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Original SubmissionJuly 31, 2025
Decision Letter - Leonard Uzairue, Editor

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Comments to the Author

1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: General Comments

This manuscript addresses an important and timely topic, namely the prevalence of ESBL-producing and carbapenem-resistant E. coli and Salmonella spp. in poultry meat and live bird market (LBM) sewage in Bangladesh. The study is ambitious, covering all eight divisions of the country, and provides valuable epidemiological data with direct relevance for food safety and antimicrobial resistance (AMR) surveillance.

The paper is methodologically sound, but the manuscript is lengthy, data-heavy, and at times repetitive. The clarity of presentation can be improved by streamlining results, tightening the introduction and discussion, and emphasizing the key public health implications.

Specific comments are provided below.

Specific Comments

Abstract

Well done, it is recommended that only the main prevalence figures and key results be highlighted.

Introduction

Well contextualized, but partially repetitive (antibiotic misuse, poultry as reservoir). Condense to improve flow.

Explicitly state the knowledge gap: previous studies in Bangladesh were fragmented, this is the first comprehensive survey covering all divisions.

Methods

Sampling design is solid but justification for “5 samples per LBM” should be added.

Clarify whether clustering effects (design effect) were considered in sample size calculation.

Provide more detail on the positive and negative controls used in PCR assays.

Results

Results are highly detailed, with many percentages. Consider moving some data to supplementary materials.

Figures and maps are informative but crowded; merging or simplifying some would enhance readability.

Report confidence intervals along with prevalence estimates.

Discussion

The discussion is well written, but could perhaps be improved by better comparing more recent studies, if available, from South/South-East Asia and Africa.

Perhaps a clearer distinction could be made between explanations based on concrete evidence (e.g. the use of antibiotics) and more speculative interpretations.

Discuss in more detail the feasibility of the proposed interventions (antibiotic management, LBM sanitation services) in the context of Bangladesh.

Conclusion

The conclusions appear appropriate. Nevertheless, it would be advisable to include, among the practical recommendations, the strengthening of biosecurity measures throughout all stages of production and the implementation of stricter drug control. Such measures are consistent with practices adopted in other production systems, where antimicrobials are administered exclusively following a veterinary diagnosis and several active substances are restricted from use in livestock production.

Grammatical or stylistic corrections

Line 55- in the medical, veterinary and agriculture sectors.. correct in... medical, veterinary, and agricultural sectors.

Line 57-58 - ...through faces or manure... feces” (non “faces”).

Line 59-61 - ...and it is anticipated to climb by 67% by 2030 in rapidly polluting and developing countries around the world.... shorten the thought type.....and is projected to rise by 67% by 2030, particularly in rapidly developing countries.”

Line 64–67-“However, the chicken industry's fast expansion, combined with widespread and frequently uncontrolled antibiotic usage, has contributed to the spread of MDR bacteria across the food chain.” Better .. “The rapid expansion of the chicken industry, combined with uncontrolled antibiotic usage, has facilitated the spread of MDR bacteria through the food chain”.

Line 86-87 ...E. coli and Salmonella spp., that produces ESBLs, and demonstrates MDR, has implications...”

correct in... “that produce ESBLs and demonstrate MDR have implications...”

Line 93–94 - “...have demonstrated alarming levels of resistance...” better..high levels (eliminate alarming).

Line 109–110 - “...possible hotspot for ESBL-producing and carbapenem resistant bacteria to humans.” Better “hotspot for transmission ... to humans.”

Line 523 ....were MDR..” there is a double point

Line 526–535 -“The occurrence of high MDR and existance of pXDR among ESBL-producing and CR-E. coli and Salmonella spp. could be due to widespreed and unrestricted use of antibiotics during poultry production in Bangladesh as well as low levels of waste management system, which increases selective pressure for MDR bacteria, thus facilitating the emergence and dissemination of MDR foodborne bacteria in poultry production system and retail poultry products.” The sentence is too long. It should be split into at least two clauses.

Line 531–532 .....high MDR and existance of pXDR.... correct as “existence”.

Line 533....widespreed and unrestricted use... correct as “widespread”.

Line 555...ESBL-prodicing...” correct as .“producing”.

Line 606–608

“The drug regularity authority of Bangladesh should develop an implementable monitoring and evaluation system to tackle this issue. Besides, alternative therapies should be explored and assessed for treating and preventing multidrug resistant bacterial infections.” The sentence can be made more fluid: “The Bangladesh drug regulatory authority should implement effective monitoring systems, and alternative therapies should be explored to treat and prevent MDR infections.”.

drug regularity authority of Bangladesh...correct as “drug regulatory authority...”

