Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 17, 2025 |
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The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. We noticed you have some minor occurrence of overlapping text with the following previous publication(s), which needs to be addressed: The impact of smartphone dependence on college students’ sleep quality: the chain-mediated role of negative emotions and health-promoting behaviors - https://doi.org/10.3389/fpubh.2024.1454217 The chain mediating role of family health and physical activity in the relationship between life satisfaction and health-promoting lifestyles among young adults in China - https://doi.org/10.3389/fpubh.2024.1408988 In your revision ensure you cite all your sources (including your own works), and quote or rephrase any duplicated text outside the methods section. Further consideration is dependent on these concerns being addressed. 3. 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Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This manuscript is clearly written, well organized, and addresses a relevant public health issue. The study benefits from a solid methodological framework, including the use of validated measurement tools, an appropriate analytical strategy, and a sufficiently large sample to support its conclusions. The results are presented in a straightforward manner and the discussion is well grounded in the existing literature. The findings contribute meaningfully to the understanding of the mechanisms linking smartphone addiction and sleep quality, particularly through perceived stress and health-promoting lifestyle. Overall, the work is scientifically sound and fits well within the scope of PLOS ONE. Reviewer #2: In the current study, the authors investigated the relationship between smartphone addiction and sleep quality among college students and specifically tested whether perceived stress and health-promoting lifestyle act as parallel mediators. This study employed a cross-sectional design, with data collected at a single time point (March 2025) among 2317 students. The findings revealed a significant positive correlation between smartphone addiction and poor sleep quality. Furthermore, it highlights the dual mediating roles of perceived stress and health-promoting lifestyle as mediators in this relationship. Overall, the study is interesting. However, some points require clarification throughout to improve the manuscript further. I can only think of a few suggestions, as detailed below, that came into my mind. Comment #1: The abstract (lines 14-50) is long. Please shorten. Comment #2: Please make sure that you explain all abbreviations when they are first mentioned in the abstract and in the main text. No need to repeat the full meaning in the text unless it is necessary. Also, it would be nice to include all abbreviations in the provided section at 326-329. Comment #3: I see that the authors present scientific hypotheses at the end of the introduction (lines 109-117) to justify the aim of this research. I think it is better to briefly explain how the study was performed to verify these hypotheses and highlight the main findings of this study, and how the results support the hypotheses. The transition from line 114 to line 115 is not logical. Do you still elaborate on the hypothesis or move to explain your findings? Please review. Comment #4: In the statistical analysis, two sentences contradict each other. The first statement indicates that all variables are normally distributed (lines 174-175). The second states that the scale scores are not normally distributed, as indicated by the Kolmogorov–Smirnov test (lines 178-179). Pearson’s correlation was used (lines 179–180), although the data were previously described as non-normally distributed. If the scale scores indeed deviate from normality, Spearman’s rank correlation would generally be more appropriate. However, Pearson’s correlation can still be valid with large sample sizes or when deviations from normality are mild. Please clarify this discrepancy and justify the use of Pearson’s correlation. Comment #5: Very limited information is provided on how the mediation analysis was performed. It refers to the model used for parallel mediation, as Model 4 at line 230, but it also stated as Model 4.2 at line 182. I am wondering whether the parallel mediation model proposed by Preacher and Hayes (2008) (line 230), DOI:10.3758/BRM.40.3.879, using the PROCESS feature (line 182) was used. Then, please include a proper reference. Also, no explanation of the model’s equations is provided (e.g., direct and indirect paths, meaning of c, c′, a₁b₁, a₂b₂ in your model). Comment #6: At lines 195, 203, 463, I think there is a typo, where the total number is 2,317 (lines 21, 126), not 2,137. Please check. Comment #7: For mediation analysis and values, I noticed some discrepancies appeared between the text (lines 236-241, Table 4, and Figure 2 regarding the values of the paths. For example, at line 237 and figure 2, the value for path c’ is 0.03145; however, in Table 4 the value is 0.0325. At line 238, the value for path a1b1 is 0.0130, while in Table 4 it is 0.0128. same issue for a2b2. In Table 4, I would prefer to specify the paths corresponding to each row as in Figure 2. Please verify, check and unify the decimal throughout the manuscript. Comment #8: In Tables 1 and 2, please specify whether the smartphone usage duration is measured per day or in another way. And whether every use is counted, including for learning purposes. Comment #9: Figure related: The legend of Figure 1 contains very limited information. I would rather expand some information about the abbreviations, meaning of the “+”, “-”, “M1”, “M2”, “X”, “Y”, and briefly explain your logical flow and proposed hypothesis. Same issue for Figure 2, no explanation for direct, indirect paths, meaning a₁, b₁, a₂, b₂. Comment #10: Given that the results showed that smartphone addiction is associated with poorer sleep quality. And the perceived stress and lifestyle mediate the relationship statistically. Additionally, given the study's limitations, it is not possible to infer causal relationships. However, I am missing information on whether smartphone addiction could lead to poor sleep quality because it increases stress and decreases healthy lifestyles, or what exactly the potential mechanisms for this association. ********** what does this mean? ). 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The Influence of Smartphone Addiction on Sleep Quality Among College Students: The Parallel Mediating Roles of Perceived Stress and Health-Promoting Lifestyle PONE-D-25-36906R1 Dear Dr. Yin, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Pavle Randjelovic, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Thanks the authors for making the corresponding responses and revisions. I have no further comments and recommend acceptence of this work to be published on Plos One. Reviewer #2: I do not have any further comments. The authors have significantly improved the manuscript. In my opinion, all my concerns have been addressed. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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