Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 21, 2025 |
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: General Assessment: This manuscript presents a comprehensive population-based epidemiological analysis of dilated cardiomyopathy (DCM)-related mortality across the United States using CDC WONDER data from 1999 to 2023. The authors have assessed mortality trends stratified by sex, race/ethnicity, geography, and urban-rural classification, and used Joinpoint regression to calculate annual percent changes. The study is timely, well-executed, and presents critical findings that highlight disparities in DCM burden and mortality, particularly among Non-Hispanic Black individuals and rural populations. The manuscript is overall scientifically sound and well-structured. However, contextualization with previously published work on this topic is essential to enhance the originality and relevance of the study. Major Comments: 1. Comparison with Prior Literature on DCM Mortality (Incremental Value) There are at least two peer-reviewed studies that have already examined trends in dilated cardiomyopathy-related mortality in the U.S. using the CDC WONDER database. These should be explicitly cited and discussed in both the Introduction and Discussion sections to clearly delineate how the current manuscript adds new insights: • Ashraf, Taimoor MBBSa; Abunada, Omar MBBSb; Kumar, Aashish MBBSc; Ahmed, Saboor MBBSd; Ali Siddiqui, Muhammad Basit MBBSd; Memon, Umer MBBSe; Dev, Shah MBBSf; Meghjiani, Aashish MBBSd; Turesh, Muskan MBBSf; Khatri, Govinda MBBSd; Rai, Aneesh MBBSd; Manan, Abdul MBBSe; Deepak, Fnu MBBSg; Kumar, Mukesh MBBS, MPhilh; Yusuf, Salih Abdella MBBSi,*; Siddiq, Mohammad Arham MBBSe; Haseeb, Abdul MBBSe; Shafique, Muhammad Ashir MBBSe. Trends in mortality and disparities in dilated cardiomyopathy across gender, race, and region in the United States (1999–2020). Annals of Medicine & Surgery 2025 Feb;87(2):627–634. DOI: [10.1097/MS9.0000000000002908]. • Komminni, P; Raja, A; Raja, S; et al. TRENDS IN MORTALITY DUE TO DILATED CARDIOMYOPATHY IN THE UNITED STATES: A 1999–2020 CDC WONDER DATABASE STUDY. Journal of the American College of Cardiology (JACC). 2025 Apr;85(12_Supplement):1630. DOI: [10.1016/S0735-1097(25)02114-X]. These studies, while valuable, analyzed data only through 2020. The current manuscript provides three additional years (2021–2023), which is particularly important in the context of COVID-19-related disruptions in cardiovascular care. Additionally, this manuscript distinguishes itself by providing a more granular state-level and urbanization-based breakdown, and using Joinpoint regression with APCs for each demographic stratum—offering a more detailed and temporally segmented analysis. The authors are strongly encouraged to include the above citations in their revised manuscript and clearly explain how the present analysis offers new and extended insights beyond these two prior works. 2. Validation of CDC WONDER for Cardiomyopathy Research To support the reliability and credibility of the CDC WONDER database for cardiomyopathy mortality surveillance, it is advisable to cite studies that have used this dataset for related subtypes of cardiomyopathy. The following two references serve as examples of robust, peer-reviewed studies that utilized the same database to assess hypertrophic and substance-induced cardiomyopathy mortality: • Renjihtlal SLM, Eid MM, Vyas C, Mohamed S, Shanmukhappa S, Renjith K, Mostafa MR, Baibhav B, Pillai N. Demographics and Trends of Hypertrophic Cardiomyopathy-Related Mortality in the United States, 1999–2020. Current Problems in Cardiology. 2023 Jul;48(7):101681. DOI: [10.1016/j.cpcardiol.2023.101681]. PMID: 36906160. • Raja A, Raja S, Amin SB, Ahmed M, Rizvi SHA, Abdalla AS, Majid M, Asghar MS. Trends in substance-induced cardiomyopathy-related mortality among older adults in the United States from 1999 to 2020. Current Problems in Cardiology. 2024 Feb;49(2):102355. DOI: [10.1016/j.cpcardiol.2023.102355]. PMID: 38128635. Incorporating these studies into the Methods or Discussion section will strengthen the argument that CDC WONDER is a validated and extensively used resource for studying cardiomyopathy epidemiology at the population level. 3. COVID-19 and Post-2020 Interpretation Given the inclusion of data up to 2023, the authors should include a brief discussion of how the COVID-19 pandemic may have affected access to care, cardiovascular mortality, or death certification practices, potentially influencing the recent plateau or shifts in DCM mortality trends observed after 2020. Reviewer #2: The article is good for publication except some mistakes like the binding words in « …considerably higherAAMR … », Furthermore, it would be great if the discussion included results from other continents/countries. 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Trends and Disparities in Dilated Cardiomyopathy Related Mortality Among Adults in the United States: A CDC WONDER Analysis (1999-2023) PONE-D-25-15148R1 Dear Dr. Ahmed, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Aldrin V. Gomes, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewer #2: Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #2: Congratulations to authors ! The article has been refined and it is now good for publication in this journal. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #2: Yes: Roland Muhindo Muyisa ********** |
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