Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 13, 2025 |
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Matarić) Children’s Hospital Los Angeles Best Starts to Life Research Support Grant (PI: M.R. Rosales; Mentor: B.A. Smith)” Please provide an amended statement that declares *all* the funding or sources of support (whether external or internal to your organization) received during this study, as detailed online in our guide for authors at http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submit-now. Please also include the statement “There was no additional external funding received for this study.” in your updated Funding Statement. Please include your amended Funding Statement within your cover letter. We will change the online submission form on your behalf. 5. Thank you for stating the following in the Acknowledgments Section of your manuscript: “The authors thank all of the infants and their caregivers for their participation in the study. We also thank the staff of the Infant Neuromotor Control Laboratory at Children’s Hospital Los Angles. This research study was a part of M.R. Rosales’ PhD dissertation work at the University of Southern California. This research was supported in part by a grant from the National Science Foundation [NSF CBET 1706964] (PI: B.A. Smith, Co-PI: M.J. Matarić) and in part by a Children’s Hospital Los Angeles Best Starts to Life Research Support Grant (PI: M.R. Rosales; Mentor: B.A. Smith).” We note that you have provided funding information that is currently declared in your Funding Statement. However, funding information should not appear in the Acknowledgments section or other areas of your manuscript. We will only publish funding information present in the Funding Statement section of the online submission form. Please remove any funding-related text from the manuscript and let us know how you would like to update your Funding Statement. Currently, your Funding Statement reads as follows: “National Science Foundation [NSF CBET 1706964] (PI: B.A. Smith, Co-PI: M.J. 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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The manuscript was interesting and good written and discussed. Introduction was good written and include the aim of the study. Methods were good designed. Results were good described. Discussion was good written. Reviewer #2: The authors studied 6 to 9 months old infants with high or low risk for getting an ASD diagnosis, based on sibling diagnoses, and how they could differ in gaze and motor behaviour in a contingency learning paradigm. They didn’t find expected differences (such as less anticipatory gaze or less overall looking time toward the agent), and they discuss this later on. I found the manuscript to be well written, with the Methods carefully and thoroughly described. I have some major concerns, but more like a possible add-on to the article. I found the overall article very sound and I encourage the publication of null results when the methods is sound and carefully described. This being said, I think the authors should run and report a power analysis before the manuscript being deemed appropriate for publication (see major concern #2). Major concerns 1. Participants section: It might be obvious to the authors, but as it is not clearly stated I do dare ask: were participants screened for motor related impairments such as cerebral palsy or epilepsy? The fact that the two groups of participants are comparable on the Bayley-4 Motor Percentile should be enough to assert that they are both comparable in basic motor skills anyways, but just to be sure, please answer my question and maybe add it to the main text if relevant. 2. I think the authors should include a power analysis in the methods section, to help readers assess whether the null results should be attributed to sample size or not. I really don’t mind the exploratory nature of this article and the null results, but in my opinion, it has to be accompanied by a power analysis. 3. Paragraph between pages 13 and 14: “trended to look longer”. The p-value is 0.13 so I don’t think we can label it as a trend (of course this is subjective but it also linked to conventions in the field, and the dominant convention would say that trending would be between 0.05 and 0.1). 4. A lot of null results could be explained by the fact that both groups were similar in FYI scores. Maybe it’s the phenotype that counts, and not so much the risk factor of having a sibling with ASD? The authors did a good job on commenting on that in the discussion section already. But maybe the authors could also consider median splitting their sample on FYI overall scores? And run their analyses again? Just as an exploratory analysis? I think this would be a much better addition to the article compared to the zooming in on some participants that is made in some sections and in figure 1 (see my major concern 8). 5. In a related manner, the hypothesis that sensory atypicalities could lead to differences in motor functioning is interesting. Have the authors considered median splitting their sample on high and low scores on FYI dimensions 3, 4 or 6? 6. Page 14 “In contrast, there were 4 infants, etc.”: I don’t think zooming in on these 4 participants really add any clarity. Maybe the authors could consider dropping these sections entirely? Or enclosing them in an insert? Minor concerns 1. There seems to be more lost gaze data for the LLA group due to blinking or participants shutting their eyes. Is the difference significant between the two groups? If so, what could be the explanation. 2. Not sure I understand the last paragraph of page 9. If I understand correctly, reaching a reliability of 80% would already mean that coders assessed the same video segments. So why is there a second step in which one third of the videos were assessed for inter raters reliability, like again? 3. Typos: - Page 9, last paragraph, 1st sentence: “reliably” should be “reliability”. - Page 18, line 3: “avoidance” instead of “avoidence”. Line 5: “attention” instead of “attnetion” ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Matias Baltazar ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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BEHAVIORAL DIFFERENCES BETWEEN INFANTS AT AND NOT AT ELEVATED RISK FOR AUTISM DURING A CONTINGENCY PARADIGM PLOS One Dear Dr. Rosales, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 25 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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BEHAVIORAL DIFFERENCES BETWEEN INFANTS AT AND NOT AT ELEVATED RISK FOR AUTISM DURING A CONTINGENCY PARADIGM PONE-D-25-06495R2 Dear Dr. Rosales, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Gökhan Töret Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-25-06495R2 PLOS One Dear Dr. Rosales, I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS One. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now being handed over to our production team. At this stage, our production department will prepare your paper for publication. This includes ensuring the following: * All references, tables, and figures are properly cited * All relevant supporting information is included in the manuscript submission, * There are no issues that prevent the paper from being properly typeset You will receive further instructions from the production team, including instructions on how to review your proof when it is ready. Please keep in mind that we are working through a large volume of accepted articles, so please give us a few days to review your paper and let you know the next and final steps. Lastly, if your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. You will receive an invoice from PLOS for your publication fee after your manuscript has reached the completed accept phase. If you receive an email requesting payment before acceptance or for any other service, this may be a phishing scheme. Learn how to identify phishing emails and protect your accounts at https://explore.plos.org/phishing. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Gökhan Töret Academic Editor PLOS One |
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