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| Original SubmissionSeptember 11, 2025 |
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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The submitted study aims to identify and analyze patterns of neonatal deaths among very low birth weight newborns in the state of São Paulo, Brazil. It is a robust investigation that examined more than 100,000 live births and over 40,000 neonatal deaths over a 16-year period. Relevant patterns were identified using a concise methodology and a rigorous statistical analysis, employing two statistical approaches that are appropriate to the research topic and objectives. As expected within the Brazilian context, regional disparities and persistent problems were observed, which require attention and targeted efforts toward addressing preventable factors, as highlighted by the authors. This is a topic of utmost importance that should be brought to academic discussion. Reviewer #2: commend the authors on a well-written and thoughtfully structured manuscript. The study employs a sophisticated methodology and presents findings with significant utility for public health and the field of perinatology. During my review, I identified several areas with potential for enhancement, which I outline below. 1. Adherence to the STROBE Statement To ensure comprehensive reporting and identification of best practices, I recommend the authors explicitly confirm that all items of the STROBE checklist have been addressed. Item 4 (Title and Abstract): The manuscript's title should clearly state the study design. While the use of Latent Class Analysis implies an observational design, the specific type (which I understand to be a retrospective cohort study) should be explicitly stated in the title, or if not possible, the abstract. This is a key requirement for immediate reader comprehension. Other Items: Certain other STROBE criteria appear to be only partially met. These include a more detailed description of the sampling method and a clearer explanation of how potential biases were mitigated in the methodology. 2. Formulation of the Conclusion The conclusion, both in the abstract and the main text, should provide a direct and concise answer to the study's primary objective. While the results section presents the data, the conclusion must synthesize these findings to explicitly state how they address the aim of analyzing mortality patterns using the two methodologies. A summary of the distinct patterns identified for each methodology should be clearly articulated in the concluding remarks. 3. Application of the RECORD Checklist Given that this study utilizes large, routinely collected health databases, the application of the RECORD checklist (Benchmark et al., 2015) is highly recommended. This checklist is an extension of STROBE specifically for such datasets. * Key items to address include providing a flow diagram illustrating the patient selection and data linkage process (which could be included as a supplement). * Furthermore, a detailed description of the data cleaning and preparation procedures is essential. This should cover the handling of missing data, inconsistencies, and coding errors, including the percentage of missing data and the methods used for its treatment (e.g., imputation, exclusion). 4. Application of the RECORD-PE Checklist Finally, due to the perinatal focus of the research, I strongly suggest applying the RECORD-PE checklist (Perinatal Extension, Hermanussen et al., 2021). This extension is tailored for observational studies involving maternal, fetal, and newborn data. Reviewer #3: PLOS ONE Review This study is well designed and methodologically robust, employing probabilistic Latent Class Analysis (LCA) to uncover unobserved subgroups of neonatal deaths that share similar combinations of characteristics. This approach adds considerable depth beyond the deterministic ICD-10 classification by revealing latent diagnostic patterns underlying the recorded causes of death. I included some suggestions for better clarification and strengthening of the paper. Title: I would suggest adjusting the phrasing as: “A two-tiered latent class and spatial analytical approach to identify clusters of early and late neonatal mortality among very low birth weight infants”. Abstract Objective: Line 27: …patterns of neonatal deaths among very low birth weight… maintain consistency between title (early/late mortality) and the abstract (general neonatal mortality) Introduction Line 58 spatial-temporal- better to replace with: spatio-temporal Line 152: 34% were <28 weeks... refine as: “… 34% were born before 28 weeks of gestation.” To clarify the reference to gestational age. Methods The authors may need more detailed justification why the four diagnostic groups were selected (infection, intrapartum event, malformation, respiratory) as they are broad and include overlapping ICD codes. Results The paper would benefit from clearly identifying which classes are the main drivers of overall spatial disparities in neonatal mortality across the state. The results are reported by class, but the implications for how these patterns translate into health system gaps remain somewhat implicit. Strengthening the link between (1) each class’s spatial clustering, (2) the likely underlying service-delivery challenges, and (3) the most relevant targeted interventions would enhance the translational value and clarity of the findings. Discussion The Discussion could better detail how referral bias may over- or under-estimate clustering. Linking between each latent class and actionable strategies could be articulated more clearly. Providing class-specific examples (e.g., infection prevention bundles vs. improvements in delivery-room care) would strengthen policy relevance. Conclusion Given the paper’s title, the conclusion should more explicitly highlight what the study reveals about early vs late neonatal deaths across latent classes, based on the survival curves. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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A two-tiered latent class and spatial analytical approach to identify clusters of neonatal mortality among very low birth weight infants: a population-based cohort study PONE-D-25-47659R1 Dear Dr. Costa-Nobre, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Ricardo Q. Gurgel, PhD Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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