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There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Soils from four long-term farming systems (15 years) at two Kenyan sites were sampled 3-4 times across two growing seasons to assess differences in prokaryotic diversity. Although this paper is well written, the presentation and discussion of results are too general and superficial. Major concerns: 1) Need to ‘set the stage’ for this paper by describing and discussing findings from the 2020 paper by Karanja et al. That paper reports results from the same four long-term farming systems in Kenya. The abstract from that paper states that “Conventional farming systems showed a higher species richness and diversity compared to organic systems.” Since this paper reports on the continuation of an important and unique long-term experiment, I expected the authors to discuss why the results from the 2020 paper (higher diversity in conventional systems than organic systems) differed from results in current manuscript (greater diversity in organic). Due to the effort invested in this long-term experiment, the conflicting observations should be addressed. 2) Need for hypotheses. Standards in good experimental design include hypothesis testing. Descriptive papers, such as this one, have low impact and would be strengthened by hypothesis testing (e.g., which soil variables would be strongest drivers of community diversity?) Nowadays agroecologists are realizing that descriptive studies of prokaryotic diversity in agricultural soils provide very little meaningful information to a farmer. No statistical analyses of diversity indices or means of soil chemical variables were presented and these could have been used for hypothesis tests. The simplest hypothesis would be that there would be no changes in diversity or treatment differences compared to the study described in 2020 paper. Or, authors could have hypothesized that diversity would differ because of different extraction or pipeline methods. Statistical testing was not done, so significance was not evaluated. 3) Need means and standard deviations of soil variables. Relationships between diversity and three main soil variables are shown in Figure 3. The actual data on soil variables (means and s.d. for the four systems) after 15 years would be of interest in the context of the long-term experiment. Both Zenodo links given at the end of the paper (which were supposed to contain soil chemistry data) led to the same page containing only R scripts. Therefore, data were not provided. 4) Emphasize organic input diversity, rather than nitrogen form, as the main basis for differences in the four systems. Based on the title, I had assumed that “nitrogen forms” implied clear-cut differences in organic and inorganic nitrogen forms for the four systems. However, the field management practices described on lines 124-135 indicate that ALL systems received manure. Since all four systems received BOTH organic and inorganic N forms, this makes the contrast between systems less clear cut. I consulted Suppl Table 1 from the 2020 paper, and saw that over the three-year crop rotation, high-input systems received four times more total N than the low-input systems. Besides differences in organic amendment diversity, differences in fertilizer RATES could also have affected soil communities. The title would be more accurate if ‘nitrogen form’ was replaced by organic input diversity. Authors should refer readers to the supplemental table in the 2020 paper, e.g., on line 109, for more detailed information about overall inputs. 5) Check reference numbering and suitability of citations. Many times in the paper, the references cited do not seem to match the content of the preceding sentence. For example, on Lines 102-104, reference 22 does not seem correct, as it has more to do with bioinformatics than crop production. Maybe 23 is correct? On line 459, the reference is about nitrous oxide emission, but the sentence is on nutrient depletion. 6) Figure 8 is wrong. This figure shows differential abundances for FUNGI, which were not included in this study. In any case, I don’t think Lefse analysis of prokaryotic taxa across sampling stage is meaningful because we don’t know which taxa are ACTIVE or what they are actually doing in the soil. I would not include this in a revised ms. 7) Sequences from this study have not been deposited in NCBI. Page for PRJNA1227412 in sequence read archive was empty. Other comments Methods Lines 102-103. In this study, crop rotations followed local farming practices. Please explain the type of tillage used locally. Lines 176-178. Nitisols are known to have very high clay contents, and DNA extraction tends to be very inefficient as soil clay content increases over 35% (Holben, 1994, Methods of soil analysis-Part 2). The proportion of DNA recovered can be evaluated by measuring the DNA yield from the soil samples. Most papers do not publish this information, but it is helpful so that readers can ascertain how comprehensive DNA recovery was. If mean DNA yields per gram dry soil are no longer available, there isn’t anything that can be done. Although useful, this information is often ignored due to lack of awareness. Comments on Results and