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Organizational culture, social capital, and emergency capacity in primary healthcare institutions: A cross-sectional structural equation modeling study comparing ordinary and older communities
Organizational culture, social capital, and emergency capacity in primary healthcare institutions: A cross-sectional structural equation modeling study comparing ordinary and older communities
How do cultural appeal and social capital differ in influencing primary health care
emergency capabilities in ordinary versus older communities?
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Reviewer #1: 1. Abstract lacks conciseness and has repetitive wording.The abstract
is lengthy and contains redundant expressions, failing to concisely summarize the
study and key findings. It is recommended to streamline the language and reduce repetition
to improve readability.
2. Unclear sampling rationale.The study selected four cities in Zhejiang Province
as random samples, but the rationale and representativeness of this selection are
not clearly explained. The authors should provide a detailed explanation of the logic
behind the selection and clarify whether these cities adequately represent the development
level of elderly communities in the region.
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Reviewer #3: 1. Please define the concepts of 'cultural appeal' and 'social capital'
at the beginning of the 'Introduction' section. Please define the concepts of 'cultural
appeal' and 'social capital' at the beginning of the 'Introduction' section to narrow
the scope. Introduce what they consist of.
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also be described in detail here.
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appeal" and "social capital" in health emergency capacity.
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4. The article mentions "ordinary" and "older" communities, but lacks a clear definition
of the criteria used to classify these communities.
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the formation of cultural appeal and social capital. For example, older communities
may face challenges such as inadequate infrastructure and population aging—how do
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RE: “How do cultural appeal and social capital differ in influencing primary healthcare
emergency capabilities in ordinary versus older communities?” Manuscript ID: PONE-D-24-36223
Dear Editors:
Thank you for the opportunity to further revise our manuscript “How do cultural appeal
and social capital differ in influencing primary healthcare emergency capabilities
in ordinary versus older communities?” The reviewers’ and editors’ comments were useful
and helped to clarify and improve several aspects of the manuscript.
Please find attached the revised version of the manuscript; the changes made are indicated
using red font. Below is a point-by-point response to the issues raised by the reviewers
and editors. We hope that this version is suitable for publication in PLOS ONE.
We look forward to hearing from you.
Dr. Xiaoting Zhang
School of Public Health, Hangzhou Normal University
1. The abstract is too long and contains repetitive content, failing to effectively
summarize the research objectives and key findings.
Response: Thank you for your valuable comments on our manuscript. In the revised version,
we have eliminated redundant and repetitive content, ensuring that the abstract is
clearer and more concise. Additionally, we have summarized the research findings,
presenting the direct and indirect effects of cultural influence and social capital
in the results section based on the structural equation model and emphasizing the
path differences between old and ordinary communities.
[Abstract] (page 2, lines 33–47): “A questionnaire survey was conducted among healthcare
professionals, with 983 valid responses collected for analysis. Structural equation
modeling was employed for analysis, which revealed that cultural appeal, structural
social capital, relational social capital, and cognitive social capital directly influence
the health emergency capacity of grassroots healthcare institutions. All three types
of social capital moderate the relationship between cultural appeal and health emergency
capacity. Furthermore, multi-group structural equation modeling analyses by community
type showed that, compared to the general community group, the direct effect of cultural
appeal on health emergency capacity in the old community group was larger than the
indirect effect. These findings highlight the crucial role of organizational culture
development and the social capital elements embedded in social structures—such as
social relationships, network participation, trust, and norms—in the prevention, preparation,
response, and recovery phases of emergency management in grassroots healthcare institutions.”
2. There is insufficient justification explaining the selection of the four cities
as samples, the rationale behind this choice, and whether these cities adequately
3. represent the development level of elderly communities in the region.
Response: We appreciate your valuable feedback, and we apologize for the lack of clarity
in our original manuscript. We have now provided a clearer explanation of the selection
criteria of the four cities, as outlined below:
First, the selection was based on the most recent gross domestic product rankings
of the 11 cities in Zhejiang Province for 2022, alongside regional economic and public
finance indicators. We categorized the 11 cities into four tiers according to their
economic levels. Using random sampling, we selected Hangzhou, Jiaxing, Huzhou, and
Lishui. These cities represent a spectrum of development levels, from high to low,
ensuring that our study captures a broad range of spatial and economic contexts and
thus enhancing the diversity and representativeness of the findings.
Second, we considered whether these cities adequately reflect the development levels
of old communities in the region. In the [Methods] section, we added a detailed explanation
regarding the development levels of old communities in the selected cities to strengthen
the justification for our sample. For instance, Hangzhou, as the most economically
advanced city in Zhejiang Province, boasts well-developed infrastructure in its old
communities, ample healthcare resources, and strong emergency-management capabilities
in primary healthcare institutions. These differences allow the selected cities to
effectively represent the varying development levels of old communities across Zhejiang,
thereby ensuring that our results are both broadly applicable and representative.
Furthermore, we have included statistical data obtained from the Housing and Urban-Rural
Development Bureau of each city in Zhejiang Province to support the basis for our
city selection. Through these clarifications, we aim to more clearly highlight the
representativeness of the chosen cities and enhance the overall credibility of our
study.
[Methods] (page 11-13, lines 258–284): “The cities were categorized into four levels
according to their economic status considering regional economic indicators and public
finance data. The first level includes Hangzhou and Ningbo, the two cities with a
total GDP exceeding one trillion RMB. The second level comprises Wenzhou, Shaoxing,
Jiaxing, and Taizhou, which have a GDP exceeding 500 billion RMB. The third level
includes Jinhua and Huzhou with a GDP between 300 billion and 500 billion RMB. The
fourth level comprises Quzhou, Lishui, and Zhoushan, which have a GDP not exceeding
200 billion RMB. Random sampling was used to select one city from each level: Hangzhou,
Jiaxing, Huzhou, and Lishui. These cities exhibit considerable differences in the
development of old neighborhoods and can provide a comprehensive reflection of the
overall situation in Zhejiang Province. As the most economically developed city in
Zhejiang Province, Hangzhou has relatively well-developed infrastructure in its old
neighborhoods, ample medical resources, and strong emergency-management capabilities
within grassroots healthcare institutions. Since the launch of the old neighborhood
renovation program in 2019, Hangzhou has been ranked first for three consecutive years.
The city focuses on integrated planning of public service facilities and community
healthcare service networks, significantly enhancing the emergency response capabilities
of grassroots communities and healthcare institutions. Jiaxing and Huzhou, while economically
more developed, still face some gaps in infrastructure and public service resource
allocation compared to Hangzhou. As of September 2022, Jiaxing had completed the renovation
of 491 old neighborhoods, constructed 651,200 square meters of urban community service
centers, and established 30 community health service centers [43]. By November 2022,
Huzhou had included 89 neighborhoods in its renovation plan [44]. Lishui faces significant
challenges in its old neighborhoods, including aging infrastructure and insufficient
medical resources. The progress of its old neighborhood renovation has been relatively
slow compared to the other three cities.”
3. Please provide definitions of the terms in the title as per the reviewers' suggestions.
Response: We appreciate your comments as well as the reviewers' suggestions. Regarding
the definitions of the terms in the title, we have provided a comprehensive explanation
in response to the reviewers' feedback and have included precise definitions of the
relevant terms within the manuscript. We trust that these definitions will effectively
clarify the terms used in the title and enhance readers' understanding of the study's
content and context.
4. Add a section to present the research hypotheses and explain the relationships
between the variables.
Response: We appreciate your valuable feedback on the paper. We apologize for the
previous lack of clarity in presenting the hypotheses, which may have made it difficult
for readers to understand them. We have now revised the research hypotheses section
and provided a detailed explanation of the relationships between the variables [Literature
review and hypotheses] (page 6, lines 143–251).
5. Clarify the validity of the structural equation modeling.
Response: We greatly appreciate your insightful comments and suggestions. In response,
we have revised the manuscript to better address your concerns. Specifically, we have
provided a more detailed discussion of the theoretical foundation of structural equation
modeling (SEM) and highlighted its advantages in addressing complex causal relationships.
We also explain why SEM was chosen as the most appropriate method for this study.
SEM is a multivariate statistical technique based on the covariance matrix of variables.
It is widely used in factor and path analysis, as it allows for the exploration of
relationships between multiple variables and provides a comprehensive understanding
of their interactions. SEM is commonly applied in fields such as psychology and sociology,
making it particularly well-suited for our research.
Furthermore, the SEM framework consists of two components: the measurement model and
the structural model. The measurement model defines how latent variables (unobserved
constructs) are represented by observed indicators (manifest variables), while the
structural model assesses the relationships between these latent variables. In this
study, the latent variables (represented by ellipses) include cultural influence,
structural social capital, cognitive social capital, and relational social capital.
These are measured by the observed variables (represented by rectangles), which are
detailed in the manuscript.
We used a sample of 983 responses and conducted reliability and validity tests on
the scales. We then employed AMOS 26 software to build and analyze the SEM to test
the research hypotheses. For the validity analysis, we used confirmatory factor analysis
to assess the appropriateness of the measurement model. The results showed that the
model fit was satisfactory, and we confirmed the composite reliability, convergent
validity, and discriminant validity. No issues were found with the composite reliability
or average variance extracted. Finally, we provided the fit indices for the structural
model; goodness of fit indices (goodness of fit index, adjusted goodness of fit index,
normal fit index, comparative fit index, Tucker Lewis index) exceeded 0.9, and the
root mean square of approximation and its 90% confidence interval were less than 0.08,
indicating that the model exhibits good overall fit.
[Statistical analyses] (page 17, lines 385–390): “SEM is a multivariate statistical
technique that utilizes the covariance matrix of variables for both factor and path
analysis. It is designed to investigate the latent relationships among multiple variables
and to provide a comprehensive analysis of their interactive mechanisms. SEM is extensively
used in disciplines such as psychology and sociology, making it an appropriate choice
for the present study.”
6. In the author information section, identical institutional affiliations should
appear only once
Response: We appreciate your suggestion. In response, we have revised the author information
section to consolidate identical institutional affiliations, ensuring that each institution
is listed only once, as per the journal’s guidelines. The repetition of “Department
of Health Policy and Management, School of Public Health, Hangzhou Normal University”
has been removed with only one mention retained, while the other distinct institutions
remain unchanged.
Reviewer #2:
None
Reviewer #3:
1. Please define the concepts of 'cultural appeal' and 'social capital' at the beginning
of the 'introduction' section, Please define the concepts of' cultural appeal' and
'social capital at the beginning of the Introduction' section to narrow the scope.
Introduce what they consist of.
Response: Thank you for your valuable suggestions. Based on your feedback, we have
clarified the concepts of “cultural attractiveness” and “social capital” at the beginning
of the [Introduction] section and provided a more detailed description of their components.
Through these definitions and explanations, we aim to better define the scope of the
study and clearly present the core meanings of “cultural attractiveness” and “social
capital.”
[Introduction] (page 4, lines 84–86): “Cultural appeal refers to the ability of societal
mainstream values and a rational spirit to influence and inspire individuals. It encompasses
the traditions, values, organizational goals, and cultural norms passed down across
generations.”
