Peer Review History
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-->PONE-D-25-41276-->-->Uric acid levels mediate the association between four dietary indices and kidney stones in US adults: a cross-sectional study of NHANES 2007-2018-->-->PLOS ONE Dear Dr. cao, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Dear Authors, The manuscript has received an overall positive feedback from all the designated reviewers, however, many suggestions have been received to refine the clarity of the derived messages as well as to establish the validity of the inferences. Kindly go through the comments provided below and refine accordingly for further consideration. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 30 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** -->3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: Content-related Issues 1.Consider removing abbreviations that appear only once throughout the manuscript and using the full terms instead, to enhance readability. 2.Please report the observational study results following the STROBE checklist and provide the STROBE checklist in the supplementary materials. 3.The Introduction is insufficiently focused. Excessive space is devoted to describing other dietary indices, while the four dietary indices used in this study are underrepresented. This may impede reader comprehension. 4.In the Introduction, the sentence “This indicates that the animal-based diets may mediate the occurrence of kidney stones by influencing uric acid levels” appears abrupt. The preceding text does not clarify the relationship between animal-based diets and oxalate or calcium salts. Moreover, oxalate and calcium salts differ, as oxalate are primarily found in plants, not in animal-based diets. 5.Although the Introduction briefly mentions the association between uric acid and kidney stone formation, the link between dietary factors and uric acid is not addressed. Therefore, it is difficult to justify the hypothesis that uric acid mediates the relationship between dietary factors and kidney stones. 6.The statement “To our knowledge, few studies have investigated the relationship between healthy dietary indies” seems insufficiently supported. A search conducted in PubMed reveals multiple related studies, some using one of the four dietary indices, the NHANES database, or cohort study designs providing more robust evidence. The Introduction does not clearly highlight the novelty of this study, which may lead readers to question its significance. Please substantiate the rationale with adequate literature, clarify the research gap, and indicate the study’s innovation. (Note: indies is a spelling error; correct to indices.) 7. In the Methods section, the description in 2.1 Study Population and Design conflicts with the numbers and content shown in Figure 1. Please verify carefully. 8. Regarding kidney stone history in the Methods, is self-reported history sufficient to define kidney stones? How is potential bias addressed? Is there supporting evidence from high-quality literature? 9. In the Results section, based on the baseline characteristics table, the following conclusions may not be directly supported. Please reconsider and reference prior studies to accurately describe the study population: “The smoking index cotinine indicates that smoking promotes the occurrence of kidney stones. In addition, education level and marital status also had a certain impact on kidney stones.” 10.Before conducting mediation analysis in the Results section, please consider presenting the relationship between the four dietary indices and uric acid, to justify uric acid as a potential mediator. 11.The sentence “Among them, MED restricted the intake of fat and protein more strictly, and the mediating effect of uric acid was more prominent” provides a speculative explanation and is not appropriate for the Results section. Consider moving it to the Discussion or removing it. 12.In the Discussion, the statement “However, no study has explored the relationship between AHEI and kidney stones” may be misleading. To my knowledge, prior studies have investigated the association between AHEI and kidney stones. Please review the literature carefully. 13.Please discuss the strengths of this study and its public health significance in the Discussion. 14.The figure legends lack essential information, such as covariates adjusted in the models and explanations of abbreviations in the figures. This may affect reader comprehension. Please provide the missing details. Formatting-related Issues 15.The use of spacing throughout the manuscript is inconsistent. Please check carefully to maintain uniform formatting. 16.The references contain multiple inconsistencies in title capitalization and journal abbreviations. Please carefully review and correct these issues. Reviewer #2: Notes 1. Did the authors check the normality of the data? 2. Can dietary apps based on artificial intelligence help reduce the risk of kidney stones? Adding this discussion point can be helpful in managing individual diets. Reviewer #3: The study is actually interecting but it is need some revision as: 1. please explain the reason authors needs to divide the model into crude, 1 and 2 2. in the table 1 It would be more presentable if the author put age range 3. in the table 1 it would be more presentable if the author put BMI range 4. Please provides high-quality in every figures ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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<div>PONE-D-25-41276R1-->-->Uric acid levels mediate the association between four dietary indices and kidney stones in US adults: a cross-sectional study of NHANES 2007-2018-->-->PLOS ONE Dear Dr. cao, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Dear Authors, the reviewers have again suggested some major revisions. I recommend you revise the manuscript carefully based on the comments for reconsideration by the referees and subsequent decision. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 02 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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Kind regards, Yogesh Kumar Jain, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.--> Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** -->2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Please provide different age groups and BMI group range (ex: age: 20-30, 30-40, 40-50,50-60,60-70 or < 50 and > 50 (and reason behind that) BMI: < 18.5, 18.5 - 24.9, 25 - 29.9, 30-39.9, and > 40), instead of only stating the range and mean number. Providing age groups (not only stating the overall age range), might help enhance the discussion since it affects the BMI and might affect the overall result of this study. Thus, necessary to be stated and discussed. ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Uric acid levels mediate the association between four dietary indices and kidney stones in US adults: a cross-sectional study of NHANES 2007-2018 PONE-D-25-41276R2 Dear Dr. cao, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Yogesh Kumar Jain, PhD Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.--> Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** -->2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Dear author, Actually overall the manuscript revised is good, but the author has not provided the high-quality figure yet. Best regards, ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy .--> Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Dr. dr. Besut Daryanto, Sp.B., Sp.U(K) ********** |
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