Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 16, 2025 |
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Matthys and colleagues developed a mouse-adapted IBV strain based on a previously published B/Memphis/12/1997 backbone. They assessed how acquisition of mutations in all viral segments contribute to enhanced pathogenicity in mice, and rescued an reassortant IBV strain which contained the most recent B/Austria/2021 HA and NA. Given the low pathogenicity of IBV strains in mice in general, this is a useful tool which can be used to study IBV pathogenesis in vivo. I have a few minor comments which I hope will improve the quality of the manuscript: - Line 33: add complete lineage names, e.g. B/Victoria/2/1987-like (B/Victoria) and B/Yamagata/16/1988-like - Line 36/37: there is an issue with the bibliography (numbers vs last authors name in some citations) - Line 45: is the 6 IBV strains in the last 10 years in Victoria only? If so, please comment on this. - Line 71 ff (Figure 1 legend): were four or three mice used per group? This is currently unclear. Also more appropriate to speak of 'weight change over time' instead of 'weight loss'. - Line 83 ff (Figure 2 legend): Change pathogenicity to something like 'Kaplan Meier survival curve'. Pathogenicity could also be reflected in weight loss, viral replication across respiratory organs etc, and this was not assessed here. - Line 122 ff (Figure 4). The figure and the used colours are confusing. As said in Line 124, the HA, NP and NS segments are identical between the Mem97 WT and Mem97 m.a., then why are the colours different? I think it would be helpful to split the figure up and first show what segments are generated and how they differ between the Mem97 WT and the MEM97 m.a., and then show in a subsequent figure what RG viruses have been generated and tested. Line135 ff: I find the usage of the word 'heterologous' confusing in this context, because the B/HwNw-Mem97 is already per se an heterologous virus, as it contains the interal segments from B/Mem/1997 and HA/NA from B/Washington/2019. Reviewer #2: The manuscript addresses an important topic in influenza B virus research by generating mouse-adapted viruses and examining how different viral gene segments contribute to pathogenicity. The study is thoughtfully designed, and the combination of reverse genetics, sequencing, and mouse infection models offers useful insights into virulence determinants. The experiments appear carefully performed, and the use of multiple reassortant viruses adds strength to the work. That said, several areas need clarification or additional detail to improve transparency and reproducibility. For the virus that could not be rescued (B/HwNw-Mem97 m.a.), please provide a hypothesis for why rescue failed and discuss possible technical or biological reasons. PFU measurements were used to monitor virus rescue and replication, and the rescued viruses were confirmed by sequencing. However, no independent positive control was included. Please discuss this limitation and explain how sequencing combined with PFU measurements ensured that the rescue system worked reliably. No negative control (such as mock-transfected cells or PBS-treated mice) was included. Please clarify how background effects or potential contamination were ruled out. Please clarify whether PFU or viral titers were measured after each mouse passage during adaptation, or whether cytopathic effect (CPE) was the only readout. Quantitative titers across passages would strengthen conclusions about viral adaptation. Were lung viral titers measured during the adaptation passages or in the BALB/c and DBA/2J infection studies? If not, please consider adding these data, as they would support the morbidity and mortality observations. Were histopathological analyses performed on lung tissue to confirm pathology and correlate with clinical signs? If not, please discuss this as a limitation. Were cytokine profiles or other immune markers measured to provide mechanistic insight into disease severity? If feasible, please consider including these data or discuss this limitation. Please clarify the rationale for choosing DBA/2J mice for adaptation and BALB/c mice for subsequent infection studies, and discuss how strain-specific susceptibility might influence interpretation. The manuscript states that virulence is independent of HA and NA. Please expand on the mechanism and explain how the data support this conclusion. Finally, please include a more explicit discussion of the study’s limitations. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Internal gene segments from a mouse-adapted influenza B virus confer increased pathogenicity to mice PONE-D-25-54336R1 Dear Dr. Portela Catani, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Victor C Huber Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Thank you for the careful revision and for providing detailed responses to the reviewer’s comments. The manuscript has improved in clarity and transparency following revision. The clarification of positive and negative controls in the reverse genetics rescue system strengthens confidence in the experimental approach. The explanation regarding the unsuccessful rescue of B/HwNw-Mem97 m.a. is reasonable, particularly in light of the successful rescue of reassortant viruses sharing the same internal backbone. The addition of viral titration data across selected mouse passages provides helpful context for the adaptation process. The rationale for the use of DBA/2J mice for adaptation and BALB/c mice for infection studies is now clearly justified and appropriately supported by literature. Importantly, the revision of the manuscript title and clarification of the role of internal gene segments address concerns regarding potential overinterpretation of HA and NA independence. Although measurements of lung viral titers during infection, histopathological analysis, and immune profiling would further strengthen mechanistic insight, the authors have appropriately acknowledged these as limitations in the discussion. Overall, the revisions satisfactorily address the reviewer’s concerns and improve the manuscript. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Mahmuda Yeasmin ********** |
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