[Introduction] (page 4-5, lines 95–101): “social capital comprises resources embedded
in social networks, which enhance social efficiency and generate added value by facilitating
coordination and action among participants. Social networks, participation, trust,
reciprocity, and norms are widely recognized as key elements of social capital. Regarding
the classification of social capital, the discussion of a framework encompassing three
dimensions—structural, cognitive, and relational—has gained popularity since 2004,
and this framework has become the most used and widely accepted approach.”
2. Similarly, what is meant by 'primary health care emergency capabilities'? This
should also be described in detail here.
Response: We greatly appreciate your valuable suggestions. In response to your feedback,
we reviewed the literature on emergency management in public health emergencies and
found that the Prevention, Preparation, Response, and Recovery framework and the crisis
lifecycle theory are widely applied in conceptualizing emergency management capacity
and in developing related indicators. Drawing upon the findings from various studies,
we have clarified the concept of “health emergency capacity in grassroots healthcare
institutions” at the beginning of the [Introduction] section and further elaborated
on its components.
[Introduction] (page 3, lines 56–61): “The health emergency capacity of primary healthcare
institutions refers to their comprehensive ability to mobilize resources and implement
effective responses related to emergency preparedness, monitoring and early warning,
emergency response, and post-event recovery to prevent and address sudden public health
incidents. This includes capacities for emergency prevention, emergency preparedness,
emergency response, and post-disaster recovery .”
3. An additional expert is needed to test the structural equations and give a professional
opinion.
Response: We appreciate your insightful suggestion regarding the validation of our
structural equation model. In response, we have engaged an independent expert in statistical
modeling to conduct a comprehensive evaluation of our analytical framework. The expert's
rigorous assessment corroborates the robustness and statistical validity of our model
specifications.
Reviewer #4:
Please pay special attention to the research ethics issues we have mentioned. The
approval of the Institutional Review Committee (approval number is provided) and the
written informed consent process of the participants described in this study have
strictly followed the relevant ethical guidelines. We ensured that the rights of the
participants in the study were protected, including their right to withdraw at any
time and the confidentiality of their information. We kindly ask you to verify the
implementation of these ethical compliance measures during the review process to ensure
the ethical and legal rigor of this study. Thank you for your careful review.
Response: We sincerely appreciate your valuable suggestion. Our research has been
conducted in strict compliance with relevant ethical guidelines and has obtained formal
approval from the Institutional Review Committee. We have uploaded our Chinese ethical
approval document and its English translation in the system. Furthermore, we have
implemented a comprehensive written informed consent procedure that fully adheres
to established ethical standards and regulatory requirements.
Reviewer #5:
1. The article does not include a statement regarding conflicts of interest.
Response: Thank you for your careful review and for pointing out this oversight. We
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2.As the author has stated, cognitive capital is a crucial component of social capital.
However, the analysis of 983 valid questionnaires does not account for variations
among participants across different occupations, age groups, and genders. Have these
factors influenced the results? This aspect is particularly critical for the cognitive
capital variable. The author appears to have provided only statistical data on educational
background without conducting an associative analysis. Additionally, how do individuals
from different occupations and age groups perceive public health environments and
emergency healthcare? What are the key differences in their understanding?
3.The author has invited a statistical modeling expert to validate the accuracy of
the manuscript, which is commendable. It is recommended to acknowledge this contribution
in the Acknowledgment section to highlight the researcher's role in model validation.
4.Figures 1-3: The resolution is insufficient. Please provide high-resolution files
for better clarity.
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Reviewer #6: 1. Research Content and Innovation
This study investigates the impact of cultural appeal and social capital on the emergency
response capacity of primary healthcare institutions and explores the differences
between general communities and aging communities. The topic holds practical significance
in the context of relatively weak emergency governance capacity at the grassroots
level in China. The structural equation modeling (SEM) approach adopted in the study
is well-established; however, the research’s innovation needs to be further emphasized.
Are there existing studies on similar topics, and in what aspects does this study
make breakthroughs? It is recommended to supplement the introduction with a review
of relevant literature to highlight the study’s marginal contribution.
2. Research Methodology
In the sample selection section, the study selects four cities in Zhejiang Province
for the survey and provides the GDP classification and sampling principles. However,
further clarification is required:
① What is the rationale for selecting these four cities? Can they represent the entire
Zhejiang Province or even the whole country? Is there any potential regional bias?
② What is the distribution of the sampled healthcare institutions? Does the sample
cover different levels of primary healthcare institutions, such as community health
service centers and township health centers?
③ Regarding sample randomness: Does the specific sampling method ensure that the survey
results are broadly applicable?
In the variable measurement and model construction section:
① The study utilizes multiple dimensions of cultural appeal and social capital but
does not clearly explain whether the measurement tools for these variables have been
tested for reliability and validity. It is recommended to provide detailed measurement
indicators in the methodology section and specify the source of the questionnaire.
② The study applies SEM for analysis, which is appropriate for exploring complex variable
relationships. However, it does not provide sufficient information on model fit. It
is suggested to include model fit indices to enhance the credibility of the results.
3. Research Results
① Descriptive statistics: The study should provide a more comprehensive description
of the sample characteristics, including respondents' age, occupational distribution,
and educational background, to enhance research transparency.
② Multi-group SEM analysis: The study mentions that multi-group SEM analysis was conducted
between general and aging communities, revealing that cultural appeal has a more significant
direct effect in aging communities. However, was a significance test performed? If
not, it is recommended to conduct additional significance tests to strengthen the
robustness of the conclusions.
4. Conclusion and Discussion
The study should further integrate its findings to propose more actionable policy
recommendations on improving the emergency response capacity of primary healthcare
institutions. For example, how can community governance be leveraged to optimize social
capital? How can the cultural appeal of aging communities be enhanced to improve healthcare
response capacity?
5. Language and Formatting
The language of the paper is generally clear; however, some expressions are redundant
and should be further refined. For instance, the abstract contains repetitive information
that could be condensed to better highlight the research findings. Additionally, the
reference format must strictly comply with the journal’s requirements, and citation
formatting should be carefully checked for accuracy.
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RE: “How do cultural appeal and social capital differ in influencing primary healthcare
emergency capabilities in ordinary versus older communities?” Manuscript ID: PONE-D-24-36223
Dear Editor:
Thank you for the opportunity to further revise our manuscript “How do cultural appeal
and social capital differ in influencing primary healthcare emergency capabilities
in ordinary versus older communities?” The reviewers’ and editors’ comments were useful
and helped to clarify and improve several aspects of the manuscript.
Please find attached the revised version of the manuscript; the changes made are indicated
using red font. Below is a point-by-point response to the issues raised by the reviewers
and editors.
In addition, we would like to inform you of an update regarding the authors’ institutional
affiliations. Due to a recent organizational restructuring at Hangzhou Normal University,
the Department of Health Policy and Management, formerly part of the School of Public
Health, was officially merged with the School of Public Administration on March 2,
2025. Accordingly, the affiliations of five authors —Xianhong Huang, Jiamin Tang,
Jie Jia, Kaidi Sun, and ZhengNan Meng — should be updated from the School of Public
Health, Hangzhou Normal University to the School of Public Administration, Hangzhou
Normal University. We respectfully submit this request for affiliation correction.
Should any additional documentation or clarification be required, we are happy to
provide it promptly.
We hope that this version is suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. We look forward
to hearing from you.
Xiaoting Zhang
School of Public Administration, Hangzhou Normal University
1.What is the practical contribution of the research?
Response: Thank you for highlighting the need to clarify our study’s practical contributions.
We have revised the manuscript to address this, particularly in the “Study implications
and limitations” section. Our findings offer actionable contributions. These findings
offer practical guidance for incorporating cultural appeal into the daily management
practices of both communities and primary healthcare institutions, and further inform
the development of targeted strategies tailored to different community types.
[Study implications and limitations] (page 34, lines 721–733): Regarding its practical
contributions, this study empirically demonstrates the importance of cultural appeal,
social capital, and healthcare emergency capacity, offering evidence to support the
enhancement of emergency preparedness in primary healthcare institutions. Communities
and grassroots medical institutions can integrate organizational culture training,
value advocacy, and daily management to foster social capital and improve healthcare
emergency capacity. An innovative aspect of this research is its use of multi-group
analysis, which confirms the varying effects of cultural appeal and social capital
on healthcare emergency capacity across various community types. This provides a solid
foundation for developing tailored prevention and mobilization strategies. Policymakers
at all levels can use these insights to design community-specific initiatives for
cultural promotion and social capital development to improve the emergency resilience
of primary healthcare institutions in diverse contexts.
2. The first chapter has too many paragraphs and the logic is confused.
Response: Thank you for your critical feedback on the logical structure of the Introduction.
We have thoroughly restructured this section to enhance clarity and flow, as detailed
below and in the revised manuscript (see revised manuscript, Introduction, pages 4–6,
lines 81–84, lines 101–103, lines 111–120, lines 125–134).
First, the opening paragraph outlines the significance and current state of primary
healthcare institutions and their emergency response capacity. It also highlights
the challenges these institutions have faced during public health emergencies, which
expose critical gaps in their emergency preparedness.
Second, we reviewed the existing literature to establish the theoretical foundation
and practical relevance of the two core variables in our study—cultural appeal and
social capital. We note that previous research has predominantly focused on managerial
aspects such as resource allocation and professional training for medical staff, while
comparatively less attention has been given to “awareness-level” factors, particularly
those related to cultural dimensions. At the same time, there is growing scholarly
interest in the role of social networks—such as participation, interaction, and trust—in
promoting resource integration and information sharing. In this context, social capital
theory provides a valuable perspective for understanding emergency response within
grassroots healthcare settings.
Third, the literature review reveals a lack of comparative studies examining differences
in emergency response capacity across various community types. To address this gap,
our study incorporates the community type dimension and adopts a multi-group analysis
approach.
Finally, we concluded with the study’s objectives, directly tied to the preceding
gaps.
These revisions ensure a logical progression from problem identification → theoretical
grounding → gap articulation → objective formulation, addressing the reviewer’s concerns
about disjointed logic. We appreciate the opportunity to strengthen the manuscript’s
rigor."
3. All hypotheses need to be rewritten. The current research hypothesis reads less
like an academic description than a news report.
Response: Thank you for your valuable comments. Your suggestions provided clear direction
for improving the overall quality of our research. We have thoroughly revised all
research hypotheses to enhance academic rigor and logical coherence. In particular,
we have eliminated colloquial expressions and avoided language resembling journalistic
reporting, ensuring that the phrasing aligns to the conventions of scholarly writing
(see revised manuscript, Literature review and hypotheses, pages 6–11, lines 137–247).
4.The discussion section needs to distinguish between academic and practical.
Response: Thank you for your insightful comments. In the revised Discussion section,
we have provided an academically rigorous analysis of the relationships among cultural
appeal, social capital, and healthcare emergency capacity. To support real-world application,
we conclude each subsection with practical and actionable recommendations (see revised
manuscript, pages 28–34, lines 565–571, lines 601–611, lines 621–629, lines 635–641,
lines 667–708).
