Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 9, 2025 |
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“I fit the category of the box, it just doesn't describe me well.” Exploring the perspectives of autistic women and gender-diverse individuals on self-report autism measures PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Uglik-Marucha, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Your article has been reviewed by two experts. Both of them agreed that it enriches knowledge on diagnosing adult women on the autism spectrum. However, the reviewers also raised a number of comments, the inclusion of which could significantly improve the paper. From my perspective, the remarks concerning methodology (e.g., provide a clearer rationale for data saturation) are particularly important, as well as the interesting thread on the conceptualization of masking. There are also several valuable suggestions regarding the enrichment of the discussion. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 05 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Comments from the editorial office: Upon internal evaluation of the reviews provided, we kindly request you to disregard the reviewer report provided by Reviewer 3. No amendments are required in response to reviewer 3’s comments Additional Editor Comments: Your article has been reviewed by two experts. Both of them agreed that it enriches knowledge on diagnosing adult women on the autism spectrum. However, the reviewers also raised a number of comments, the inclusion of which could significantly improve the paper. From my perspective, the remarks concerning methodology (e.g., provide a clearer rationale for data saturation) are particularly important, as well as the interesting thread on the conceptualization of masking. There are also several valuable suggestions regarding the enrichment of the discussion. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review the manuscript entitled ““I fit the category of the box, it just doesn't describe me well.” Exploring the perspectives of autistic women and gender-diverse individuals on self-report autism measures”. Here are some suggestions that I hope will be interesting and helpful for the Authors: 1) First of all, I would like to highlight that I fully agree with your paper’s thesis and I find it very important for the community, both in terms of clinical practice and research. At the same time, one of the main issues of screening autism or measuring its traits is focusing only on quantitative psychological assessments which makes it reductionistic and may be one of the main issues in current clinical practice when it comes to autism. Therefore, although I understand that your paper focuses on quantitative research tools, I would suggest to expand the context of your Discussion on a very important aspect of qualitative interview (especially among adults), as no psychological measurement can surpass this way of gathering clinical information because it grasps way more context and aspects of one’s functioning. I think that this approach would be in line with your results, e.g., participants’ comments about lack of context or too narrow (or too broad) categories/items/statements presented in quantitative items. I see that you suggested that we need a quantitative measurement that addresses these issues but I wonder if that is actually possible to achieve. 2) On page 8, you comment that a proper quantitative measurement of autistic traits would focus on DSM-5 symptoms, monotropism, camouflaging, etc. I would suggest to discuss another important topic in a form of compensatory strategies (other than camouflaging), as these often make quantitative tools quite useless as they do not grasp these sort of aspects, especially among older adolescents and adults, regardless of their gender (e.g., some autistic individuals may state that they do not experience sensory sensitivity everyday because they have developed convenient and supportive strategies, not because they are not sensitive to sensory input, etc.). 3) On page 16, you described AQ-10 as “widely utilized in research, it has accumulated over 800 citations on Google Scholar and is commonly employed for participant inclusion and exclusion criteria in studies.” That is of course true although I would suggest adding an information about a growing literature regarding concerns about AQ-10’s reliability and validity issues, both in research and clinical practice (see: Bertrams, 2021; Taylor et al., 2020). I think that it would be important to point at this issue, especially in the context of your work. 4) Table 2 shows that 8 participants were AuDHDers and I wonder if you noticed any differences between AuDHD participants when compared to autistic ones? I think that it is possible that AuDHDers would vary in terms of their perception of understanding or identifying with the items presented. This information would be useful if added to the Participants section. Reviewer #2: Thank you for inviting me to review the manuscript entitled “I fit the category of the box, it just doesn't describe me well.” Exploring the perspectives of autistic women and gender-diverse individuals on self-report autism measures”. The manuscript focuses on the important topic of content validity of autism measures, particularly for autistic women and gender-diverse individuals, using a qualitative design and reflexive thematic analysis. Overall, I find the manuscript to be well-written, well-structured, and importantly, sufficiently nuanced to avoid reinforcing gender stereotypes in autism. Main comments: The manuscript raises important issues regarding the content validity of commonly used autism questionnaires. However, it would benefit from a clearer distinction between the purpose of the included clinical measures and broader conceptualizations of autism. The introduction and methods focus on instruments recommended for autism screening and assessments. Still, in the discussion, the authors suggest poor content validity due to missing aspects of the autism construct, such as emotional empathy and fairness. Given that construct validity is tied to the instrument’s intended purpose, as stated in the introduction, I suggest expanding the discussion to differentiate between clinical utility and the broader goal of understanding autistic lived experience, which may not fully overlap. Additionally, the authors report that the findings on emotional empathy in autism are mixed which seems to indicate that more research on the topic is needed before inclusion in autism screening questionnaires is considered. The topic of masking is discussed throughout the manuscript. While masking is a common experience among autistic adults, it does not seem to be specific to autistic people, (e.g., overlaps with impression management in ADHD, social anxiety; see for example, Ai et al (2024) https://doi.org/10.1016/j.comppsych.2023.152434). In the following sentence, masking appears to be portrayed as a facet of autism rather than compensatory strategies: “Masking has been suggested to constitute subtler variations of autistic traits, though further research is needed, potentially contributing to the under-recognition of autism in females...” (p. 7). I suggest that the authors clarify their conceptualization of masking and discuss its presence in non-autistic populations. It would also be helpful to elaborate on how masking could be assessed within an autism screening instrument, given the concerns on its specificity stated above. The recruitment channels are described, but the manuscript lacks information on how recruitment was conducted, specifically, how the study was advertised. This is important as it may influence participant self-selection. For example, could the recruitment procedure specifically have attracted those with certain/strong opinions regarding the topic which are then generalized to autistic women? More information on data saturation and the rationale for the final sample size would strengthen the manuscript. Was data saturation evaluated during data collection? What guided the inclusion of the final sample, were stopping rules or other criteria used? I also suggest that the authors briefly discuss the potential influence of online communities, social media, and recent research on participants’ responses. Given the increased interest in the topic it would be good to acknowledge this possibility. Minor: p. 19 – The reason for excluding 3 participants were vague. A reference is given, but that paper includes a range of issues. I suggest briefly summarizing the reasons for exclusion more specifically to improve transparency. p. 6 – When reporting sex/gender differences findings on the narrow construct level, a broad description is given, “autistic females tend to exhibit better social communication skills than autistic males” (p. 6). Subsequently, broad level findings are described in more granular terms and split into social communication and interaction respectively, which makes the passage slightly confusing. Please revise for clarity. p. 19 - In the sample, 72.7% are reported to have a diagnosis of autism – where diagnoses self-reported or verified through clinical documentation? p. 27 – the name of subtheme 1.4: "Non-autistic friendly process" sounds like an uncommon phrasing. Since “autism-friendly” is used elsewhere, I suggest revising to “not autism-friendly process” or “non-autism-friendly process”. RRBIs are suggested to be used as “compensatory mechanisms for masking” in both the results and discussion. This interpretation is not clear to me – could the authors elaborate on what is meant by this and provide examples? ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Anna Pyszkowska Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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