Peer Review History
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PONE-D-25-05729Managing minor ailments and pharmacy services: how do people make their decisions?PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Perraudin, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We have now completed the evaluation of your manuscript. Based on the feedback received from the peer reviewers , we have concluded that your manuscript requires minor revisions before it can be further considered for publication in PLOS ONE. Please revise the manuscript to address all comments raised by the reviewers. Kindly note that Reviewer 2 has provided their comments in an uploaded PDF file . Additionally, please revise the percentages reported in Table 1 . Some values listed as 1% are actually less than 1% (e.g., gender), and the current presentation results in a total exceeding 100%. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 19 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: It's interesting to learn about this through a case study conducted in a country other than the UK, Australia, or Canada, where most studies on community pharmacy and minor ailment services are conducted. I also think the findings of this paper are applicable to other countries, since although people are willing to use pharmacy services to manage minor ailments, they are unaware of their existence and have a low willingness to pay. In the Methods section (line 122), the authors state that the questionnaire used was evaluated and “validated” by the research team. I don't think the word "validated" is correct, since in my opinion, validating a questionnaire requires assessing both reliability (something the authors do when evaluating Face and Content validity) and feasibility (alpha Cronbach or any other test). Therefore, I would modify the text ("The research team evaluated and “assessed” the questionnaire according to the..."). In Results, I think the text should be clarified a bit. The authors say (lines 144-145): “They were not healthcare professionals and had a restricted insurance model with a minimum annual deductible, as shown in Table 1”. In reality, those who had "restricted models" were 56%, which, although it is the majority, is a percentage close to 50%. In my opinion, it does not justify the generalization used since it begins with "They were." I think it would be better to start with “the majority being non-healthcare professionals”. It is interesting to see that, although as described in table S2, the more serious the symptoms were, the less self-medication and pharmacy were preferred, in Figure 3, “perceived severity” is the fourth cause for going to the pharmacy. This should surely be discussed in the Discussion because at first glance it does not make sense. In fact, the discussion says (line 183) that “The more severe the symptoms were perceived, the less self-medication and pharmacy preferred”, but it does not add that the severity of symptoms was the fourth cause for going to the pharmacy. (Line 219) In line 219 when the authors state that “there is a diversity of pharmacy services with different characteristics” I would clarify that they refer to “different services to manage minor ailments” to avoid confusion with other different services such as Medication review, adherence, reconciliation and so on. Regarding REFERENCES, authors should always follow the same criteria when describing the journal: either use the full name, as in Ref#2, or use the abbreviated name, as they do in Ref#14: Ref#1. A semicolon should follow London, before the year. Ref#2. The volume is missing: BJGP 2006; 56(533):911-7 Ref#5. Delete “Nov” Ref#6. Delete “Dec” Ref#8. They should include a link to the website. Ref#10. Delete “Fevr” Ref#13. Delete “Aut” Ref#14. Delete “24 Janv” Ref#17. A link to the website should be included. Ref#19. Delete “Oct” Ref#31. Delete “Jull” Ref#34. I would reference this as: Rutter P. Community pharmacy symptoms, diagnosis and treatment. 5th edition. London: Elsevier ed.; 2020. 416 p. Ref#34. A link to the website should be included. Ref#43. Or, Int J Gen Med, or include the full name of the journal. Volume (2016;9:291-302). Ref#44. Basel is missing from the journal name, and delete "Nov 29": Pharmacy (Basel). 2018:6(4):125. Ref#45. A link to the website should be included. Reviewer #2: Dear Authors, Please refer to my comments in the attached file. Kind regards, Dear Authors, Please refer to my comments in the attached file. Kind regards, Dear Authors, Please refer to my comments in the attached file. Kind regards, ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). 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PONE-D-25-05729R1Managing minor ailments and pharmacy services: how do people make their decisions?PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Perraudin, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. All reviewers have confirmed that the revisions made in response to their comments are satisfactory, and they support the acceptance of your manuscript. However, one reviewer noted a minor typographical error that should be corrected before final acceptance. Accordingly, we are issuing a decision of minor revisions to allow you to correct this issue. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 25 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: My only comment is that in line 118, the verb "assess" should be in past tense (Assesssed) [118] access to medicines, available services) [22-25]. We also ASSESSED their level of knowledge, Reviewer #2: Dear Author, Thank you for addressing all my comments. I have no further comment. Regards, Dear Author, Thank you for addressing all my comments. I have no further comment. Regards, ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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