Furthermore, we have divided the significance of this study into two clearly defined
components: theoretical implications and practical implications. This structural refinement
is intended to help readers clearly distinguish the academic contributions from the
practical relevance of the research.
[Study implications and limitations] (page 34, lines 709–732): “This study demonstrates
the significant influence of cultural appeal and social capital on healthcare emergency
preparedness, offering both theoretical and practical contributions. From a theoretical
perspective, the study introduces the concept of cultural appeal into research on
healthcare emergency capacity in grassroots medical institutions, addressing a gap
in existing emergency management research that has predominantly focused on systems,
resource allocation, or technical capabilities. It highlights the central role of
cultural mobilization in emergency response. Furthermore, drawing on social capital
theory, the study examines the relationships between cultural appeal, three types
of social capital, and healthcare emergency capacity, thereby extending the application
of social capital theory within the field of healthcare emergency management.
Regarding its practical contributions, this study empirically demonstrates the importance
of cultural appeal, social capital, and healthcare emergency capacity, offering evidence
to support the enhancement of emergency preparedness in primary healthcare institutions.
Communities and grassroots medical institutions can integrate organizational culture
training, value advocacy, and daily management to foster social capital and improve
healthcare emergency capacity. An innovative aspect of this research is its use of
multi-group analysis, which confirms the varying effects of cultural appeal and social
capital on healthcare emergency capacity across various community types. This provides
a solid foundation for developing tailored prevention and mobilization strategies.
Policymakers at all levels can use these insights to design community-specific initiatives
for cultural promotion and social capital development to improve the emergency resilience
of primary healthcare institutions in diverse contexts.”
5. The references do not meet journal standards.
Response: Thank you for your valuable suggestion. We have conducted a thorough review
and standardization of all references throughout the manuscript. Both the in-text
citations and reference list entries have been revised to fully comply with the journal’s
formatting requirements. We apologize for this oversight and thank you for your patience.
Reviewer #3
Compared to the previous manuscript, the author has made adjustments based on the
provided comments. However, the following issues remain:
1.Line 305: The reference is unidentifiable. Please verify and correct it accordingly.
Response: Thank you for your thorough review. The reference cited in line 305 is from
a Chinese-language journal article. In accordance with the journal’s formatting requirements,
we have now included the publication year, volume, issue number, and page range to
enhance its clarity and traceability.
2.As the author has stated, cognitive capital is a crucial component of social capital.
However, the analysis of 983 valid questionnaires does not account for variations
among participants across different occupations, age groups, and genders. Have these
factors influenced the results? This aspect is particularly critical for the cognitive
capital variable. The author appears to have provided only statistical data on educational
background without conducting an associative analysis. Additionally, how do individuals
from different occupations and age groups perceive public health environments and
emergency healthcare? what are the key differences in their understanding?
Response: Thank you for your valuable comments. We fully acknowledge the potential
influence of individual differences on the study’s outcomes. In the current study,
we conducted preliminary examinations of key demographic variables—namely gender,
age, and occupation—through descriptive statistics and correlation analyses. Additionally,
we performed univariate analyses using public health emergency capability as the dependent
variable, with gender, age, and occupation as independent variables. The results indicated
a statistically significant difference for occupation (P < 0.05), while no significant
differences were found for gender or age (P > 0.05). These results have been added
to Supplementary Table 1 and are now detailed in the Methods section (Lines 309–319)
of the revised manuscript.
Second, we appreciate your insightful observation regarding the potential influence
of occupation, age, and gender, particularly in relation to cognitive social capital.
We would like to clarify that in this study, cognitive social capital functions as
a mediating variable within the proposed theoretical model. The central focus of our
research is to examine differences between ordinary and older communities and to explore
how cultural appeal influences the public health emergency capacity of primary healthcare
institutions through social capital. Therefore, we did not include demographic variables
such as occupation, age, and gender as primary explanatory or moderating variables
in our model to assess their effects on cognitive social capital.
we conducted an analysis using cognitive social capital as the dependent variable
and gender, age, occupation, and community type as independent variables. The results
revealed significant differences across occupation and community type (p < 0.05).
In addition to univariate tests, we conducted multivariate regression analyses to
isolate the effects of occupation and community type on cognitive social capital while
controlling for community type. Occupation remained significant, explaining 1.2% of
the variance in cognitive capital.
Although these findings offer promising directions for future research, incorporating
them into the main model would substantially expand the scope of this study. As such,
we have not retained these preliminary results in the main manuscript. Instead, we
have included a discussion of this point in the “Study implications and limitations”
section (Lines 740–747), where we suggest that future studies may consider using interaction
terms or multi-group SEM approaches to explore group heterogeneity in health emergency
capacity and social capital within primary healthcare institutions.
Finally, in response to your question regarding how individuals of different occupations
and age groups perceive public health environments and emergency medical services—and
what key differences exist in their understanding—we focused primarily on occupational
differences, given that occupation was the only demographic variable that showed statistical
significance in our analysis. Based on a review of relevant literature, we offer the
following preliminary interpretation: physicians may prioritize the coordination of
medical resources and clinical response efficiency; nurses are more likely to focus
on frontline workflows and patient communication; medical technicians tend to emphasize
the availability and operational efficiency of diagnostic support systems; and administrative
staff typically concentrate on emergency planning, policy implementation, and inter-organizational
coordination. These differing perspectives are closely aligned with the distinct roles
of occupational group within the public health emergency response system of primary
healthcare institutions. We believe these insights provide a valuable foundation for
future in-depth studies, which we plan to pursue in subsequent research.
[Methods] (page 14, lines 311–321): “Over half the participants were under the age
of 40, and three-quarters held an associate degree or higher. The primary professional
groups represented were physicians (41.1%) and nurses (32.0%). Approximately 75% of
the respondents held a professional title, and 72.5% had more than six years of work
experience. Regarding institutional context, 72.6% of the respondents were employed
at primary healthcare institutions located in ordinary communities, while 27.4% worked
in older communities. Statistical analyses revealed significant differences in the
public health emergency response capacity of primary healthcare institutions based
on profession, community type, presence of hazard identification and risk assessment
systems, implementation of a public health emergency accountability system, and perceived
usefulness of intelligent tools. (Supplementary Table 1).”
[Study implications and limitations] (page 36, lines 740–747): “Finally, although
this study employs a multi-group structural equation modeling approach to analyze
the impact of different community types on health emergency capacity, it does not
examine the role of factors such as healthcare professionals' gender or age. Future
research could consider incorporating interaction terms or conducting multi-group
structural model analyses based on factors such as age, gender, and profession to
further explore the differences in health emergency capacity among various groups,
thereby providing a more comprehensive understanding.”
3.The author has invited a statistical modeling expert to validate the accuracy of
the manuscript, which is commendable. It is recommended to acknowledge this contribution
in the Acknowledgment section to highlight the r
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Reviewer #7: The research topic is relevant to scientists and public health organisations.
Emergency response capacity in primary health care is essential for the resilience
of health systems and for the safety of populations in critical contexts.
However, I will identify the areas for improvement below.
1. Methodological limitations and representativeness.
The article is based on a sample of four cities in Zhejiang Province, China, one of
the most developed in China. This limits the generalisation of the results to less
favourable regions or other countries. Therefore, these factors should be considered
in the limitations of the study.
2. The impact of individual variables such as age and gender is not measured, focusing
only on profession. The literature indicates that these dimensions can affect perceptions
about social capital and response capacity. It is suggested that these variables could
be part of the suggestions for future research.
3. Measurements and validation of instruments. The authors should provide more explicit
sources for the scales since they are not obtained from the entire international literature.
The authors should explain the translation processes and the rationale behind their
selection.
4. Discussion of innovation and marginal contributions.
The authors should refer to recent international literature on social capital, cultural
appeal and emergency management, to specify the advances of this study in relation
to existing approaches.
5. Argumentative redundancy and structuring.
I suggest simplifying the text in the discussion of results and conclusions. The authors
should rewrite these sections by prioritising a structure that includes contributions
to theory, management of organisations, limitations, and suggestions for future research.
Currently, the text exhibits a degree of repetition, leading the reader to become
disoriented among numerous sections.
6. Inconsistency and updating of literature references
The authors should ensure that the references are available internationally. Some
references are difficult to identify, particularly from articles in Chinese without
translation or complete data. I recommend incorporating more recent and relevant international
literature.
Reviewer #8: The authors have provided detailed and appropriate responses to the previous
reviewers' comments and have made corresponding revisions to the manuscript accordingly.
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complies with the journal's formatting guidelines. There are systemic inconsistencies
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2. The core independent variable, "cultural appeal," remains conceptually ambiguous
and lacks a solid theoretical foundation in organizational studies. Combined with
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Point-by-point responses to the Reviewers’ comments
Reviewer #7
The research topic is relevant to scientists and public health organisations. Emergency
response capacity in primary health care is essential for the resilience of health
systems and for the safety of populations in critical contexts.
1. Methodological limitations and representativeness
The article is based on a sample of four cities in Zhejiang province, China, one of
the most developed in China. This limits the generalisation of the results to less
favourable regions or other countries, Therefore, these factors should be considered
in the limitations of the study.
Response:Thank you for raising this issue. In response to your concern about geographical
sampling bias¬¬—specifically, the concentration of samples in relatively developed
areas of Zhejiang Province—we have revised the “Research Limitations and Prospects”
section to address this issue, as follows:
(1) We explicitly acknowledge the geographical limitation of our sample—namely, its
concentration in the developed eastern region of China—and note that this socioeconomic
context represents a key methodological constraint.
(2) We clearly state that, due to the absence of samples from less-developed regions,
our findings may not be directly generalizable to underdeveloped areas such as central
and western China.
(3)We recommend that future research incorporate samples from regions across different
levels of development in China and include cross-regional comparative analyses to
explore the potential influence of socioeconomic differences on the study’s conclusions.
We also suggest conducting cross-cultural comparative studies with samples from similar
research contexts internationally to validate the robustness and generalizability
of the findings.
For details of the specific revisions, please see the revised manuscript [Research
limitations and prospects] (pages 35-36, lines 715–736).
2. The impact of individual variables such as age and gender is not measured, focusing
only on profession.
The literature indicates that these dimensions can affect perceptions about social
capital and response capacity. It is suggested that these variables could be part
of the suggestions for future research.
Response:We thank the reviewer for their insightful comments and for highlighting
an important methodological limitation in our study’s design. As noted, demographic
factors—such as gender and age—may act as potential confounders in estimating the
relationships between occupation, social capital, and healthcare emergency preparedness,
which could affect the internal validity and inferential strength of our findings.
To address this methodological limitation more thoroughly, we have added a discussion
in the [Research Limitations and Prospects, lines 715–736] section regarding the limitations
of the demographic variables (e.g., occupation, age, gender). Specifically, we acknowledge
that future research should consider gender, age, and similar variables either as
primary explanatory variables or as moderating factors, and utilize interaction models
or multi-group structural equation modeling to examine their potential impact on the
relationship between social capital and healthcare emergency preparedness.
