Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 9, 2025 |
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If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: The article is offering a valuable topic on “Elucidating the Mechanistic Association of Xylene Inducing Non-Small Cell Lung Cancer through Network Toxicology and Molecular Docking Analysis.” However, some comments/suggestions may be incorporated to strengthen the findings. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This manuscript explores the potential mechanistic link between environmental xylene exposure and the development of non-small cell lung cancer (NSCLC), using network toxicology, enrichment analyses, scRNA-seq data reanalysis, and molecular docking simulations. The topic is timely and relevant, given the growing evidence of environmental contributions to lung cancer, especially among non-smokers. The study is ambitious in integrating multiple computational approaches and identifies five candidate targets (IL1A, H3C13, ITGAM, CCR5, and COMT) potentially mediating xylene-induced carcinogenesis. However, while the manuscript is informative, several methodological limitations, gaps in validation, and issues with presentation need to be addressed before the work can be considered for publication. Major concerns: 1. The study is entirely computational. While the predictions are interesting, the absence of in vitro or in vivo validation significantly limits the biological relevance. Without experimental confirmation, conclusions should be framed more cautiously. Phrases like “confirmed strong binding affinities” or “xylene may disrupt important signals and promote tumor growth” are overly conclusive and too strong for computational predictions. At minimum, authors should validate gene expression patterns of the identified core targets using publicly available NSCLC datasets (e.g., TCGA, GEO bulk RNA-seq). 2. The process of intersecting xylene-related targets with NSCLC-associated genes may yield false positives due to database biases. It is unclear how the authors ensured specificity. Please provide more details on the filtering criteria (e.g., confidence scores, interaction thresholds) and include a sensitivity analysis. 3. The scRNA-seq dataset used (GSE198099) is relatively small (two patients and two controls). This limits generalizability. H3C13 was not detected in the dataset, yet it is still considered a “core target.” Authors should clarify whether this undermines its relevance. 4. Docking scores alone cannot confirm biologically relevant interactions. The binding energies reported (–4.8 to –6.3 kcal/mol) suggest moderate affinity but not necessarily strong biological activity. Please include control compounds or positive ligands for comparison to contextualize the docking results. 5. Some conclusions (e.g., xylene may polarize macrophages or promote immune escape) are speculative without functional data. The discussion should be toned down to reflect hypotheses rather than established mechanisms. 6. While the study claims translational significance, it does not clearly connect predictions to potential preventive or therapeutic strategies. The reviewer would suggest expanding the discussion on how findings could inform biomonitoring, exposure regulation, or drug development. Minor concerns: 1. Several sections require English polishing for clarity and conciseness (e.g., “xylene due to its high volatility and potential for bioaccumulation may play a critical role…” could be simplified). 2. Figures are informative but lack sufficient resolution for evaluation. Ensure high-quality images are provided. Legends should be more descriptive (e.g., specify thresholds used in enrichment analysis). 3. While many references are recent, some are not directly supportive of specific claims. Ensure all references appropriately match the statements made. 4. Provide exact database access dates for reproducibility. Clarify statistical thresholds (e.g., adjusted p-values for enrichment analysis). 5. The ethics statement says, “not applicable,” but scRNA-seq data from human samples were used. The authors should clarify whether the dataset had prior IRB approval and if their reanalysis was exempt. 6. Literature review on xylene-specific carcinogenic mechanisms is limited; more background on known genotoxic/epigenetic effects of xylene would strengthen rationale. 7. The criteria for selecting 115 intersecting targets are unclear. Were thresholds applied to avoid weak/indirect associations? No discussion of false positives from database mining. Only degree centrality (via cytoHubba) was used in PPI networks and core targets. Multiple topological measures (betweenness, closeness) would provide more robust selection. 8. Adjusted p-values (FDR correction) should be reported in enrichment analysis. Current reporting of only p < 0.05 may inflate significance. Reviewer #2: The authors’ efforts into this manuscript are acknowledged and appreciated. These are my suggestions by line number to improve the quality of your work. Title Did you mean “Elucidating the Mechanistic Association Between Xylene Exposure and the Development of Non-Small Cell Lung Cancer (NSCLC) Through Network Toxicology and Molecular Docking Analysis”? 72 – 76 You repeated the same points here. Please merge into one. 79 Did you mean “environmentally-induced carcinogenesis”? 85 & 87 One “systematically” is enough. 88 “… underlying molecular mechanisms of xylene in the progression of NSCLC …” Should this be the “development” or “onset” of NSCLC? 122 “…sapiens, and an interaction score of ≥0.4 was …” Delete the “and” here since the sentence continues to another point. 135 & 196 Is it “ScRNA-Req” or “scRNA-seq”? 226 - 227 Rewrite your sentence as “Xylene, including its ortho-, meta-, and para-isomers, is a common organic pollutant in the environment due to its widespread use in various commercial products.” 236 “… xylene-inducing …”. Please put a hyphen there. 247/248 You wrote 100+ lines after your “In summary …”, including another “In summary …”, and then went on to write a “Conclusion”. Delete the “In summary …” if you are not done with discussing your points and leave the true summary to your conclusion. Title After reading through your manuscript, I think the appropriate title could be “Elucidating the Potential Mechanisms of Xylene Exposure-induced Development of Non-Small Cell Lung Cancer (NSCLC) Through Network Toxicology and Molecular Docking Analysis” or “Mechanistic Insights into Xylene-Induced Non-Small Cell Lung Cancer via Network Toxicology and Molecular Docking Analysis” or “Deciphering the Possible Molecular Mechanisms of Xylene-Induced Non-Small Cell Lung Cancer Using Network Toxicology and Molecular Docking”. 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<p>Elucidating the Mechanistic Association of Xylene Inducing Non-Small Cell Lung Cancer through Network Toxicology and Molecular Docking Analysis PONE-D-25-53598R1 Dear Dr. Qi, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Tsai-Ching Hsu, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): I believe all is done, as confirmed by the author's reply and agreed upon by the reviewers. It can be accepted in its current form. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** Reviewer #1: The authors have satisfactorily addressed all of the comments and concerns raised during the review process. The revised manuscript is substantially improved in terms of clarity, scientific rigor, and translational relevance. I believe the manuscript is now suitable and acceptable for publication. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Kaushik Banerjee Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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