Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 10, 2025 |
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If your data cannot be made publicly available for ethical or legal reasons (e.g., public availability would compromise patient privacy), please explain your reasons on resubmission and your exemption request will be escalated for approval. If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Dear Editors, Dear Authors, Thank you for the opportunity to read and review this manuscript. This scientific paper presents the results of a longitudinal retrospective cohort analysis aimed at evaluating patterns of opioid purchases by payment source among pregnant women in Arkansas and examining their associations with adverse neonatal outcomes. Multiple data sources were utilized and appropriately linked to address clearly defined hypotheses. The databases and linkage methods are well described and transparent. The manuscript is well written, and the discussion provides valuable insights in the context of the existing literature. While I do not consider myself qualified to evaluate the statistical robustness of the analyses, from a clinical and scientific standpoint, I have no modifications to suggest. Reviewer #2: The premise for the current study is that in the context of assessing neonatal outcomes following maternal opioid use, prior studies likely underestimate actual opioid exposure and fail to evaluate differences in maternal characteristics between opioid users and non-users. Hence, the study objective is to evaluate patterns of opioid purchases among pregnant women in Arkansas and examine their associations with adverse neonatal outcomes. This is regarded as a worthy topic for research. I recommend revise and re-submit. The study leverages a linkage between a statewide claims database [the Arkansas All-Payer Claims Database (AR-APCD), and the Arkansas Prescription Drug Monitoring Programs (AR-PDMP)] from 2014-2016 to characterize opioid prescription purchases among pregnant women and evaluate their impact on adverse neonatal outcomes. The authors hypothesize that pregnant women who self-paid for opioid analgesics, potentially to bypass payer restrictions or detection, represent a higher-risk group due to higher opioid purchase, and that both opioid purchase and opioid amount are associated with increased risk of adverse neonatal outcomes (i.e., preterm birth, lower birth weight, NICU admission, and NOWS). The study design is a longitudinal retrospective cohort analysis of singleton pregnancies and in general is well conducted but there are some issues that need attention. Comments: 1. The authors should clearly state the inclusion and exclusion criteria in the methods section with any necessary justification. Regarding Figure 1 and sample exclusion criteria, the authors do not explain why they chose to exclude 40,340 pregnancies where mothers ‘did not have continuous medical and pharmacy benefits.’ This is not explained in the methods and is considered a deficiency. This also seems curious as major exposures are simply classified as opioid self-paid buyers, opioid insurance-only buyers, and non-buyers, and presumably, mothers did not need to have continuous medical and pharmacy benefits to be categorized as buyers. Further, it would be interesting to know whether results of the study would be different had these pregnancies not been excluded, so justification to exclude is required or alternatively, the authors could do a sensitivity analysis including these mothers. 2. There is no mention of exploration for model interaction/effect modification in the methods section, and the authors need to comment on how this was approached and whether explored. 3. Lines 259-260 seems incorrect as it states, ‘Table 3 presents the AORs from sequential regression models comparing opioid buyers to non-buyers, insurance-only buyers to non-buyers, and self-paid buyers to insurance-only buyers’ but Table 3 does not show results from models comparing ‘any opioid buyers to non-buyers.’ Regarding the choice of groups for comparison using regression models (specifically Table 3), it would seem that it would be of interest to show ‘any opioid buyer vs. non-buyers.’ Hence, I suggest that the authors revise Table 3 to only show rows for Model 1 and 8 (i.e., the crude and fully adjusted models; the other models can go into the supplement, and also interesting to note that estimates for models 5 through 8 are fairly similar, and models 7 and 8 are nearly identical) and add the comparison of ‘any opioid buyer vs. non-buyers.’ 4. Another issue with Table 3 is the strange estimates for the comparison of opioid self-paid vs. insurance-only buyers. As the estimates for opioid self-paid vs. the common referent appears to be consistently larger than for insurance-only buyers, one would expect to see coefficients larger than the null for the comparison of opioid self-paid vs. insurance-only buyers, but regardless of model or outcome, these estimates appear inverted which is non-intuitive and likely due to issues with multicollinearity or perhaps non-collapsibility as estimates are ORs. Although these estimates are equivocal, the authors should explain and, also suggest that these could be moved to supplement as largely non-informative. 5. Given that models 5 through 8 show fairly similar results, suggest that the authors undertake a sensitivity analysis to address unmeasured confounding through the “E-value” method, described in VanderWeele TJ, Ding P. Sensitivity analysis in observational research: Introducing the “E-Value.” Annals of Internal Medicine 2017;167(4):268-274. 6. Regarding the mediation analyses, the authors do not provide adequate methodological details. For example, what modeling approach is being used, what assumptions are applied, and could there be any exposure mediator-interaction? [For further information please see: VanderWeele TJ. Mediation Analysis: A Practitioner's Guide. Annu Rev Public Health. 2016;37:17-32. doi: 10.1146/annurev-publhealth-032315-021402. Epub. 2015 Nov 30. PMID: 26653405]. In addition, the results shown in Table 4 demonstrate that estimates overall (i.e., the total effects) are largely null. Hence, the authors’ discussion on mediation indirect effects are more consistent with a theoretical statistical approach, rather than an epidemiological approach, as with the latter, there would be no point in disaggregating a null effect. Hence, suggest that the authors omit the mediation analysis in any revision. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Novel approaches in linkage of data sources to explore the associations between purchase of opioid prescriptions during pregnancy and adverse neonatal outcomes PONE-D-25-27057R1 Dear Dr. Martin, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Keith Anthony Dookeran, MD PhD Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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