Although our preliminary analyses indicated that demographic characteristics such
as occupation and community type significantly influenced emergency preparedness,
gender and age did not reach statistical significance, this does not eliminate the
possibility that these factors could influence outcomes under different societal or
cultural contexts (Table1). Accordingly, we recommend that future studies validate
these demographic influences across diverse regions and populations. Moreover, using
more precise model specifications to estimate the independent effects of occupation
and other demographic factors can help control for potential confounding, thereby
enhancing both the internal and external validity—and generalizability—of the results.
Table 1. Univariate Analysis of Health Emergency Capacity(The table is only used to
reply to the reviewer 's suggestion, not as the text or annex content.)
Variable Categorization Frequency (N) Composition(%) t/F P
Gender Male 216 22 2.241 0.349
Female 767 78
Age 18-30 years 304 30.9 0.721 0.577
31-40 years 369 37.5
18-30 years 225 22.9
42-50 years 73 7.4
51-60 years 12 1.2
61 years and above 304 30.9
Educational level Junior high school or below 17 1.7 0.527 0.716
High school 47 4.8
Associate degree 251 25.5
Bachelor’s degree or above 668 68
Marital status Single 181 18.4 0.050 0.985
Married 784 79.8
Divorced and other 18 1.8
Position Doctor 404 41.1 3.111 0.009
Nurse 315 32
Medical technician 102 10.4
Prevention 88 9
Administration 30 3.1
Other 44 4.5
Professional title None 125 12.7 0.165 0.920
Junior 484 49.2
Intermediate 286 29.1
Senior 88 9
Years of service Less than 1 year 28 2.8 0.540 0.655
1-3 years 117 11.9
4-6 years 125 12.7
More than 6 years 713 72.5
The type of community you work in Ordinary community 714 72.6 0.789 0.013
old community 269 27.4
The presence of hazard identification and risk assessment management systems Yes 788
80.2 24.334 <0.001
No 74 7.5
Don't know 121 12.3
Accountability systems for public health emergencies Yes 865 88 30.239 <0.001
No 47 4.8
Don't know 71 7.2
The extent of the usefulness of smart tools very helpful 763 77.6 43787 <0.001
Helpful 199 20.2
Average 19 1.9
3. Measurements and validation of instruments
The authors should provide more explicit sources for the scales since they are not
obtained from the entire international literature. The authors should explain the
translation processes and the rationale behind their selection.
Response:Thank you for your suggestion. It was correctly noted that the primary measurement
instrument for cultural cohesion—or “cultural appeal”—used in our study is based on
Chinese-language literature. We provide the following clarifications:
The measurement scale for cultural cohesion was principally adapted from the theoretical
framework and definitions presented by Chen Li in the Chinese core journal Journalism
Lover. Our research team then contextualized and refined these items to fit the realities
of primary healthcare emergency responses in China xwahz.com.
It should be noted that there is presently no internationally established scale explicitly
measuring “cultural cohesion of Chinese grassroots healthcare organizations during
emergency conditions.” Thus, Chen Li’s work offers essential theoretical grounding
and strong contextual relevance for constructing a culturally appropriate instrument.
Accordingly, we localized and streamlined the scale to align closely with our study
context, ensuring the measurement items are highly relevant and accurate for our research
setting. Since Chen Li’s study is available only in Chinese and is not indexed in
major international databases, we will include the full Chinese PDF version along
with an English translation of the key content in the revised submission for the reviewer’s
convenience. The questionnaire was administered in Chinese to the local sample.
Reliability and validity metrics for our adapted instrument in our sample are strong:
Cronbach’s α = 0.969, Composite Reliability (CR) = 0.970, and Average Variance Extracted
(AVE) = 0.915, which attest to the measure’s excellent internal consistency and construct
validity.
To ensure conceptual clarity and semantic equivalence in English, we followed a standard
cross-cultural translation procedure: two bilingual experts with public health management
backgrounds independently translated the Chinese questionnaire into English; discrepancies
were resolved through discussion between the translators and the lead researcher to
produce a unified English draft; a third bilingual expert then back-translated this
into Chinese, and item-by-item comparisons with the original confirmed high conceptual
equivalence between Chinese and English versions.
The Chinese version and English translation of Chen Li’s study are selected:
The "Five Powers" framework for international communication capacity building establishes
performance indicators for the new era, encompassing five dimensions: omni-media communication,
cultural dissemination, image cultivation, knowledge sharing, and public opinion guidance.
It covers all aspects of traditional international communication and cultural exchanges,
presenting comprehensive requirements for holistic improvement in communication effectiveness
[2]. As a systematic project, the Five Powers complement each other and reinforce
one another. While initial progress has been made in recent years, deeper development
is needed in the substantive aspects of international communication capabilities.
"Promoting China's outstanding culture and showcasing its evolving development" form
the core essence of international communication. As Gramsci, co-founder of the Italian
Communist Party, proposed the theory of "cultural hegemony," where superior cultures
naturally gain "knowledge and moral leadership" in multicultural competition [3].
Joseph Nye further emphasized that culture constitutes a nation's most vital "soft
power"—a strength derived from intrinsic appeal rather than coercion [4]. The cultural
magnetism of Chinese heritage—its attractiveness, influence, and guiding role—serves
as the cornerstone of international communication capacity building. This element
embodies Chinese characteristics most vividly. Therefore, enhancing this cultural
magnetism is both the key focus and essential component of international communication
capacity development, significantly improving global communication effectiveness.
Building on cultural confidence, we are continuously enhancing the appeal of Chinese
culture through in-depth exploration of its essence, innovative approaches to expression,
and improved dissemination effectiveness. These efforts will significantly advance
the transformation and upgrading of China's international communication capabilities,
amplify the global influence of Chinese culture, and highlight its profound depth,
unique charm, and outstanding qualities—ultimately achieving remarkable international
communication outcomes.
The Ideological Content and Characteristics of the Appeal to Chinese Culture
(1) The Ideological Connotation of the Appeal of Chinese Culture
What is culture? Chinese cultural scholar Liang Shuming provided an all-encompassing
definition: Culture is everything we rely on for living... As humans exist in the
world, we essentially engage in three fundamental activities: living, working, and
thinking (expressing thoughts through speech or writing). To perform these activities,
we must adopt three modes of existence: lifestyle, behavior, and thought. The combination
of these three aspects and their corresponding modes constitutes culture. [5] Thus,
Chinese culture represents the lifestyle, behavioral patterns, and cognitive frameworks
developed by the Chinese people over millennia of civilizational development. British
cultural scholar Raymond W. Kwan proposed in "Culture and Society" that culture encompasses
"the totality of life—material, intellectual, and spiritual" [6]. Marx viewed culture
as "the humanization of nature." Culture serves as humanity's immense power to transform
the world, often termed "cultural force" or "cultural productivity." [7] Therefore,
cultural appeal can be seen as an inherent manifestation of this cultural force.
The cultural appeal of Chinese civilization embodies the essence of culture reflecting
real social life. It should possess attractiveness, appeal, influence, and cohesion,
capable of educating, inspiring, motivating, urging, and uniting people. [8] Cultural
appeal serves as a crucial manifestation of cultural soft power, whose core lies in
the inherent appeal of culture. As Confucius observed, "Those nearby are pleased,
while those afar come." The cultural appeal of Chinese civilization refers to the
infectiousness, rallying power, and guiding influence inherent in the lifestyle, thinking
patterns, and behavioral norms of the Chinese people.
4. Discussion of innovation and marginal contributions
The authors should refer to recent international literature on social capital, cultural
appeal and emergency management, to specify the advances of this study in relation
to existing approaches.
Response:We reviewed recent international literature and, based on both the literature
review and a comparative analysis, supplemented the Conclusion and Theoretical Implications
sections to emphasize the threefold innovation of this study’s research perspective
and methodology:
(1) Regarding the research focus, we selected primary healthcare institutions as the
core analytic unit, unlike most international studies that concentrate on large hospitals
or macro-level emergency systems. Primary healthcare institutions act as the “nerve
endings” of the health emergency system and play a direct role in community-level
crisis response. However, the international literature places limited emphasis on
this domain. Our study elucidates the mechanisms shaping emergency preparedness in
grassroots settings, thereby offering empirical, context-specific contributions to
the global discourse on health emergency management.
(2) In terms of theoretical variable integration, this study systematically incorporates
cultural appeal as a key antecedent variable within the theoretical framework of emergency
preparedness. This extends beyond existing models, which largely hinge on structural
or cognitive social capital and technological or resource-based factors. Our empirical
analysis confirms a positive effect of cultural appeal on grassroots emergency preparedness,
thereby offering a theoretical anchor for understanding the critical influence of
informal institutions and cultural soft power in crisis response.
(3) On methodology and contextualized comparison, we innovatively employ multi-group
structural equation modeling based on community types—specifically, old communities
versus ordinary community—to systematically test for contextual differences in causal
paths. This method reveals both universal and unique mechanisms driving emergency
capability and provides concrete process evidence aligning with Shi et al., who propose
that “resilience of healthcare organizations is influenced more broadly by community
and healthcare systems.” Our findings clarify how community type shapes the influence
and relative importance of key driving factors.
The source referenced is [Shi W, Chen R, Wang K, Wang Y, Gui L. Exploring hospital
resilience protective or risk factors: lessons for future disaster response efforts.
Front Public Health. 2024 Mar 27;12:1378257. doi: 10.3389/fpubh.2024.1378257.]
For details of the specific revisions, please see the revised manuscript [Conclusion]
(pages 32-33, lines 642–662), [Theoretical contribution] (pages 33-34, lines 670–680)
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Reviewer #10: This paper explores the impacts of cultural appeal and social capital
on health care’s emergency capacities.
- I don’t understand why the authors introduce the term ‘cultural appeal,’ and I cannot
find any relevant theories or articles on cultural appeal. I am not sure how such
research focusing on cultural appeal would benefit the international audience of PLOS
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- I highly suggest that authors present their survey questions in the main text so
that the readers can understand how they constructed variables.
- The survey data mainly came from healthcare providers; therefore, lack of an objective
measure of health institutions’ real emergency capacity. Based on Table S2, it seems
the dependent variable, health emergency capabilities (e.g., prevention, preparedness,
response, and recovery), is health providers’ perceptions of their organizations’
emergency capacities. In considering the wider social impacts of a health emergency,
the authors should use more objective measures of emergency capacity.
- The authors found that cultural appeal has positive impacts on emergency management.
Based on the S2 Table, I wonder how specific measurement items of cultural appeal,
including “having a corresponding culture wall to reflect the organization’s vision
and cultural characteristics”, and “implementing socialist core values,” would impact
emergency capacities. The authors should explicitly discuss and explain the intrinsic
relationship between cultural appeals (e.g., cultural walls, socialist core values)
on emergency capacities and their implications to the international audience.
