specifications. -->-->
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Small vertebrate consumption by capuchin monkeys (Sapajus libidinosus): Insights into the human predatory pattern PONE-D-25-66742R2 Dear Dr. Carvalho, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Brittany N. Florkiewicz, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Thank you for addressing the additional requests from the reviewers. Your manuscript is now suitable for publication, and I believe it will be of great interest to the primate research community. Congratulations! Reviewers' comments: |
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