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If your data cannot be made publicly available for ethical or legal reasons (e.g., public availability would compromise patient privacy), please explain your reasons on resubmission and your exemption request will be escalated for approval. 5. Please include a separate caption for each figure in your manuscript 6. If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Additional Editor Comments: Reviewer #1: The authors of the publication analyzed data from a relatively large group of patients and took great care to illustrate the statistical results. The statistical analysis methodology itself is rich and uses advanced methods. A limitation of this analysis may be the lack of consideration of physical activity and work performed in the study population. Another interesting aspect is the possible difference between biological and chronological age in the study population, as well as the reference to average life expectancy. Reviewer #2: 总结� 作者使用 CHARLS 队列的数据调查了生物年龄 �BA� 与有症状的膝骨关节炎 �KOA� 之间的关联。他们应用逻辑回归、受限三次样条和机器学习模型�XGBoost、LightGBM 等�来探索 BA 的预测价值。该研究报告了一种非线性关联�在大约 66.7 年的 BA 后�KOA 风险加速。XGBoost 取得了最佳的预测性能�SHAP 确认 BA 是最有影响力的因素。作者得出结论�BA 是 KOA 风险分层的一种有前途的生物标志物。1. 学习规划�横断面设计不允许因果推断�但部分结论表明了预测或因果影响。建议�重新构建主张以强调“关联”而不是“预测/因果关系”。样本选择和代表性�在~38,800名参与者中�只剩下9,505人�最后分析了1,000例KOA病例。选择过程可能会引入偏差。建议�详细解释排除标准、缺失数据处理和敏感性分析。2. KOA诊断标准�有症状的 KOA 仅通过医生自我报告的疼痛诊断来定义�缺乏影像学确认�例如 KL 分级�。建议�更详细地讨论错误分类的风险�并在可能的情况下根据其他诊断定义验证结果。3. 生物年龄计算仅使用了 8 种生物标志物�而不是 KDM-BA 中的标准 12 种。尽管通过事先验证证明了这一点�但潜在的偏差并未得到充分解决。建议�提供比较或敏感性分析�并更明确地承认局限性。4. 机器学习方法对于复杂模型�样本量�1,000 个 KOA 案例�可能会受到限制�从而引起过度拟合的担忧。没有使用外部验证数据集。建议�为模型选择添加更有力的理由�扩展过度拟合预防�并阐明跨子集的性能是否稳健。5. 讨论与解释讨论夸大了 BA 的临床适用性�而没有充分考虑成本、可行性和普遍性。建议�缓和主张并包括与国际研究的比较。6. 小问题摘要和结论中的一些术语�例如�“预测”、“因果关系”�应替换为更谨慎的措辞。澄清每个逻辑回归模型表中包含的协变量�以提高透明度。数字�例如�RCS、SHAP 图�应包括更清晰的轴标签和临床解释。数据可用性声明应指定使用的确切 CHARLS 数据集版本。 该手稿通过创新地使用 BA 和机器学习解决了一个重要而新颖的问题。然而�需要进行大量修订�以解决方法论透明度、诊断准确性和研究结果的解释问题。我建议在重新考虑之前进行重大修改。 Reviewer #3: This manuscript explores the association between biological age (BA) and symptomatic knee osteoarthritis (KOA) in Chinese adults using nationally representative CHARLS data, incorporating both traditional statistical modeling and machine learning approaches. The topic is timely and relevant, the data source is authoritative, and the modeling framework is generally sound. The finding of a nonlinear threshold relationship between BA and KOA risk is of potential epidemiological and public health significance. However, the manuscript still has several important areas for improvement in terms of theoretical framing, methodological transparency, terminology consistency, and result presentation. Therefore, I recommend major revision before the manuscript can be considered for publication in this journal. 1.Strengthen international comparison in the literature review The introduction is mostly focused on the Chinese population and CHARLS data. While this is aligned with the study's aims, it limits international contextualization. I suggest including a brief overview of international research on the relationship between biological age and KOA—especially regarding differences in BA construction methods and clinical applications—to enhance the theoretical richness and global relevance of the study. 2.Clarify model structure and data preprocessing in the machine learning section Although the manuscript evaluates six machine learning models, there is limited detail regarding model construction. Please clarify how features were selected, whether feature scaling or normalization was applied, how missing data were handled, and how overfitting was prevented. These additions would enhance reproducibility and model transparency. 3.Add a brief discussion of potential clinical applications of BA While the predictive value of BA is emphasized, the practical implications are underdeveloped. I recommend briefly discussing how BA could potentially be integrated into clinical KOA screening or aging-related health assessments, such as early warning systems or personalized intervention strategies, to enhance the manuscript’s translational value. 