Peer Review History
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-->-->PONE-D-25-47064-->-->Aerobic capacity and muscular strength in 179 Norwegian men and women aged 20-59 years with a substance use disorder: A cross-sectional study-->-->PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Loe, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 28 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: The research question is clearly defined, and the study design—a cross-sectional assessment using direct cardiopulmonary exercise testing (CPET) and muscular strength testing—is suitable to meet the stated objectives. The methodology is described in detail, with careful calibration of equipment and the use of standardized testing protocols. The statistical analysis was correctly selected and applied (ANOVA, Bonferroni correction, t-tests, Pearson correlations), ensuring the reliability of the results. The findings show consistently lower aerobic capacity and muscular strength in SUD patients compared to healthy reference populations. The conclusions are well aligned with the data presented. Data Availability While the manuscript states that “all relevant data are within the manuscript and its supporting information files” and that data will be made available upon acceptance, this does not fully comply with the PLOS ONE Data Availability Policy. The raw data underlying the results (e.g., individual-level data points behind the means, standard deviations, and figures) are not currently included in the submission. To ensure transparency and reproducibility, the authors should provide anonymized individual-level data in a public repository or as supplementary files. Language and Presentation The manuscript is clearly written in standard English. The language is professional, understandable, and suitable for publication. Minor typographical and formatting errors can be corrected during revision, but overall the text is clear, concise, and unambiguous. Additional Comments The study’s strengths include its relatively large sample of patients with SUD, the use of objective and direct measurements of VO₂max and muscular strength, and the comparison with large normative reference datasets. Limitations are acknowledged, including small subgroup sizes in older age groups, potential selection bias (where less fit participants may have opted out), and the lack of female participants above 49 years. The authors may consider further discussion on the clinical implications of their findings for rehabilitation and health promotion programs in SUD populations. Overall Recommendation This is a well-conducted study that provides valuable new reference data. The main revision needed is compliance with the PLOS ONE Data Availability Policy by providing the raw data underlying the findings. Once this is addressed, the manuscript will be suitable for publication. Reviewer #2: Manuscript ID: PONE-D-25-47064 Title: Aerobic capacity and muscular strength in 179 Norwegian men and women aged 20–59 years with a substance use disorder: A cross-sectional study This study assesses aerobic capacity (VO₂max) and muscular strength (1RM) in adults with substance use disorders (SUD) using direct physiological testing. A total of 179 inpatients (aged 20–59 years) from a Norwegian clinic were compared with normative data from healthy populations. The results show substantially lower aerobic capacity and strength across all age groups, highlighting a potential link between physical deconditioning and elevated health risks in this population. The topic is relevant and timely. Direct measurement of VO₂max and 1RM in people with SUD is uncommon, and this dataset provides valuable clinical and public-health insight. 1. Strengths - The study addresses a clear evidence gap and offers meaningful clinical reference data for a vulnerable group. - The use of direct CPET with calibration and a standardized strength protocol adds credibility. The application of allometric scaling is also commendable. - Ethical approval, recruitment period, and trial registration are clearly reported. - Tables and descriptions are generally well structured, and the discussion connects the results with existing literature. 2. Major Comments 1. Selection bias and representativeness Because participation required maximal testing, the sample may represent the fitter segment of the SUD inpatient population. Please provide the number of screened, excluded, or non-participating individuals and, if possible, basic characteristics (e.g., age, sex, BMI) to help readers assess representativeness. 2. Statistical adjustment for confounders The analyses are largely descriptive. Consider including regression models that adjust for potential confounders (age, BMI, smoking, type/duration of substance use, medications, comorbidities). Even simple adjusted models would enhance analytical rigor. 3. Limited subgroup power Some subgroups (notably older women) are small. Report confidence intervals and effect sizes to aid interpretation and explicitly discuss this limitation. 4. Comparability of reference values The use of the HUNT3 dataset as reference data is appropriate geographically, but readers need clarity on differences in testing protocols, calibration, and population characteristics. A brief summary table or paragraph would help contextualize the comparisons. 