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Point-by-point responses to the Reviewers’ comments
Academic Editor
While the manuscript addresses an important topic concerning social capital and emergency
capacities in primary healthcare institutions, it still falls short of PLOS ONE’s
publication standards in several aspects. In particular, (1) the presence of Chinese-language
content in both the response letter and supplementary sections is unacceptable for
an international English journal, and (2) the inclusion of Chinese-language sources
translated into English does not meet the requirement for internationally retrievable
references. In addition, the theoretical construct of “cultural appeal” remains conceptually
vague and lacks a clear grounding in established international literature. The manuscript
would benefit from reframing this construct within recognized theories of organizational
culture or cultural competence, replacing all non-English citations with recent international
studies, and ensuring full linguistic and stylistic consistency across the text. A
thorough language revision by a professional English editor is strongly recommended
before resubmission.
Response(1): We sincerely thank the reviewer for their insightful comments. We fully
understand PLOS ONE’s requirements regarding the use of English for international
readership. We have carefully reviewed the entire manuscript and have removed all
Chinese-language content from both the response letter and supplementary sections.
Response(2): We appreciate the reviewer’s suggestion to replace non-English references
with internationally retrievable sources. In compliance with this, we have replaced
all Chinese-language references with internationally recognized English-language literature.
We consulted the latest international studies in the relevant fields and updated the
reference list to ensure traceability and international relevance. We have also engaged
a professional English editor to perform a thorough language revision, ensuring stylistic
consistency and academic quality.
Regarding the theoretical construct of “cultural appeal,” we recognize that this concept
may be less familiar in international literature. In this study, we framed “cultural
appeal” within the well-established theories of organizational culture and cultural
capital. Specifically, cultural appeal refers to the capacity of cultural values and
beliefs to elicit emotional resonance and collective identification within a group,
which in turn shapes individual behavioral choices in contexts such as emergency management
and crisis response.
To further clarify this construct, we draw on Schein’s theory of organizational culture,
which emphasizes that shared values and beliefs, embedded in an organization’s strategic
goals and ideology, profoundly influence members’ attitudes, motivations, and behaviors.
Additionally, we integrate Bourdieu’s theory of cultural capital, which underscores
the role of intangible cultural resources (such as values, beliefs, and traditions)
in mobilizing collective action. In the context of emergency management, we argue
that cultural appeal functions as a form of cultural capital that fosters collective
identification and cooperation among members, thus enhancing the emergency response
capacity of primary healthcare institutions.
For international readers, this theoretical framing connects the concept of cultural
appeal with both organizational culture and cultural capital theories, which have
been widely applied in studies of emergency response, crisis management, and organizational
behavior. We have revised the manuscript to reflect these theoretical foundations
and incorporated relevant international research to enhance its scholarly value.
Cultural appeal is a concept drawn from the Chinese managerial context, referring
to the capacity of cultural frames to elicit affective resonance and collective identification
within a group, thereby shaping individual behavioral choices. This concept is grounded
in Schein’s theory of organizational culture, which posits that shared values and
beliefs embedded in an organization’s culture influence members’ attitudes and behaviors.
In this study, cultural appeal is framed as a form of intangible cultural capital,
drawing from Bourdieu’s theory of cultural capital. Bourdieu emphasizes that cultural
capital—particularly intangible forms like values, beliefs, and traditions—plays a
crucial role in mobilizing collective action. In the context of emergency management,
cultural appeal can enhance cooperation and rapid response, fostering a strong sense
of collective identity and shared purpose that improves institutional emergency capacity.
The sources referenced are
Gevorgyan G, & Manucharova, N. The effects of cultural appeal, product involvement,
and ethnic identity on attitudes and recall in online advertising. Chinese Journal
of Communication, 2015,8(2):196-220.
Michaels L, & Rettig E. A renewable light unto the nations? Modelling the limits of
culturally appealing climate frames: a case study from Israel. Journal of Environmental
Policy & Planning,2025,27(4):376-389.
Schein, E. H. (2010). Organizational Culture and Leadership. Jossey-Bass.
Bourdieu, P. (1986). The Forms of Capital. In J. G. Richardson (Ed.), Handbook of
Theory and Research for the Sociology of Education. Greenwood Press.
[Literature review and hypotheses] (pages 6-7, lines 138–153): “The concept of cultural
appeal originates in the Chinese managerial context and refers to the transmission
of cultural forces that elicit affective resonance and collective identification within
a group, thereby shaping individual behavioral choices. Schein’s organizational culture
theory provides theoretical support for this construct: shared beliefs and cultural
values are reflected in an organization’s strategic goals and ideology, become embedded
in members’ cognitions, and consequently influence their attitudes, motivation, and
collaborative behavior [24]. In this sense, cultural appeal strengthens members’ cultural
identification and facilitates behavioral mobilization and collective responses. The
core idea of cultural appeal also aligns with Bourdieu’s theory of cultural capital.
Bourdieu emphasizes that the distribution of cultural capital—especially intangible
forms such as traditions, values, and beliefs—can drive collective mobilization and
social change [25]. Within this theoretical framework, cultural appeal can be viewed
as a form of intangible cultural capital that, by fostering collective identification,
promotes active participation and cooperation among organizational members, thereby
enhancing overall emergency response capacity.”
Reviewer #10
This paper explores the impacts of cultural appeal and social capital on health care’s
emergency capacities.
(1)I don’t understand why the authors introduce the term ‘cultural appeal,’ and I
cannot find any relevant theories or articles on cultural appeal. I am not sure how
such research focusing on cultural appeal would benefit the international audience
of PLOS One.
Response: Thank you for your thoughtful review and valuable feedback. We appreciate
the opportunity to clarify the introduction of the term “cultural appeal” and its
relevance to our study.
First, cultural appeal is a concept we propose to describe the influence of cultural
values and organizational goals in evoking emotional resonance and motivating behavioral
change. Drawing from organizational culture theory, we explore how cultural norms
and shared values within organizations, particularly in emergency management, can
strengthen cooperation and enhance response capacity. While the concept may not be
widely established in emergency management, we believe it offers a novel perspective
for improving the operational efficiency of primary care institutions, especially
during crises. By reinforcing cultural appeal, organizations can foster a sense of
responsibility and engagement among their members, leading to more effective emergency
responses.
Regarding the absence of relevant theories or studies, we have cited related research
that draws from established international theories such as organizational culture
and cultural capital. While “cultural appeal” may be more common in Chinese discourse,
its core principles align with internationally recognized concepts. For example, research
by Gennadi and Naira on cultural identification shows how collective values influence
individual behaviors, especially in culturally congruent contexts. Similarly, Michaels
and Rettig’s work on culturally appealing climate frames demonstrates how cultural
values can dominate public discourse and drive action.
Additionally, Bourdieu’s cultural capital theory provides further support, particularly
regarding intangible cultural assets like values and traditions that help mobilize
collective action. In our study, we view cultural appeal as a form of cultural capital
that enhances emergency response by fostering collective identification and shared
organizational values. This framing aligns with Bourdieu’s ideas, where cultural capital
can generate emotional energy and social mobilization within organizations.
As for the relevance of this work to the international readership of PLOS ONE, we
highlight that the influence of culture on emergency management is gaining global
attention, especially in the wake of public health emergencies. By focusing on cultural
appeal within Chinese primary healthcare institutions, our study provides insights
that are applicable to multicultural contexts worldwide. Understanding how cultural
forces impact emergency management can offer valuable lessons for improving public
health response capacities across different national and regional settings.
In the revised manuscript, we have further elaborated on the theoretical foundations
of cultural appeal and integrated additional international literature to better contextualize
the concept and strengthen its relevance for global readers. We believe this conceptual
framework can enrich the understanding of emergency management in diverse cultural
environments. We greatly appreciate your insightful comments and look forward to your
feedback. [Literature review and hypotheses] (pages 6-7, lines 138–153)
The sources referenced are
Gevorgyan G, & Manucharova, N. The effects of cultural appeal, product involvement,
and ethnic identity on attitudes and recall in online advertising. Chinese Journal
of Communication, 2015,8(2):196-220.
Michaels L, & Rettig E. A renewable light unto the nations? Modelling the limits of
culturally appealing climate frames: a case study from Israel. Journal of Environmental
Policy & Planning, 2025,27(4):376-389.
(2)I highly suggest that authors present their survey questions in the main text so
that the readers can understand how they constructed variables.
Response: Thank you for your valuable suggestion. We agree that presenting the survey
questions directly in the main text would help readers better understand the construction
of variables. However, due to space limitations, we have opted to include a brief
description of the instrument design and variable operationalization in the Methods
section (pages 15-17, lines 344-345, 358-359, 361-362,373-376). These descriptions
include the number of items, variable dimensions, and representative items, which
help clarify the construction of each variable. The full wording of all survey items
is provided in the Appendix for those who wish to examine the complete instrument.
We believe this approach balances clarity and space constraints while maintaining
transparency in our research methodology. We appreciate your thoughtful suggestion,
and we trust that these revisions enhance the manuscript’s comprehensiveness and readability.
(3)The survey data mainly came from healthcare providers; therefore, lack of an objective
measure of health institutions’ real emergency capacity. Based on Table S2, it seems
the dependent variable, health emergency capabilities (e.g., prevention, preparedness,
response, and recovery), is health providers’ perceptions of their organizations’
emergency capacities. In considering the wider social impacts of a health emergency,
the authors should use more objective measures of emergency capacity.
Response: We understand your point and agree that objective indicators are ideal.
In the revision, we explicitly acknowledge this limitation and discuss how future
research can incorporate a broader set of objective measures of emergency capacity—particularly
response data from actual events and hard preparedness indicators (e.g., stockpiles
of emergency supplies, training frequency). Comparative analyses using such data would
enable a more comprehensive evaluation.
Regarding our choice to measure primary healthcare institutions’ emergency capacity
via healthcare providers’ perceptions of their organizations—rather than purely objective
indicators—we believe this approach also has merit. Providers’ assessments can effectively
reflect day-to-day readiness and response capacity in routine operations. While objective
indicators such as response times, and materials reserves offer direct measures, gathering
such data can be hindered by availability, collection burden, and timing. Moreover,
objective data that can be compared across regions and institutions may be lacking.
Using providers’ subjective evaluations not only captures institutions’ practical
emergency capacity but also illuminates cultural and social factors that influence
emergency management—factors that are difficult to gauge using traditional objective
metrics.
For measurement, we adopted the four widely used dimensions of prevention, preparedness,
response, and recovery. This framework has been validated in multiple international
studies as an effective standard for assessing health emergency capacity. Specifically,
these four dimensions reflect the comprehensive capabilities of health institutions
when facing public health emergencies, covering the full cycle from pre-event planning
to post-event recovery and thereby ensuring a holistic assessment (Smith).
The reference sources are
Gevorgyan G, & Manucharova N .The effects of cultural appeal, product involvement,
and ethnic identity on attitudes and recall in online advertising. Chinese Journal
of Communication, 2015,8(2):196-220.
Michaels L ,Rettig E .A renewable light unto the nations? Modelling the limits of
culturally appealing climate frames: a case study from Israel. Journal of Environmental
Policy & Planning, 2025, 27(4):376-389.
