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| Original SubmissionJuly 30, 2025 |
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Additional Editor Comments: Thank you for submitting the following manuscript to PLOS ONE. Please revise the manuscript according to the reviewers' comments and upload the revised file. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: While the study addresses an important public health question regarding Traditional Chinese Medicine (TCM) utilization and its association with mortality and life expectancy, I have major concerns regarding the conceptualization and measurement of the exposure variable, which limit the validity of causal inference. In the current manuscript, TCM encompasses diverse modalities including herbal medicine, acupuncture, and Tuina (therapeutic massage), which differ substantially in mechanism, intended use, and potential biological impact. Pooling such heterogeneous practices into a single binary or percentage-based measure assumes homogeneity of effect, which is unlikely to be true. This aggregation obscures which component, if any, is responsible for the observed associations, and risks diluting or misattributing effects. The use of “>20% of outpatient visits in the prior 18 months” as the primary threshold for defining TCM users is arbitrary and lacks empirical justification. This measure does not directly reflect treatment intensity, dose, duration, or quality of TCM received. For example, a patient receiving a few acupuncture sessions could be classified similarly to one on continuous herbal therapy, despite potentially very different physiological effects. The observed associations may reflect characteristics of individuals who choose TCM, rather than the effects of TCM interventions themselves. TCM users in the cohort were generally younger, healthier, and had more favorable lifestyle factors at baseline. Although IPTW adjustment was employed, unmeasured confounding from health consciousness, diet quality beyond fruit/vegetable intake, social support, and other behavioral factors remains plausible. Regular contact with TCM practitioners may also lead to ancillary benefits (e.g., health advice, stress reduction) unrelated to specific pharmacologic or procedural effects. Given these limitations, the results should be interpreted cautiously. The study as designed cannot disentangle whether the life expectancy gain is attributable to TCM-specific therapeutic mechanisms or to correlated health behaviors and socio-cultural factors. Current phrasing in the Discussion leans toward causal interpretation, which may overstate the evidence. It is critical to frame the findings as associations and to emphasize the potential role of residual and unmeasured confounding. Recommendation: To strengthen the manuscript, I suggest: - Conducting modality-specific analyses (herbal medicine, acupuncture, Tuina) if feasible. - Performing sensitivity analyses using alternative TCM exposure thresholds (e.g., 10%, 30%). - Adjusting for additional markers of health consciousness and healthcare engagement, or employing negative control outcomes to test for unmeasured confounding. - Revising the Discussion to clearly differentiate between “association” and “causation” and to acknowledge that the observed benefits may reflect characteristics of TCM users rather than TCM per se. Reviewer #2: 本研究利用台湾全国健康调查和保险数据库�探讨中医药使用对老年人预期寿命和死亡风险的影响。研究设计严谨�样本量大�统计方法先进。研究结果对公共卫生和临床实践具有重要意义。建议稿件经过细微修改后被接受。 使用来自 NHIS 和 NHIRD 的链接数据提供了国家代表性和较长的随访期。应用滚动外推算法来估计终生生存函数�结合治疗加权的逆概率 �IPTW� 来控制混杂因素�展示了方法论的复杂性。中医使用的定义是“过去 18 个月中医门诊就诊占门诊总就诊量的 20% 以上”是一个关键的暴露标准。它将加强手稿提供简短的理由或引用支持这一阈值的相关文献�无论是临床还是方法学。 <Translation performed by Google translate: "This study used the Taiwan National Health Survey and Insurance Database to investigate the impact of TCM use on life expectancy and mortality risk among older adults. The study was rigorously designed, with a large sample size and advanced statistical methods. The findings have important implications for public health and clinical practice. The manuscript was accepted after minor revisions. The use of linked data from the NHIS and NHIRD provided national representativeness and a long follow-up period. The application of a rolling extrapolation algorithm to estimate lifetime survival functions, combined with inverse probability of treatment weighting (IPTW) to control for confounding factors, demonstrates the methodological complexity. The definition of TCM use as "TCM outpatient visits accounting for ≥ 20% of total outpatient visits in the previous 18 months" is a key exposure criterion. Manuscripts would be encouraged to provide brief justification or cite relevant literature supporting this threshold, both clinically and methodologically."> Reviewer #3: 1.The study employs IPTW, but it is unclear whether extreme weights were addressed. Such weights can compromise stability and validity. Please clarify whether weight stabilization or truncation was applied; if not, provide a rationale. 2.On page 12 of the manuscript, the paragraph beginning with “When analyzing by smoking status, current or former smokers who used TCM had a significantly…” appears to be duplicated. Please revise. 3.This study reports a dose–response relationship between TCM utilization and mortality, expressed as the hazard ratio per 10% increase in TCM use. However, it is not clear whether the analysis assumed a linear relationship. Could the authors clarify if any assessment of non-linearity was performed, for example, using restricted cubic spline models or other approaches? This would help determine whether the association is truly linear or if there are potential threshold or plateau effects. 4.I appreciate the authors’ effort to account for the dynamic nature of TCM utilization using a time-dependent approach, which is appropriate and strengthens the analysis. However, I recommend that the authors provide more methodological details on how the annual proportion of TCM services relative to total outpatient visits was defined and incorporated into the model. Since an individual’s frequency of TCM visits may fluctuate from year to year (e.g., higher in one year and lower in another), it would be helpful to clarify how such variability was handled in the analysis and how the time-varying exposure was formally defined. Clearer reporting of this step would enhance the transparency and reproducibility of the study. 5.The authors may consider conducting additional cause-specific mortality analyses, which could provide further insights into whether the observed association between TCM utilization and overall mortality is attributable to specific causes of death. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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The Impact of Traditional Chinese Medicine Utilization on Life Expectancy and Mortality PONE-D-25-39358R1 Dear Dr. Lo, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Yung-Hsiang Chen, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Congratulations on the acceptance of your manuscript, and thank you for your interest in submitting your work to PLOS ONE. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #2: At this stage, the authors addressed all 19 key points raised by the three reviewers one by one, with a conscientious attitude and substantial changes. The core concerns—exposure heterogeneity, arbitrary threshold, residual confounding, linearity assumption, weight stability, etc.—were all matched in the Response and line numbers were provided for easy checking. Moreover, the wording was toned down and causal statements were made more cautious; for example, “provides compelling evidence” was changed to “suggests an association,” and the conclusion repeatedly emphasizes “observational,” “residual confounding,” and “cannot establish causality,” basically eliminating Reviewer #1’s worry about “over-causal interpretation.” In summary, I recommend acceptance for publication. Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** |
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