Reviewer #2: Comments to authors:

The current study is interesting and clearly describes the findings with strong methedology; however, the authors are recommended to address the following comments to improve the overall quality of the manuscript:

Abstract

Clear and well-written

Introduction

1. Check for punctuation errors throughout the manuscript (double space, eg, line 60, comma eg. line 65)

2. Line 69. Among MDR strains, foodborne pathogens, especially Escherichia coli (E. coli) ____. The abbreviation should be introduced in the sentences above before using the short form

3. Line 82. Please cross-check that all scientific gene names are written correctly throughout the manuscript, eg. if CTX-M has to be in subscript format (blaCTX-M)

Method and material

4. Line 136-137. A cross-sectional live bird market (LBM) survey was carried out on 64 LBMs of 32 upazilas in 16 districts (second tier of administrative regions) of Bangladesh.

For better clarity, it is recommended to rewrite the sentence. Here are the suggested revisions: A cross-sectional survey of live bird markets (LBM) was conducted in 64 LBM locations across 32 upazilas in 16 districts (the second tier of administrative regions) of Bangladesh

5. Line 154-155. Prior to collection of samples, the informed consent was taken from the chicken’s seller.

I recommend rewriting this sentence, here is the suggested: Prior to the collection of samples, informed consent was taken from the chicken seller.

6. Line 212-213. The presence of ESBLs-encoding genes (blaCTX-M-1, and blaCTX-M-2) in ESBL-producing E. coli and Salmonella spp. isolates was determined by duplex PCR using specific oligonucleotide primers[35]

Question. 1. Why did you choose to screen only these ESBL genes? Why not include blaTEM and blaSHV as well?

Question. 2. Why did you choose to screen only one Cr gene?

7. line 230-231.………… commercially available imipenem (10 µg) and meropenem (10 µg) disks. Isolates that were resistant to at least one carbapenem drug were considered as CR isolates[34, 36], …..

These sentences contain wording errors and should be corrected: disk must be disks, …….on=one

8. Line 236-239. The PCR reaction mixtures of 25 µL total volume containing 12.5 µL of OneTaq® Quick-Load® 2X PCR Master Mix with standard buffer (New England, BioLabs Inc.), 8.5 µL water, 1 µL template DNA from each isolate, and 1.5 µL from each primer with a concentration of 15 pmol.

For better clarity, these sentences should be rewritten. You may consider the following suggested revisions.

The PCR reaction mixtures, with a total volume of 25 µL, contained 12.5 µL of OneTaq® Quick-Load® 2X PCR Master Mix with standard buffer (New England Biolabs Inc.), 8.5 µL of water, 1 µL of template DNA from each isolate, and 1.5 µL of each primer at a concentration of 15 pmol.

Result

9. Line 316-317. The carbapenemase gene, blaNDM-1, was detected in 5.2% (9/173) isolates of CR-E. coli and 33.6% (40/119) isolates of CR-Salmonella spp

Suggested correction The carbapenemase gene, blaNDM-1, was detected in 5.2% (9/173) of CR-E. coli isolates and 33.6% (40/119) isolates of CR-Salmonella spp.

10. Line 391-393. Isolates of ESBL-E. coli (40.6% and 21%) and Salmonella spp. (34.5% and 22.3%), as well as CR-E. coli (42.8% and 21.4%) and Salmonella spp. (42.9% and 25.2%) recovered from retail chicken meat, exhibited resistance to 9–12 and 5–8 antimicrobial agents, respectively

These sentences are unclear. What do the two percentages in one bracket represent (e.g., 40.6% and 21%; 34.5% and 22.3%)? Please rewrite them to avoid confusion for readers.

Discussion

11. Line 486. Interestingly, the blaCTX-M-2 gene was only detected in a single (2%) E. coli

Instead of using a word single … only one,

suggested correction. Interestingly, the blaCTX-M-2 gene was detected in only one (2%) E. coli

12. Line 516-518. Since different LBMs are anticipated to use different management techniques while slaughtering of chickens, and processing of chicken meat, there are varying hazards

Suggested corrections. Since different LBMs are anticipated to use different management techniques during the slaughter of chickens and processing of chicken meat, varying hazards are associated with the presence of CR-E. coli and Salmonella spp

13. Line 570-571 Additionally, Bangladesh should control the use of antibiotics in poultry in order to reduce the levels of resistance found in the current study.

Suggested correction. Additionally, Bangladesh should regulate the use of antibiotics in poultry to reduce the levels of resistance found in the current study.

14. In the discussion section, please include the public health implications of the high prevalence of MDR, ESBL-producing E. coli and Salmonella spp., as well as carbapenem-resistant E. coli and Salmonella spp. detected in sewage samples, and explain their potential role in disseminating antimicrobial resistance (AMR) into the environment

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Response: Though no specific permission was required for this fieldwork because the study was conducted in live bird markets that are open to the public, and the activities did not involve restricted areas, protected species, or regulated sampling. Verbal consent was taken from mayor of the city corporation or municipality of LBMs (Line 112-119).

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https://www.liebertpub.com/doi/10.1089/fpd.2021.0059

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Response: The funding section has been updated (Line 565-569).