4.Unify terminology and maintain consistency throughout the manuscript The manuscript inconsistently uses terms like “biological age,” “BA,” and “KDM-BA.” I suggest defining the term clearly at first mention and consistently using “BA (KDM-based)” or another unified format throughout the paper to improve clarity and professionalism. 5.Provide clearer explanations for SHAP interpretation plots Although SHAP plots are visually compelling, the textual explanations are brief. I suggest elaborating on what the colors (high/low feature values), directions (positive/negative effects), and spread (magnitude of influence) mean in the context of SHAP bar and beeswarm plots. This would help readers better interpret model results. 6.Add supplementary plots of key biomarker distributions To increase transparency and interpretability, I suggest including histograms or boxplots of key input variables (e.g., CRP, SBP, HbA1c, etc.) and BA itself in the supplementary materials. This would allow readers to assess data skewness, outliers, and distribution assumptions. 7.Streamline the machine learning result presentation The current machine learning results section is somewhat overloaded with detailed fold-level performance metrics. I suggest moving some of the five-fold cross-validation details (e.g., individual fold metrics) to supplementary materials, while retaining only the averaged summary metrics (e.g., AUROC, accuracy, F1-score) in the main text for better readability and flow. Editor comments : The manuscript is well-prepared and provides valuable insights. However, there are several areas that should be improved before moving forward: The introduction, while informative, is somewhat lengthy. Key ideas could be presented more concisely by merging overlapping sentences (e.g., lines 59–73 and 86–91, which both emphasize the burden and necessity theme). Certain sections read as a list of facts rather than a connected narrative. For example, after presenting KOA prevalence and burden, it would be more effective to transition directly into why BA matters compared to CA, instead of repeating burden-related points. The mechanistic explanation of SASP (lines 82–86) is too detailed for the introduction. It could be shortened to a high-level overview with supporting citations, while the in-depth mechanistic pathways are better suited for the Discussion section. The phrase “mitigating the burden of KOA” appears multiple times; rephrasing or reducing its repetition would improve clarity and flow. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The authors of the publication analyzed data from a relatively large group of patients and took great care to illustrate the statistical results. The statistical analysis methodology itself is rich and uses advanced methods. A limitation of this analysis may be the lack of consideration of physical activity and work performed in the study population. Another interesting aspect is the possible difference between biological and chronological age in the study population, as well as the reference to average life expectancy. Reviewer #2: 总结� 作者使用 CHARLS 队列的数据调查了生物年龄 �BA� 与有症状的膝骨关节炎 �KOA� 之间的关联。他们应用逻辑回归、受限三次样条和机器学习模型�XGBoost、LightGBM 等�来探索 BA 的预测价值。该研究报告了一种非线性关联�在大约 66.7 年的 BA 后�KOA 风险加速。XGBoost 取得了最佳的预测性能�SHAP 确认 BA 是最有影响力的因素。作者得出结论�BA 是 KOA 风险分层的一种有前途的生物标志物。1. 学习规划�横断面设计不允许因果推断�但部分结论表明了预测或因果影响。建议�重新构建主张以强调“关联”而不是“预测/因果关系”。样本选择和代表性�在~38,800名参与者中�只剩下9,505人�最后分析了1,000例KOA病例。选择过程可能会引入偏差。建议�详细解释排除标准、缺失数据处理和敏感性分析。2. KOA诊断标准�有症状的 KOA 仅通过医生自我报告的疼痛诊断来定义�缺乏影像学确认�例如 KL 分级�。建议�更详细地讨论错误分类的风险�并在可能的情况下根据其他诊断定义验证结果。3. 生物年龄计算仅使用了 8 种生物标志物�而不是 KDM-BA 中的标准 12 种。尽管通过事先验证证明了这一点�但潜在的偏差并未得到充分解决。建议�提供比较或敏感性分析�并更明确地承认局限性。4. 机器学习方法对于复杂模型�样本量�1,000 个 KOA 案例�可能会受到限制�从而引起过度拟合的担忧。没有使用外部验证数据集。建议�为模型选择添加更有力的理由�扩展过度拟合预防�并阐明跨子集的性能是否稳健。5. 讨论与解释讨论夸大了 BA 的临床适用性�而没有充分考虑成本、可行性和普遍性。建议�缓和主张并包括与国际研究的比较。6. 小问题摘要和结论中的一些术语�例如�“预测”、“因果关系”�应替换为更谨慎的措辞。澄清每个逻辑回归模型表中包含的协变量�以提高透明度。数字�例如�RCS、SHAP 图�应包括更清晰的轴标签和临床解释。数据可用性声明应指定使用的确切 CHARLS 数据集版本。 该手稿通过创新地使用 BA 和机器学习解决了一个重要而新颖的问题。然而�需要进行大量修订�以解决方法论透明度、诊断准确性和研究结果的解释问题。我建议在重新考虑之前进行重大修改。 