[Research limitations and prospects] (page 37, lines 758–766): “Furthermore, this
study assesses health emergency capacity by surveying healthcare providers’ perceptions
of their organizations’ capabilities, which relies on subjective perceptions rather
than objective measurement. Although such perceptions can reflect providers’ understanding
of institutional readiness, they may also be influenced by factors such as cultural
appeal and social capital. Accordingly, future research could incorporate a broad
set of objective indicators—for example, actual performance in emergency drills, allocation
of emergency resources, and outcomes of responses to public health incidents—to provide
a more comprehensive assessment of health emergency capacity.”
(4)The authors found that cultural appeal has positive impacts on emergency management.
Based on the S2 Table, I wonder how specific measurement items of cultural appeal,
including “having a corresponding culture wall to reflect the organization’s vision
and cultural characteristics”, and “implementing socialist core values,” would impact
emergency capacities. The authors should explicitly discuss and explain the intrinsic
relationship between cultural appeals (e.g., cultural walls, socialist core values)
on emergency capacities and their implications to the international audience.
Response: Thank you for your valuable comments. In response to your question about
the relationship between cultural appeal and emergency management, we have revised
the Discussion and Managerial implications sections.
1) Intrinsic relationship between cultural appeal and emergency response capacity.
In line with Schein’s model, we now conceptualize a “culture wall” as a visible cultural
arti
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Reviewer #11: I am looking at the revision already, seems to have undergone multiple
rounds. Just a few comments
The word culture and cultural appeal seem a bit misleading. I first thought the paper
is about culture in a sense of ethnicity ect., but itis about organization's or work
culture. maybe worth to clarify what culture means here early on.
there is no real justification for the study. maybe better highlight that. i was thinking
a bit So what? why was it really done. that could also be better reflected at the
end in the section about practical considerations. There is not enough about policies
and who could benefit from this study.
Reviewer #12: In response to the previous comments, the authors have introduced new
English-language references in this revision, attempting to support the theoretical
foundation of the core variable "Cultural Appeal" from an international perspective.
This demonstrates the authors' willingness to improve the quality of the manuscript.
However, a detailed forensic review and content verification of the newly cited key
literature—specifically Gevorgyan & Manucharova (2015) and Michaels & Rettig (2025)—reveals
significant issues regarding Disciplinary Mismatch and Construct Validity. The current
method of citation fails to strengthen the theoretical persuasiveness; instead, it
exposes logical flaws in the theoretical construction, thereby weakening the academic
rigor of the study.
1.Irrelevance of Gevorgyan & Manucharova (2015): This reference is a study within
the fields of marketing and advertising. Its core independent variable, "Cultural
Appeal," refers to rhetorical strategies (e.g., collectivism vs. individualism) used
in advertising copy, and its dependent variables are consumer "brand recall" and "purchase
attitudes." Equating a consumer's willingness to click on an advertisement in a low-stakes
environment with a medical professional's emergency response behavior in a life-or-death
situation presents a fundamental logical fallacy. Gevorgyan’s study focuses on Persuasion,
whereas your study focuses on Mobilization. Advertising appeal primarily influences
transient psychological preferences, whereas organizational cultural appeal operates
on enduring professional responsibility. Citing an advertising paper to support a
healthcare management theory is far-fetched and conceptually inappropriate.
2.Misapplication of Michaels & Rettig (2025): This article belongs to the fields of
environmental policy and political communication. The "culturally appealing climate
frames" discussed in the text refer to how politicians utilize grand narratives (e.g.,
"Start-up Nation") to garner public support. You have cited this work to prove that
cultural appeal acts as a positive driver for collective action. However, Michaels'
research actually discusses the limitations and fragility of such drivers. Consequently,
you have cited literature that may fundamentally contradict your own hypothesis.
3. Issues with the "Cultural Appeal" Construct: "Cultural Appeal" is not a standard
construct in international management literature. In the context of Western management
science, the activities described in your manuscript—such as establishing "culture
walls" and practicing "Socialist Core Values"—would more accurately map to concepts
such as Organizational Culture, Safety Climate, or Institutional Logic. Persisting
in the use of the non-standard term "Cultural Appeal" has forced you to cite irrelevant
literature from advertising and political science, resulting in the aforementioned
theoretical inconsistencies.
4.Critique of Terror Management Theory (TMT): The core premise of TMT is that "Mortality
Salience" triggers "Worldview Defense." This defense often manifests as cognitive
rigidity, exclusion, and irrational behavior, rather than the rational and efficient
collaboration required in emergencies. Furthermore, since this study did not measure
"death anxiety" or "defense mechanisms," applying TMT appears to be an over-interpretation
unsupported by your data. It would be more appropriate to frame major public health
events as a "Mortality Salience Context," where the psychological defense mechanisms
of medical staff—as the group closest to death—are critical to maintaining their operational
capacity.
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Academic Editor
After carefully considering the revised manuscript and the reviewers’ latest comments,
I find that the paper has improved in presentation and responsiveness. However, substantial
concerns remain regarding the conceptualization and theoretical grounding of the core
construct, “Cultural Appeal.”
Multiple reviewers independently note that the current theoretical justification relies
on literature drawn from marketing, advertising, and political communication, which
raises issues of disciplinary mismatch and construct validity. In particular, the
way “cultural appeal” is operationalized and theorized does not yet align convincingly
with established frameworks in organizational studies, healthcare management, or emergency
governance. As a result, the added citations do not sufficiently strengthen the theoretical
argument and, in some cases, introduce internal inconsistencies.
Relatedly, the use of Terror Management Theory in the discussion is viewed as insufficiently
supported by the study design, as key psychological mechanisms central to the theory
were not directly measured. This creates a risk of theoretical overextension.
In addition, as noted by Reviewer 11, the term “culture” may be misleading for an
international readership, as the study focuses on organizational or work-related culture
rather than ethnic or national culture. The manuscript would benefit from clearer
early-stage clarification and a more explicit articulation of why this study matters,
including clearer policy and practical implications and identification of intended
beneficiaries.
Taken together, these concerns indicate that the manuscript requires substantial theoretical
revision, particularly with respect to construct definition, theoretical anchoring,
and disciplinary coherence. Further revision would need to go beyond adding or substituting
references and instead involve a careful reconsideration of the core conceptual framework.
Response(1): Thank you very much for your valuable suggestions. In the original manuscript,
the construct labeled “Cultural Appeal” was drawn from a China-specific context and
is not a standard term in international management or organizational research. Moreover,
because its conceptual boundaries were insufficiently specified, our theoretical argument
relied on interdisciplinary literature grounded in divergent construct systems, which
resulted in dispersed theoretical anchoring and internal inconsistencies. Following
the editor’s and reviewers’ recommendations, we therefore corrected this variable
and renamed the core construct throughout the manuscript as “Organizational Culture.”
This revision is not a mere terminological substitution but a conceptual re-grounding
of the focal construct. Specifically, we have consistently replaced the original label
with “Organizational Culture,” and, on this basis, re-specified its definitional scope,
theoretical positioning, and measurement interpretation to align with established
frameworks in organizational studies, healthcare management, and emergency governance.
This re-grounding addresses the "construct validity" issues by ensuring that our independent
variable is mapped to internationally recognized concept systems. Specifically, we
now theorize that the organizational culture in primary healthcare institutions—manifested
through artifacts like "culture walls" and espoused "core values"—is internalized
by staff, thereby directly influencing their emergency response capabilities.
Response(2):The reviewers noted that the added citations in the previous revision
introduced internal inconsistencies. We acknowledge that attempting to "bridge" marketing
literature with healthcare management created a dispersed theoretical focus. In the
current revision, we have removed all references to advertising and political communication.
Instead, we have integrated literature that explores the role of organizational culture
in "health system resilience"—defined as the system's ability to prepare, manage,
and learn from shocks. We now argue that organizational culture serves as the "social
glue" that impacts communication patterns, decision-making, and employee engagement
during public health crises.
We rebuilt the theoretical rationale and hypothesis development within organizational
studies/healthcare management and used Schein’s organizational culture perspective
as a guiding theoretical lens (not as a claim of fully operationalizing all cultural
layers). This lens supports the mechanism that shared values and mission consensus
can facilitate coordination and collective action in high-stakes response settings.
We adopted Edgar Schein’s organizational culture theory as the central theoretical
anchor and rebuilt the logic of hypothesis development and discussion accordingly.
The specific changes can be found in the revised manuscript: Introduction (page 4,
lines 77–88), Literature review and hypotheses (pages 6-7, lines 145–156; page 11,
lines 240–246)).
Response(3): We agree with the reviewers that because we did not directly measure
death anxiety or specific psychological defense mechanisms, using TMT constituted
a "theoretical overextension". Attempting to infer "mortality salience" without direct
measurement is speculative and outside the scope of our cross-sectional SEM design.
We also specify the deletion locations and the substituted explanations in our point-by-point
response to Reviewer 11. The specific changes can be found in the revised manuscript:
Discussion (page 29, lines 565–580).
[Introduction] (page 4, lines 77–88) : “Organizational culture” refers to the collective
consciousness, shared values, ethical principles, and normative expectations that
organizational members develop and uphold through organizational practices under specific
socio-economic conditions [14,15]. A constructive organizational culture can subtly
motivate members to engage proactively in emergency-related tasks and can strengthen
organizational cohesion and response capability. Building on this understanding, organizational
culture theory emphasizes that cultural attributes within organizations shape members’
behaviors and decision-making processes[16]. Although organizational culture is largely
tacit and intangible, it constitutes one of the most enduring and foundational characteristics
of an organization. To date, however, empirical research that treats organizational
culture as a key explanatory variable for enhancing public health emergency capacity
in primary healthcare institutions remains limited.
[Literature review and hypotheses] (pages 6-7, lines 145–156): The functions of organizational
culture include fostering internal integration and coordination by sustaining organizational
stability and cultivating a sense of belonging and altruism, all of which guide and
shape employees’ behaviors . Schein’s theory of organizational culture further emphasizes
that shared beliefs and cultural values are embedded in strategic goals and organizational
ideology, becoming internalized in members’ cognitions and thereby influencing their
attitudes, motivation, and collaborative behaviors [24].Previous research has demonstrated
that shared cultural identity and a positive organizational climate can strengthen
organizational cohesion and willingness to cooperate, thereby enhancing risk response
and crisis management capabilities [25,26]. An analysis of tertiary hospital organizational
culture by Reem et al. revealed a positive correlation between cultural norms, organizational
goals, and emergency response capacity [27].
[Literature review and hypotheses] (page 11, lines 240–246): Organizational culture
fosters internal cohesion and a shared public mission, which in turn catalyzes and
mobilizes the social capital embedded within the community ecosystems of primary healthcare
institutions (PHIs). Extant literature (e.g., [42]) suggests that the synergy between
cultural orientation and institutional support fortifies both structural and relational
social capital in marginalized regions. This reinforcement significantly enhances
the "adaptive resilience" of PHIs, enabling more robust recovery and response mechanisms
in the aftermath of natural disasters.