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Response: We have added amended funding statement in the cover letter.

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Response: Added in cover letter.

Reviewer #1: General Comments

This manuscript addresses an important and timely topic, namely the prevalence of ESBL-producing and carbapenem-resistant E. coli and Salmonella spp. in poultry meat and live bird market (LBM) sewage in Bangladesh. The study is ambitious, covering all eight divisions of the country, and provides valuable epidemiological data with direct relevance for food safety and antimicrobial resistance (AMR) surveillance. The paper is methodologically sound, but the manuscript is lengthy, data-heavy, and at times repetitive. The clarity of presentation can be improved by streamlining results, tightening the introduction and discussion, and emphasizing the key public health implications.

Response: Revised.

Specific comments are provided below.

Abstract

Well done, it is recommended that only the main prevalence figures and key results be highlighted.

Response: We have revised the relevant section to present the findings in a more focused and streamlined manner.

Introduction

Well contextualized, but partially repetitive (antibiotic misuse, poultry as reservoir). Condense to improve flow.

Explicitly state the knowledge gap: previous studies in Bangladesh were fragmented, this is the first comprehensive survey covering all divisions.

Response: The Introduction has been carefully revised to reduce redundancy.

Methods

Sampling design is solid but justification for “5 samples per LBM” should be added.

Clarify whether clustering effects (design effect) were considered in sample size calculation.

Provide more detail on the positive and negative controls used in PCR assays.

Response: A justification for collecting five samples per LBM has now been added to the Methods section. In addition, we have clarified the sample size calculation to address clustering effects (Line 131-136).

Detail on the positive and negative controls used in PCR assays have been provided (181-185; 210-212).

Results

Results are highly detailed, with many percentages. Consider moving some data to supplementary materials.

Figures and maps are informative but crowded; merging or simplifying some would enhance readability.

Report confidence intervals along with prevalence estimates.

Response: To improve clarity and readability, we have streamlined the Results section by reducing repetitive percentage reporting and consolidating parallel findings. Detailed resistance profiles and extended percentage data have now been moved to the supporting information section (S1 Fig, S1 Table and S2 Table). In addition, several maps have been simplified by merging overlapping panels and reducing visual complexity, while key findings are retained in the main figures.

Discussion

The discussion is well written, but could perhaps be improved by better comparing more recent studies, if available, from South/South-East Asia and Africa.

Perhaps a clearer distinction could be made between explanations based on concrete evidence (e.g. the use of antibiotics) and more speculative interpretations.

Discuss in more detail the feasibility of the proposed interventions (antibiotic management, LBM sanitation services) in the context of Bangladesh.

Response: We have revised the discussion section.

Conclusion

The conclusions appear appropriate. Nevertheless, it would be advisable to include, among the practical recommendations, the strengthening of biosecurity measures throughout all stages of production and the implementation of stricter drug control. Such measures are consistent with practices adopted in other production systems, where antimicrobials are administered exclusively following a veterinary diagnosis and several active substances are restricted from use in livestock production.

Response: We have revised the conclusion section to explicitly incorporate practical recommendations.

Grammatical or stylistic corrections

Line 55- in the medical, veterinary and agriculture sectors. correct in... medical, veterinary, and agricultural sectors.

Response: Corrected.

Line 57-58 - ...through faces or manure... feces” (non “faces”).

Response: Corrected.

Line 59-61 - ...and it is anticipated to climb by 67% by 2030 in rapidly polluting and developing countries around the world.... shorten the thought type.....and is projected to rise by 67% by 2030, particularly in rapidly developing countries.”

Response: Corrected.

Line 64–67-“However, the chicken industry's fast expansion, combined with widespread and frequently uncontrolled antibiotic usage, has contributed to the spread of MDR bacteria across the food chain.” Better. “The rapid expansion of the chicken industry, combined with uncontrolled antibiotic usage, has facilitated the spread of MDR bacteria through the food chain”.

Response: Corrected.

Line 86-87 ...E. coli and Salmonella spp., that produces ESBLs, and demonstrates MDR, has implications...”

correct in... “that produce ESBLs and demonstrate MDR have implications...”

Response: Corrected.

Line 93–94 - “...have demonstrated alarming levels of resistance...” better..high levels (eliminate alarming).

Response: Corrected.

Line 109–110 - “...possible hotspot for ESBL-producing and carbapenem resistant bacteria to humans.” Better “hotspot for transmission ... to humans.”

Response: Corrected.

Line 523 ....were MDR..” there is a double point

Response: Corrected.

Line 526–535 -“The occurrence

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The research examines numerous live bird markets and their respective wastewaters in Bangladesh. The authors investigated the presence of antibiotic-resistant bacteria, specifically E. coli and Salmonella spp, in both retail chicken meat and sewage effluent. The findings reveal a high prevalence of these species, particularly those exhibiting multidrug resistance (MDR), including resistance to last-resort antibiotics such as carbapenems.

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