5. Data availability statement PLOS ONE requires data to be available at publication unless legal or ethical barriers apply. Please clarify exactly how and when data will be shared (e.g., through an anonymized repository, with DOI or controlled access). 6. Adverse events and test completion Given the maximal CPET and 1RM protocols, please report whether any participants failed to complete testing or experienced adverse events, and how these cases were handled. 7. Instrumentation note The manuscript mentions a 5.5% error at very high ventilation rates (VE > 180 L/min). Indicate how many participants this affected and whether this could meaningfully influence results. 3. Minor and Editorial Comments - Report 95% confidence intervals and effect sizes (Cohen’s d, η², etc.) for key comparisons. - Verify assumptions of normality and variance homogeneity; note if any nonparametric approaches were used when appropriate. - Streamline sections of the discussion to reduce redundancy and focus on the main messages. - Adding scatterplots (e.g., VO₂max vs. age, strength vs. age) would help visualize inter-individual variability. - Clarify technical terms (e.g., “O₂ pulse,” “allometric scaling”) for non-specialist readers. - A light proofreading for grammar and flow would further improve readability. 4. Are the Conclusions Supported by the Data? In general, yes. The observed reductions in VO₂max and strength among participants with SUD are consistent with prior knowledge. However, the conclusions should remain descriptive rather than causal, given the cross-sectional design and absence of adjustment for potential confounders. Emphasizing this limitation would make the interpretation more balanced and scientifically precise. 5. Recommendation : Major Revision This is a valuable and well-conducted study that could make a meaningful contribution once some clarifications and analytical refinements are addressed. The issues identified—mainly regarding statistical adjustment, transparency about sample selection, and data-sharing details—are entirely fixable within a reasonable revision process. With these improvements, the manuscript would be strong enough for publication in PLOS ONE. Reviewer #3: I would like to appreciate the efforts of the authors in implementing the project and writing this article “Aerobic capacity and muscular strength in 179 Norwegian men and women aged 20-59 years with a substance use disorder: A cross-sectional study”. The main objective of this study was to contribute to the establishment of reference values for directly measured parameters of aerobic capacity and muscular strength in patients with SUD and to compare these data with normative values consisting of apparently healthy age-appropriate controls. The submitted article contains valuable data on aerobic capacity and muscular strength in patients with addiction and provides the most extensive set of reference values in this population. I have the following comments or questions: - How was it determined in the selection of participants who is able to perform exhaustive endurance and strength training and total testing. I recommend describing the selection criteria in more detail. - I believe that the study would benefit greatly from reporting the differences in measured VO2max values in the general population This would facilitate readers interpretation of the results given - I recommend to deepen the discussion on the possible biochemical and psychosocial causes of the observed deficits. ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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-->PONE-D-25-47064R1-->-->Aerobic capacity and muscular strength in 179 Norwegian men and women aged 20-59 years with a substance use disorder: A cross-sectional study-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Loe, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 17 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript.-->
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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.--> Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** -->2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #2: The revised manuscript substantially addresses the concerns from the first review round and is now suitable for PLOS ONE with minor revisions. - Strengths: Added non-participant count (87% inclusion), HUNT3 reference section/Table 2, CIs in Tables 4-5, effect sizes (η²), scatterplots, and VO2max regression (Table 6). Conclusions appropriately descriptive. - Remaining issues: *Data availability: Specify repository (e.g., Figshare/Zenodo), DOI, or exact mechanism. *Tables 4/5: Reformatting needed—align columns, fit on one page if possible, consistent CI notation (e.g., 45.9 [44.5–47.3]). - Minor language/formatting (e.g., "was tested" → "were tested"; effect sizes like "20.329 0,327" need decimal fix). **Recommendation**: Minor revision. Core science solid and valuable. Reviewer #3: The work is very interesting, all my comments have been incorporated and resolved. I have no further questions or comments. ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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