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| Original SubmissionMarch 5, 2025 |
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PONE-D-25-11888 Recognition of the younger generation a year after the discharge of treated water from the Fukushima Daiichi Nuclear Power Station PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Matsunaga, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 18 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Additional Editor Comments: Authors should carefully address the whole reviewers' comments before submitting their revised manuscript. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Overall Assessment: This manuscript presents a timely and socially important study on the awareness and acceptance of the discharge of treated water (DTW) from the Fukushima Daiichi Nuclear Power Station (FDNPS) among Japanese university students, one year after the discharge began. Based on responses from 1,453 students, the analysis is generally sound and offers valuable insight into how information sources, trust, and demographic factors influence DTW acceptance. However, several revisions are necessary to improve the manuscript’s clarity, methodological transparency, and interpretative strength. Major Comments: 1. Clarification of Novelty and Significance (Introduction): The manuscript would benefit from a clearer articulation of its novelty, particularly the rationale for focusing on the younger generation. Since this group will bear long-term responsibility for national and environmental policy, prior literature on youth engagement in environmental issues or risk communication should be cited to frame the importance of their perceptions. 2. Sampling Bias and Generalizability (Methods): The authors state that the sample was drawn from four universities, but more detail is needed about potential sampling bias—especially with respect to students’ academic backgrounds. For example, students in medicine, nursing, or engineering may have greater baseline knowledge of radiation, which could influence their acceptance of DTW. In addition, please provide more detailed information about the geographic location of the universities outside Fukushima Prefecture. Since the treated water is being discharged into the Pacific Ocean, perceptions may differ between coastal areas facing the Pacific and more inland regions. Without this information, it is difficult to fully assess the effect of regional proximity to the discharge site on participants’ responses. 3. Logistic Regression Model Interpretation: In Table 3, sex was statistically significant in the chi-square analysis but not in the logistic regression model. This inconsistency should be discussed in the manuscript—perhaps in terms of confounding variables or multicollinearity. Moreover, the current model omits potentially important predictors such as residential area (Fukushima vs. non-Fukushima) and age, both of which may shape attitudes toward DTW. Including these variables in the regression model may enhance its explanatory power. If the data are available, it would also be helpful to incorporate students’ academic discipline (e.g., science vs. humanities) into the model. Educational background may influence scientific literacy and thus affect DTW perception and acceptance. 4. Transparency of Survey Instrument: To improve the study’s transparency and reproducibility, the full questionnaire should be included—either in an appendix or as supplementary material. While the Methods section describes the survey’s structure in broad terms, access to the full set of questions would allow readers to better assess construct validity, especially for subjective items like “trust in the Japanese government” or “public calm.” Including both the original Japanese and an English translation would be ideal. 5. Interpretation of Media Influence and Lecture Exposure: The finding that lecture attendance did not significantly affect DTW acceptance requires deeper interpretation. It would be helpful for the authors to discuss whether this was due to the content, quality, or timing of the lectures. Crucially, it is unclear whether all participants were equally exposed to lectures on DTW. If lectures were only given to some students, the observed lack of effect may reflect variation in exposure rather than ineffectiveness. This should be clarified in the Methods section, and the implications discussed in the limitations. Additionally, the fact that passive media sources (TV/newspapers) were more strongly associated with DTW acceptance suggests that mass communication may be more effective than formal educational interventions. This has important implications for public outreach strategies. Minor Comments: Terminology Consistency: The terms "contaminated water" and "treated water" appear to be used interchangeably at times. Please clearly define both terms early in the manuscript and ensure consistent usage, given the public sensitivity surrounding their distinction. Reviewer #2: Keywords require revision. The respondents of questionnaire are all college students. It can not be a good representative for younger generation, because a generation includes both illiterate and literate people or consists of a wide range of literacy level. It seems the comparison between younger and older people is based on 21 years old. This is not what we understand from the title, abstract, or conclusion. Line 259 can not be verified by the data in manuscript. Obviously, younger people in general has relatively less concerns about their health in comparison with older people. I wonder what are are the perceptions of people with 30 years old or higher? Manuscript requires proper illustrations to reflect their results. Tables 2 and 3 have the potential for be in box-plot figures. Authors must demonstrate the results of all required statistical analysis: ANOVA or Mann-whithney, Mendel test, alpha cronbach, Pearson regression, etc. The current manuscript is more like a Poll than a scientific paper with professional scientific analysis. I wonder what other independent factors, like being employed, having families, and wealth are effective on the acceptance on wastewater discharge? Can they represent how much conservative or ignorant are people to this event? In the current format, I can not approve the validity of results, unless authors improve and verify their findings with solid methodology and statistical analysis. This manuscript raises more questions than answering to the ambiguities. Therefore, it requires major revision. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Dear Dr. Matsunaga, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 21 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): Your revised manuscript has been reviewed by two additional referees. Please carefully consider the comments and suggestions from the referees and resubmit, as soon as possible, an amended version of the manuscript, including confirming conflict of interest declaration, prepared in accordance with the Instructions to Authors. It is anticipated that the manuscript will be accepted in its amended form for publication in PLOS One. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Regarding the revised manuscript, response letter, and clarified method and results by responses, I can now admit that this manuscript has lack of scientific results for publication: 1- This manuscript is limited to a very specific society (university students) in Japan. This group under survey has very limited variety in social characteristics (age, job, literacy, families, etc.). The independent variables are limited to >21 or <21 age, their majors, and methods for information collecting. This group can not represent any other similar groups in Japan or other countries. Obviously, the results are not suitable with scientific perspective, as these outcomes can not be extended to any other case, group, or society. 2- As explained by authors, the method for analyzing the outcomes is limited to some comparisons by percentage (%) like line 128-153. In other words, the statistical analysis was more focused on frequency (like a poll), while authors could briefly explain these outcomes by illustrations. 3- In a nutshell, the method, including surveyed group and statistical analysis, have nothing special or innovative that make the manuscript different from a poll or a typical survey. The discussion also lacks scientific descriptions about the outcomes. 4- Authors could use new approaches in survey, conceptual modeling, or etc. to strengthen their manuscript. But, unfortunately, the current revised manuscript can not meet the demands of a world-wide replicable scientific research. Reviewer #3: The manuscript reports on university students’ awareness of the release of ALPS-treated water from the Fukushima Daiichi Nuclear Power Plant. As this is a revised version, the following comments focus on the authors’ responses to the reviewers’ comments. The authors have provided complete and appropriate responses to the comments raised by Reviewer #1. With respect to Reviewer #2, the authors have adequately addressed the major criticisms by acknowledging the study’s limitations and revising the title accordingly. Although Reviewer #2 characterized the study as resembling a poll, the analysis is clearly focused on university students, a population with sufficient prior knowledge and intellectual maturity to engage with the topic. From this perspective, the study does not appear to be a simple poll. While expanding the target population to include the general public could be valuable, this point can reasonably be considered a topic for future research, as noted by the authors. The awareness of university students, who are expected to play leading roles in the next generation, represents a meaningful and justified focus. Reviewer #4: General comment This study focuses on acceptance of DTW, mainly in terms of its scientific safety. However, there is another critical argument on fair and transparent decision-making process of DTW with stakeholders, including fishery sector. Though the questionnaire includes a question for “calm decision by public”, but no question is asked for acceptance of policy decision making process nor access to information on procedures of governmental decision making, conflicts with local stakeholders, etc. The paper might justify DTW, by supportive opinion by young generation, who may not be informed about conflicts with stakeholders, as such aspect is (intentionally or un-intentionally) excluded from the questionnaire. In the view of the reviewer, more essential point of DTW is lack of stakeholder involvement in decision making process, rather than scientific safety. The questionnaire could have been designed to include acceptance not only of scientific safety, but also social fairness, international justice, etc. Specific comments 1. Response to the comment on literacy by the Reviewer 2 seems to be inappropriate. Authors responded in terms of language/character literacy, the reviewer’s comment addressed scientific literacy, in my understanding. 2. The comment#1 above is interlinked with the comment #2 by the Reviewer 1 on sampling bias. Difference in acceptance between majors (natural science/humanities) is mentioned in conclusion, but it should be noted that the percentage of respondents between these two majors (83.4% vs. 16.6%) is significantly different from total population of graduate students. Student population of humanity is much larger than student population in natural sciences, in Japan. Such bias could have been avoided by more careful sampling design. This comment is also related to general comment above. The study seems to focus too much on natural scientific aspect, and underestimates the importance of humanity. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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