Reviewer #11
I am looking at the revision already, seems to have undergone multiple rounds. Just
a few comments
The word culture and cultural appeal seem a bit misleading. I first thought the paper
is about culture in a sense of ethnicity ect., but itis about organization's or work
culture. maybe worth to clarify what culture means here early on.
there is no real justification for the study. maybe better highlight that. i was thinking
a bit So what? why was it really done. that could also be better reflected at the
end in the section about practical considerations. There is not enough about policies
and who could benefit from this study.
Response(1): We are deeply grateful for the constructive feedback provided in the
previous rounds. In this final revision, we have meticulously refined the theoretical
grounding and practical implications of our study to ensure disciplinary coherence
and clarity for an international readership. We have consistently revised the focal
construct throughout the manuscript to “Organizational Culture” and removed the term
“cultural appeal” to prevent international readers from associating it with ethnic
or national culture. Our study focuses exclusively on the “Organizational Culture”.
While national culture changes slowly over generations, organizational culture is
dynamic and can be shifted by leadership and management over shorter periods to meet
strategic goals. By defining organizational culture as "how members relate to each
other, to their work, and to the outside world," we clarify that our research is about
institutional governance rather than ethnic characteristics. This distinction is critical
for the generalizability of the findings to international contexts where different
national cultures might still share similar organizational management challenges.
In terms of theoretical grounding, we introduced Edgar Schein’s organizational culture
theory as the primary framework and incorporated seminal studies on healthcare organizational
culture and emergency preparedness/response, thereby situating our theoretical development
firmly within the domains of organizational behavior and health services management.
The specific changes can be found in the revised manuscript: Introduction (page 4,
lines 77–88).
Response(2): Regarding the study’s purpose, we rewrote the research motivation in
the Introduction. We note that prior work on health emergency preparedness has predominantly
emphasized the “hard” determinants of capacity—such as large hospitals, material infrastructure,
and formalized procedures. In contrast, primary healthcare institutions function as
frontline and terminal implementation units within the emergency system, yet they
frequently operate under conditions of constrained resources, workforce shortages,
and incomplete routines. Under such constraints, variation in emergency capacity may
depend more heavily on organizational “soft infrastructure.” Accordingly, we argue
that organizational culture constitutes a critical intangible resource in grassroots
settings, shaping coordination efficiency, rule compliance, and mobilization capability
when material resources are insufficient. Building on this premise, our study examines
how organizational culture can partially compensate for limited infrastructure and
thereby strengthen emergency capacity in resource-constrained primary healthcare contexts.
The specific changes can be found in the revised manuscript: Introduction (page 6,
lines 131–141).
Response(3): In response to the reviewer’s “So what?” concern, we revised the concluding
synthesis based on our multi-group analysis and articulated the study’s central practical
contribution more explicitly. Specifically, we advance an integrated perspective of
“cultural empowerment and social-capital synergy” to guide the development of emergency
capacity in primary healthcare institutions, directly addressing why the study matters.
We also expanded the “Managerial Implications” section to clarify policy relevance
and intended beneficiaries. We highlight that strengthening organizational culture
provides a concrete pathway for translating the Healthy China strategy and professional
ethos into grassroots practice. A "culture wall" in a primary healthcare center is
a physical manifestation of "espoused beliefs" that fosters internal integration and
a sense of shared purpose. Similarly, "Socialist Core Values" serve as a "soft constraint"
and a carrier of specific cultural values that promote collaboration and discipline.
By framing these through the lens of informal institutions and organizational behavior,
we show how they contribute to a "safety-conscious work environment" and enhance the
"disciplined atmosphere" necessary for effective emergency response. Then, for resource-constrained,
aged communities, reinforcing structural social capital represents a key leverage
point for addressing emergency-capacity shortfalls; for general communities, priority
should be placed on cultivating relational ties. These measures are expected to benefit
healthcare workers directly and, ultimately, improve outcomes for community residents
by supporting evidence-informed “culture–emergency” integration strategies for primary
healthcare institutions. The specific changes can be found in the revised manuscript:
[Conclusion] (pages 32-33, lines 660–671) and [Managerial implications] (pages 35-37,
lines 697–712, lines 722–732, lines 742–749).
[Introduction] (page 6, lines 131–141) : Consequently, focusing on primary healthcare
institutions (PHIs), this study integrates organizational culture theory and social
capital theory to achieve a threefold objective: (1) to evaluate the direct impacts
of organizational culture and social capital on the health emergency capacity of PHIs;
(2) to elucidate the mediating mechanism of social capital in the nexus between organizational
culture and emergency capacity; and (3) to scrutinize whether these relationships
exhibit heterogeneity across diverse community contexts. By addressing these objectives,
this research contributes to the extant literature by offering theoretical insights
and evidence-based strategies for augmenting the systemic resilience and emergency
responsiveness of primary healthcare systems.
[Conclusion] (pages 32-33, lines 669–681) : Multi-group analyses further reveal community-level
heterogeneity in these pathways: in general communities, relational and cognitive
social capital exert significant effects, whereas in resource-constrained, older communities,
structural social capital emerges as the pivotal mediator. The central practical contribution
of this study is to demonstrate that strengthening primary healthcare institutions’
emergency capacity is not merely a matter of increasing resource inputs; rather, it
is a systemic endeavor that hinges on the synergy between cultural enablement and
social-capital mobilization. This perspective offers health authorities and institutional
managers an alternative to conventional “hard-capacity” approaches by emphasizing
the cultivation of shared values and internal cohesion, together with the strategically
targeted development of external community networks. Such efforts can activate and
amplify limited emergency resources, thereby translating them into substantive improvements
in emergency response effectiveness.
Reviewer #12
1.Irrelevance of Gevorgyan & Manucharova (2015): This reference is a study within
the fields of marketing and advertising. Its core independent variable, "Cultural
Appeal," refers to rhetorical strategies (e.g., collectivism vs. individualism) used
in advertising copy, and its dependent variables are consumer "brand recall" and "purchase
attitudes." Equating a consumer's willingness to click on an advertisement in a low-stakes
environment with a medical professional's emergency response behavior in a life-or-death
situation presents a fundamental logical fallacy. Gevorgyan’s study focuses on Persuasion,
whereas your study focuses on Mobilization. Adverti
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Reviewer #13: The manuscript presents a study examining the relationship between organizational
culture, social capital, and emergency response performance using SEM on a relatively
strong sample size (N=983), and while the title and abstract are reasonably clear
and informative, they remain somewhat overloaded with variables and read more like
a technical summary than a compelling research narrative; the introduction has improved
compared to earlier versions by clarifying the motivation and focusing on healthcare
systems, yet it still lacks a strong and naturally convincing research gap, giving
the impression of a constructed rather than inherent contribution; the literature
review and theoretical framework represent the weakest component of the study, as
the initial conceptual confusion (particularly the use of “cultural appeal”) and inconsistent
theoretical grounding were only partially resolved by shifting to organizational culture,
resulting in a framework that feels retrofitted rather than conceptually robust; the
methodology is generally acceptable, supported by an adequate sample size, appropriate
use of SEM, and clear ethical considerations, but it is limited by its cross-sectional
design, reliance on self-reported data, and insufficient depth in capturing underlying
psychological or organizational mechanisms; the results are statistically sound and
clearly presented, with some added value from multi-group analysis, yet they remain
predictable and offer limited theoretical insight; the discussion has improved by
removing inappropriate theoretical applications such as Terror Management Theory and
aligning interpretations more closely with the data, though some degree of over-interpretation
persists; the conclusion and implications provide practical relevance for healthcare
management and policy, but tend to overstate the contribution given the modest originality
of the findings; overall, despite strengths in data size, methodological execution,
and applied relevance, the manuscript suffers from fundamental conceptual instability,
limited novelty, and a theoretical foundation that appears reactive rather than well-developed,
leading to the final recommendation of rejection (borderline major revision), as the
core issues are too significant to justify further rounds of revision at this stage.
Reviewer #14: Thank you for submitting the updated version of the manuscript. I think
that the paper is well-written and addresses a valuable and relevant gap. You have
also addressed the comments that you were given in a proper manner.
Minor issue: Please make sure to fix the referencing error in line 336.
Reviewer #15: After several rounds of revisions, I believe that the authors have effectively
addressed the shortcomings pointed out by the reviewers.
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Reviewer #13: Yes: The manuscript presents a study examining the relationship between organizational
culture, social capital, and emergency response performance using SEM on a relatively
strong sample size (N=983), and while the title and abstract are reasonably clear
and informative, they remain somewhat overloaded with variables and read more like
a technical summary than a compelling research narrative; the introduction has improved
compared to earlier versions by clarifying the motivation and focusing on healthcare
systems, yet it still lacks a strong and naturally convincing research gap, giving
the impression of a constructed rather than inherent contribution; the literature
review and theoretical framework represent the weakest component of the study, as
the initial conceptual confusion (particularly the use of “cultural appeal”) and inconsistent
theoretical grounding were only partially resolved by shifting to organizational culture,
resulting in a framework that feels retrofitted rather than conceptually robust; the
methodology is generally acceptable, supported by an adequate sample size, appropriate
use of SEM, and clear ethical considerations, but it is limited by its cross-sectional
design, reliance on self-reported data, and insufficient depth in capturing underlying
psychological or organizational mechanisms; the results are statistically sound and
clearly presented, with some added value from multi-group analysis, yet they remain
predictable and offer limited theoretical insight; the discussion has improved by
removing inappropriate theoretical applications such as Terror Management Theory and
aligning interpretations more closely with the data, though some degree of over-interpretation
persists; the conclusion and implications provide practical relevance for healthcare
management and policy, but tend to overstate the contribution given the modest originality
of the findings; overall, despite strengths in data size, methodological execution,
and applied relevance, the manuscript suffers from fundamental conceptual instability,
limited novelty, and a theoretical foundation that appears reactive rather than well-developed,
leading to the final recommendation of rejection (borderline major revision), as the
core issues are too significant to justify further rounds of revision at this stage.
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Point-by-point responses to the Reviewers’ comments
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1.Refines and streamlines the theoretical positioning, avoiding overstated claims
of mechanism or contribution
Response: Thank you for this important comment. We agree that the manuscript should
not be positioned as establishing a definitive mechanism or making a broad theoretical
breakthrough. In the revised manuscript, we have further reframed the study as a context-specific
empirical examination of associations among organizational culture, social capital,
and perceived health emergency capacity in primary healthcare institutions.
In the abstract and introduction, we have reformulated the research objective by shifting
the emphasis away from “mechanism explanation” and toward testing the path relationships
among organizational culture, social capital, and public health emergency capacity
using a structural equation modeling approach. The revised manuscript now makes it
clear that the focus of this study is to examine the structural relationships among
variables and their statistical significance, rather than to offer a definitive explanation
of causal mechanisms. The specific changes can be found in the revised manuscript:
Abstract (page 2, lines 24-40), Introduction (pages 4-6, lines 83-86; page 11, lines
98-101).