Figures Figure 1 could be moved to supplemental files. Lines 284-290 Were community compositions tested only against pH, ammonium, and available P only? What about nitrate, total N, total P (from lines 201-204)? If more variables were tested and shown to have little effect on CCA, then state so. Reporting the means and variability of these soil variables for the four systems would help readers interpret the distribution in the CCA. These data were not available on Zenodo links at end of paper. Figure 2 and Lines294 294. This legend for Fig 2 is incomplete. The legend should state that points of different colors represent the farming systems. If only three soil variables were used in the analysis, explain why. Figure 3 and Lines 308-311. It would be helpful if points in Fig. 3 had both distinguishing colors and shapes, like they do in Figure 7. In this graph, the reader cannot tell which point represents which system, because all the different colored points have the same shape. If the four farming systems were designated with different shapes, the reader would know that when all four colors cluster together, the points are from one system, indicating weak or no effect of sampling time in that system. The way the graph is drawn, the reader cannot make that judgment Some variables seem more important than others in certain systems. Authors need to clarify and discuss this more fully in the text in relation to each system. Lines 314-315. It would be more accurate to say that Proteobacteria and Actinobacteria were more dominant than others. Lines 324-325. It is hard to see Chloroflexi and Firmicutes representation in the figure. Is this even worth mentioning? Lines 332-345 and Figure 5. Should point out how organic systems receive many different inputs than the conventional systems, including Tithonia mulch and tea. Authors could discuss the effects of input diversity on communities, not just sources of N. Line 361-362 and Figure 6. Sentence is not clear. Differences do not look significant. Overall, Because of high variability, sampling time (phenology) seemed to have much less effect than system. Lines 375-375. This discussion seems too generalized, since later stages did not separate from other stages in every system. Explanation on 433-435 in discussion is worthwhile and example of the ‘deeper dive’ authors should take in explaining their results. Lines 401-404. Text does not correspond to what is shown in Figure 8. Figure 8 needs to replaced by the correct graph. Fig 8 shows fungal taxa, which were not analyzed at all in this study. Lines 481-483. Not sure if authors can say that 'crop phenology' played central role due to high variation in diversity index values and lack of statistics. Reviewer #2: The authors examined how different farming systems and nitrogen management strategies affect soil prokaryotic diversity in Kenya and found significant variation in microbial diversity and composition based on farming systems, input intensity, and crop growth stages. Though they found that diversity peaked consistently at crop maturity, they did not discuss the reasons for this peak at grain formation and maturity. The canonical correspondence analysis identified ammonium-N, available phosphorus, and pH as strong correlates of microbial community structure, especially at Thika. What were the soil organic carbon contents of these soils? Several genera, including Rubinisphaera, Methanomassiliicoccus, and Microvirga, were enriched in organic systems, indicating microbial specialization at different growth stages. But the authors made no efforts to analyse the functional contributions of soil prokaryotes. Their findings support and provide additional evidence that organic high-input systems can foster beneficial microbial communities and emphasize the importance of understanding microbial ecology to improve agricultural productivity in sub-Saharan Africa, where soil fertility is a significant challenge. The authors relied more on alpha- and beta-diversity measures. Alpha diversity is an ambiguous concept that encompasses several complementary aspects. The assumptions underlying alpha diversity metrics are not always directly meaningful or provide a clear interpretation of results. The choice of the diversity metrics influences the subsequent statistical testing. The authors acknowledged the limitations of their study in Lines 469-471 (Because sequencing was conducted on pooled samples, replication at the plot level was not possible. This constrains statistical resolution and limits our ability to test treatment effects with full confidence). Discussion needs to include the limitations of the diversity metrics analysed and of the 16S rRNA surveys (amplicon sequencing). Line 182: universal primers, instead of universal bacterial primers. (Methanomassiliicoccus – an archaeal genus, not a bacterial genus). Table 1: Simpson and Inverse Simpson? Check the entries. The theoretical range of values of the Simpson index (D) is between 0 and 1. The range of Shannon index values for soil bacterial ASVs varies significantly across soil environments, but typical values in ecological studies are between 1.5 and 3.5. Line 420: What were the unique insights? 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