Reviewer #3: This manuscript explores the association between biological age (BA) and symptomatic knee osteoarthritis (KOA) in Chinese adults using nationally representative CHARLS data, incorporating both traditional statistical modeling and machine learning approaches. The topic is timely and relevant, the data source is authoritative, and the modeling framework is generally sound. The finding of a nonlinear threshold relationship between BA and KOA risk is of potential epidemiological and public health significance. However, the manuscript still has several important areas for improvement in terms of theoretical framing, methodological transparency, terminology consistency, and result presentation. Therefore, I recommend major revision before the manuscript can be considered for publication in this journal. 1.Strengthen international comparison in the literature review The introduction is mostly focused on the Chinese population and CHARLS data. While this is aligned with the study's aims, it limits international contextualization. I suggest including a brief overview of international research on the relationship between biological age and KOA—especially regarding differences in BA construction methods and clinical applications—to enhance the theoretical richness and global relevance of the study. 2.Clarify model structure and data preprocessing in the machine learning section Although the manuscript evaluates six machine learning models, there is limited detail regarding model construction. Please clarify how features were selected, whether feature scaling or normalization was applied, how missing data were handled, and how overfitting was prevented. These additions would enhance reproducibility and model transparency. 3.Add a brief discussion of potential clinical applications of BA While the predictive value of BA is emphasized, the practical implications are underdeveloped. I recommend briefly discussing how BA could potentially be integrated into clinical KOA screening or aging-related health assessments, such as early warning systems or personalized intervention strategies, to enhance the manuscript’s translational value. 4.Unify terminology and maintain consistency throughout the manuscript The manuscript inconsistently uses terms like “biological age,” “BA,” and “KDM-BA.” I suggest defining the term clearly at first mention and consistently using “BA (KDM-based)” or another unified format throughout the paper to improve clarity and professionalism. 5.Provide clearer explanations for SHAP interpretation plots Although SHAP plots are visually compelling, the textual explanations are brief. I suggest elaborating on what the colors (high/low feature values), directions (positive/negative effects), and spread (magnitude of influence) mean in the context of SHAP bar and beeswarm plots. This would help readers better interpret model results. 6.Add supplementary plots of key biomarker distributions To increase transparency and interpretability, I suggest including histograms or boxplots of key input variables (e.g., CRP, SBP, HbA1c, etc.) and BA itself in the supplementary materials. This would allow readers to assess data skewness, outliers, and distribution assumptions. 7.Streamline the machine learning result presentation The current machine learning results section is somewhat overloaded with detailed fold-level performance metrics. I suggest moving some of the five-fold cross-validation details (e.g., individual fold metrics) to supplementary materials, while retaining only the averaged summary metrics (e.g., AUROC, accuracy, F1-score) in the main text for better readability and flow. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Biological Age Threshold is Associated with Symptomatic Knee Osteoarthritis Risk in Chinese Adults: Insights from Machine Learning Analysis of a National Cohort PONE-D-25-41030R1 Dear Dr. Wang, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Ramada Rateb Khasawneh Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Good Luck Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #2: Thank you to the research team for their contributions to knee arthritis. The revised parts have explained and addressed previous concerns, and corresponding additional supplements and experiments have been made. Conclusion: No supplements. It is recommended to publish. Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Xiang Chen ********** |
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