Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 28, 2026 |
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-->-->PONE-D-26-04456-->-->Learning in a Noisy World: How lucky successes and unlucky failures shape learning consequences-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Jeong, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.--> The reviewers have requested some further clarifications regarding the methodology and analysis. Could you please revise your manuscript to address each of their comments? Please submit your revised manuscript by May 11 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The research question outlined is expected to address a valid academic problem or topic and contribute to the base of knowledge in the field.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses? The manuscript should describe the methods in sufficient detail to prevent undisclosed flexibility in the experimental procedure or analysis pipeline, including sufficient outcome-neutral conditions (e.g. necessary controls, absence of floor or ceiling effects) to test the proposed hypotheses and a statistical power analysis where applicable. As there may be aspects of the methodology and analysis which can only be refined once the work is undertaken, authors should outline potential assumptions and explicitly describe what aspects of the proposed analyses, if any, are exploratory.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** -->3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable?--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception, at the time of publication. The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: the authors offer a nice insight as to how the fundamental attribution error impacts learning processes. it would be useful to have a concluding discussion rather than ending the manuscript abruptly with the final experiment. Reviewer #2: I really enjoyed reading the manuscript ‘Learning in a noisy world: how lucky successes and unlucky failures shape learning consequences.’ I particularly enjoyed how the study is presented in a straightforward manner and provides an original angle on learning from successes and failures by differentiating by the effect of noise on success and failure. Personally, I study learning from successes and failures in a motor learning context which has shaped my remarks to the study. I have a few major concerns with the study rationale and methods that should be addressed before the manuscript is suitable for publication 1) lack of definition of central concepts Two central concepts haven’t been defined properly: learning and information. Learning seems to be implicitly defined as the changing of behavior. In this case, noisy behavior would be interpreted as learning. To dissociate between changes resulting from noise and changes resulting from learning, the maintenance of behavior should be included in the definition of learning. Information might be defined as Shannon Entropy, in which deviations from what is expected provide information. When asking participants in pilot B ‘how informative the message was in learning’ they authors seem to interpret information as evidence on what results in success. Providing clear definitions at the start of the manuscript would help prevent conceptual confusion. In the interpretation of pilot B, the authors should discuss however how the participants might have interpreted the statement that ‘the message was informative in learning.’ The measurement of learning in the planned studies might be updated based on the definition of learning. 2) Lack of justification for recruiting large sample sizes In the planned studies, the authors plan to test 800 participants. Such a large sample size creates a risk of type 1 errors because standard errors become very small. The authors should justify based on a power analysis why they need such a large sample size. 3) Analysis of pilot A I am a bit worried about the analysis of pilot A. The authors mention that average occurrence beliefs were identical between success (32%) and failure (33%) but do not provide information on the statistical test used. If the authors used a two-sample t-test this indeed does not capture within-person differences between the likelihood of lucky success and unlucky failure. However, if the authors used a paired-samples t-test, this does provide information on within-person differences. There is no need to transform the data. I think the analysis on categories rather than continuous data should be replaced with a paired-samples t-test on the continuous data 4) lack of embedding in the reinforcement learning literature Reinforcement learning theory [1] is not described but provides an important additional theoretical perspective to the study. In reinforcement learning, humans learn by repeating successes (learning) and adding noise following failure (exploration). In some models applied to reward-based motor learning, the learning and exploration scale with prediction errors: the difference between the current success and the estimated success rate [2]. These ‘reward-based motor learning’ models are theoretically relevant for two reasons. First, most models do not take into account performance attribution: successful performance is repeated and failed performance is changed [3-5]. Second, the concept of prediction errors might provide an alternative explanation to differences between early and late lucky success or unlucky failure. You are free to decide whether the results are relevant to your work, but I have shown that providing success feedback on large percentage of trials interferes with motor learning [6]. This result seems consistent with your hypothesis that lucky success interferes with learning. 1. Sutton, R.S. and A.G. Barto, Reinforcement learning. Adaptive computation and machine learning series. 2018, Cambridge, MA: The MIT Press. 2. Dhawale, A.K., et al., Adaptive regulation of motor variability. Current Biology, 2019. 29(21): p. 3551-3562. 3. Therrien, A.S., D.M. Wolpert, and A.J. Bastian, Increasing motor noise impairs reinforcement learning in healthy individuals. eNeuro, 2018. 5(3): p. e0050-18.2018 1–14. 4. Roth, A.M., et al., Reinforcement-based processes actively regulate motor exploration along redundant solution manifolds. Proceedings of the royal society B, 2023. 290: p. 20231475. 5. Izawa, J. and R. Shadmehr, Learning from sensory and reward prediction errors during motor adaptation. PLOS computational biology, 2011. 7(3): p. e1002012. 6. van der Kooij, K., et al., Enforcing a high success percentage interferes with reward-based motor learning. Scientific Reports, 2026. ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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-->PONE-D-26-04456R1-->-->Learning in a Noisy World: How lucky successes and unlucky failures shape learning consequences-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Jeong, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.-->--> -->-->Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 23 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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As the corresponding author, your ORCID iD is verified in the submission system and will appear in the published article. PLOS supports the use of ORCID, and we encourage all coauthors to register for an ORCID iD and use it as well. Please encourage your coauthors to verify their ORCID iD within the submission system before final acceptance, as unverified ORCID iDs will not appear in the published article. Only the individual author can complete the verification step; PLOS staff cannot verify ORCID iDs on behalf of authors. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Nicola Vasta Academic Editor PLOS One Journal Requirements: If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: I read the revised manuscript with great pleasure and believe that it is almost ready for publication. Only Reviewer 1 has raised one remaining minor concern regarding the way the manuscript describes random noise as potentially disrupting reinforcement learning. Please address this comment in your revision by tempering your statement. I hope that you will be able to address this final minor concern, as I believe doing so will further strengthen the manuscript and its contribution to the journal. Provided that this concern is satisfactorily addressed, I anticipate being able to reach a positive final decision promptly. The reviewers' comments are appended below my signature. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. Does the manuscript provide a valid rationale for the proposed study, with clearly identified and justified research questions? The research question outlined is expected to address a valid academic problem or topic and contribute to the base of knowledge in the field.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses? The manuscript should describe the methods in sufficient detail to prevent undisclosed flexibility in the experimental procedure or analysis pipeline, including sufficient outcome-neutral conditions (e.g. necessary controls, absence of floor or ceiling effects) to test the proposed hypotheses and a statistical power analysis where applicable. As there may be aspects of the methodology and analysis which can only be refined once the work is undertaken, authors should outline potential assumptions and explicitly describe what aspects of the proposed analyses, if any, are exploratory.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable?--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception, at the time of publication. The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: A nice revision. My only concern at this point is that at one or two points you characterize reinforcement learning as "breaking down" under a setting of noise. Yes, it can become problematic in settings with a high level of noise, but the vast literature on bandit models and such illustrate that learning can still be effective even in a noisy world. Again, I suggest offer somewhat more tempered language than "breaking down". Reviewer #2: Thank you for considering my comments to the previous version and providing a clear and detailed response. All my concerns have been appropriately addressed and I look forward to reading the outcomes of the planned study. Best regards, Katinka ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy.--> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Katinka van der Kooij ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] To ensure your figures meet our technical requirements, please review our figure guidelines: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/figures You may also use PLOS’s free figure tool, NAAS, to help you prepare publication quality figures: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/figures#loc-tools-for-figure-preparation. NAAS will assess whether your figures meet our technical requirements by comparing each figure against our figure specifications. --> |
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