In the hypothesis development sections, we have condensed and integrated the relevant
content, removed some repetitive or overly extended theoretical descriptions, and
strengthened the direct logical link between organizational culture and social capital.
As a result, the theoretical framework is now more focused on the core variables and
their relational pathways, thereby improving the overall conciseness and coherence
of the manuscript. The specific changes can be found in the revised manuscript: Literature
review and hypotheses (page 7, lines 144-152; page 8, lines 174-191;page 9, lines
203-207; page10, lines 214-217; page11, lines 233-240).
At the same time, we have toned down the wording of the theoretical contribution,
revising stronger expressions such as “overcoming” and “innovation” to more measured
formulations such as “complement existing literature” and “extend prior research.”
Overall, the study is now positioned as providing empirical evidence rather than establishing
a definitive mechanism. We hope these revisions enhance the rigor of the theoretical
presentation and ensure better alignment with the research design. The specific changes
can be found in the revised manuscript: Theoretical contribution (page 33, lines 660-667),
Managerial implications (page 33, lines 674-680).
[Introduction] (page 2, lines 24-40) : The emergency capacity of primary healthcare
institutions is critical to the effectiveness of grassroots emergency management.
This study examines the relationships among organizational culture, social capital,
and the emergency capacity of primary healthcare institutions using a structural equation
modeling approach. A questionnaire survey was conducted among healthcare professionals,
yielding 983 valid responses for analysis. The results indicate that organizational
culture, as well as structural, relational, and cognitive dimensions of social capital,
are significantly associated with the emergency capacity of primary healthcare institutions
within the model. In addition, social capital demonstrates mediating roles in the
relationship between organizational culture and emergency capacity. Multi-group structural
equation modeling further reveals variations across community types: relational social
capital shows stronger associations with emergency capacity in ordinary communities,
whereas structural social capital is more prominent in older communities. These findings
provide empirical evidence on how organizational culture and social capital are linked
to emergency capacity in primary healthcare settings, highlighting the importance
of both internal cultural development and external social resources in different phases
of emergency management.
[Theoretical contribution] (page33, lines 658-673) :This study demonstrated the significant
influence of organizational culture and social capital on health emergency capacity,
offering several theoretical contributions. By incorporating organizational culture
into the analytical framework of emergency preparedness in primary healthcare institutions,
this study examines its relationship with health emergency capacity, thereby extending
existing perspectives that have predominantly focused on institutional arrangements,
resources, and technical capabilities. Moreover, by comparing the differential roles
of various types of social capital within the pathways linking organizational culture
and emergency capacity, this study further extends the empirical research on the relationship
between organizational culture and social capital. A further innovation lies in accounting
for heterogeneity at the community level: we systematically tested how organizational
culture and the three forms of social capital differentially affect health emergency
capacity across community contexts. This community-type perspective—seldom employed
in previous research—offers a novel lens for cultivating organizational culture and
social capital in primary healthcare institutions according to local community characteristics.
2. Revises the discussion to ensure that interpretations remain proportionate to the
data
Response: Thank you for the editor’s valuable suggestion. We have reorganized the
structure of the Discussion section to ensure that each subsection is strictly aligned
with the results of the structural equation modeling, thereby avoiding speculative
interpretations that go beyond the empirical findings.
Specifically, Section 5.1 focuses on interpreting the results of the direct effects,
including the path coefficients of organizational culture and different dimensions
of social capital on public health emergency capacity. Section 5.2 discusses the differences
in indirect effects among various forms of social capital based on the Bootstrap mediation
analysis results. Section 5.3 provides a comparative analysis of the differences in
path coefficients between general communities and aging communities, based on the
multigroup SEM results.
During the revision process, we removed statements related to psychological mechanisms
(e.g., mortality salience context and emotional buffering), as these constructs were
not directly measured in this study and could otherwise lead to over-interpretation.
In addition, we revised the interpretation of the multigroup SEM results by shifting
from mechanism-oriented explanations to a more data-driven description of path differences
based on Bootstrap results, emphasizing the varying strengths of indirect effects
of social capital across different community types. We also refined the discussion
of the implications derived from the multigroup analysis to avoid excessive inference
beyond the empirical evidence. The specific changes can be found in the revised manuscript:
Discussion (page 28, lines 555-559; page29, lines 571-576,580-598; page 31, lines
626-633).
3. Clearly acknowledges design limitations and avoids causal language
Response: Thank you for the editor’s valuable comments. We have further strengthened
the description of the study’s design limitations and made consistent revisions throughout
the manuscript to avoid presenting path results derived from cross-sectional structural
equation modeling (SEM) as strict causal relationships. Specifically, the revisions
are as follows:
(1) In the limitations section, we explicitly acknowledge the constraints of the cross-sectional
design. Structural equation modeling is primarily used to test theoretical path relationships
and assess model fit; therefore, it can provide evidence of associations between variables
but does not support strict causal inference. The specific changes can be found in
the revised manuscript: Research limitations and prospects (page 36, lines 727-734).
(2) In the discussion section, we have toned down expressions that may imply causality.
Stronger terms such as “influence” “effect” and “promote” have been revised to more
appropriate formulations consistent with cross-sectional SEM, such as “path relationship”
“statistical association” “model-implied relationship” or “significant path relationship
within the model”. The specific changes can be found in the revised manuscript: Discussion
(page 28, lines 555-559; page29, lines 571-576,580-598; page 31, lines 626-633).
(3) In the conclusion section, we further avoided causal language that exceeds the
scope of the research design. We emphasize that the findings primarily reflect the
path relationships and variations specified in the theoretical model within the sample,
rather than providing definitive confirmation of causal effects. The specific changes
can be found in the revised manuscript: Research limitations and prospects (page 32,
lines 636-656).
[Research limitations and prospects] (page 36, lines 727-734) : This study presents
the following limitations. First, this study adopts a cross-sectional design, which
captures data at a single point in time and limits the ability to establish temporal
ordering or infer causal pathways among variables. Therefore, although structural
equation modeling was employed to examine the path relationships among variables,
the results should be interpreted as reflecting statistical associations and model-implied
pathways rather than definitive causal relationships. Future research could employ
longitudinal or intervention-based designs to further investigate temporal dynamics
and potential causal pathways among these variables.
[Conclusion] (page 32, lines 636-656) : This study focuses on primary healthcare institutions
and differs from much of the existing literature that emphasizes large hospitals or
macro-level emergency systems. From the perspective of community-based, grassroots
healthcare service settings, it examines the path relationships among variables associated
with health emergency capacity. This perspective provides additional empirical evidence
that contributes to the literature on emergency preparedness at the primary healthcare
level. The results indicate that organizational culture in primary healthcare institutions
is positively associated with health emergency capacity both directly and indirectly
through different forms of social capital, with the pathway via relational social
capital exhibiting the strongest effect. Multi-group analysis further reveals heterogeneity
across community contexts: in ordinary communities, relational and cognitive social
capital show significant associations with health emergency capacity, whereas in resource-constrained
older communities, the mediating role of structural social capital is more pronounced.
These findings suggest that improvements in the emergency capacity of primary healthcare
institutions are not only related to resource inputs but are also associated with
organizational culture and social capital. From a practical perspective, the results
provide a complementary “soft-capacity” lens for health authorities and institutional
managers, highlighting the potential value of fostering shared values and internal
cohesion, alongside the targeted development of social capital, to support the effective
utilization of emergency resources and improve emergency capacity at the primary healthcare
level.
Reviewer #13:
The manuscript presents a study examining the relationship between organizational
culture, social capital, and emergency response performance using SEM on a relatively
strong sample size (N=983), and while the title and abstract are reasonably clear
and informative, they remain somewhat overloaded with variables and read more like
a technical summary than a compelling research narrative; the introduction has improved
compared to earlier versions by clarifying the motivation and focusing on healthcare
systems, yet it still lacks a strong and naturally convincing research gap, giving
the impression of a constructed rather than inherent contribution; the literature
review and theoretical framework represent the weakest component of the study, as
the initial conceptual confusion (particularly the use of “cultural appeal”) and inconsistent
theoretical grounding were only partially resolved by shifting to organizational culture,
resulting in a framework that feels retrofitted rather than conceptually robust; the
methodology is generally acceptable, supported by an adequate sample size, appropriate
use of SEM, and clear ethical considerations, but it is limited by its cross-sectional
design, reliance on self-reported data, and insufficient depth in capturing underlying
psychological or organizational mechanisms; the results are statistically sound and
clearly presented, with some added value from multi-group analysis, yet they remain
predictable and offer limited theoretical insight; the discussion has improved by
removing inappropriate theoretical applications such as Terror Management Theory and
aligning interpretations more closely with the data, though some degree of over-interpretation
persists; the conclusion and implications provide practical relevance for healthcare
management and policy, but tend to overstate the contribution given the modest originality
of the findings; overall, despite strengths in data size, methodological execution,
and applied relevance, the manuscript suffers from fundamental conceptual instability,
limited novelty, and a theoretical foundation that appears reactive rather than well-developed,
leading to the final recommendation of rejection (borderline major revision), as the
core issues are too significant to justify further rounds of revision at this stage.
Response: Thank you for this careful and critical assessment. We have taken your concerns
seriously and have revised the manuscript to better match the actual strength and
scope of the study. We agree that the manuscript should not be presented as a theory-building
paper or as establishing a deep causal mechanism. Accordingly, we have repositioned
the manuscript as a context-specific empirical study of associations among organizational
culture, social capital, and perceived emergency capacity in primary healthcare institutions.
Our revisions address your concerns in the following ways:
(1) We revised the title and abstract to reduce variable overload and to make the
study design clearer. The revised title now explicitly identifies the study as a cross-sectional
SEM study comparing ordinary and older communities. The abstract now emphasizes the
empirical setting, the cross-sectional design, and the interpretation of the results
as model-implied associations. The specific changes can be found in the revised manuscript:
Abstract (page 2, lines 24-40).
(2) In the introduction, we refined the presentation of the research gap to make it
more natural and focused. The revised text now emphasizes that prior research on PHI
emergency capacity has primarily concentrated on formal resources and managerial arrangements,
while paying less attention to internal organizational culture and community-embedded
social capital, and rarely examining their roles within a unified analytical framework.
The specific changes can be found in the revised manuscript: Introduction (pages 4-6,
lines 83-86; page 11, lines 98-101).
(3) Regarding the literature review, we agree that this section required a stronger
conceptual logic. We therefore simplified the hypothesis development section and concentrated
on a narrower and more coherent set of arguments. Overly broad or weakly connected
theoretical claims were removed, and the transition to the hypotheses was rewritten
to clarify that the framework serves as a basis for examining associative relationships,
rather than claiming to validate deep causal mechanisms. The specific changes can
be found in the revised manuscript: Literature review and hypotheses (page 7, lines
144-152; page 8, lines 174-191;page 9, lines 203-207; page10, lines 214-217; page11,
lines 233-240).
(4) In response to your concern regarding conceptual ambiguity, we further simplified
the conceptualization of organizational culture. We removed language that could imply
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Organizational culture, social capital, and emergency capacity in primary healthcare
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