Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 10, 2025 |
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Before we proceed with your manuscript, please address the following prompts: a) If there are ethical or legal restrictions on sharing a de-identified data set, please explain them in detail (e.g., data contain potentially identifying or sensitive patient information, data are owned by a third-party organization, etc.) and who has imposed them (e.g., a Research Ethics Committee or Institutional Review Board, etc.). Please also provide contact information for a data access committee, ethics committee, or other institutional body to which data requests may be sent. b) If there are no restrictions, please upload the minimal anonymized data set necessary to replicate your study findings to a stable, public repository and provide us with the relevant URLs, DOIs, or accession numbers. Please see http://www.bmj.com/content/340/bmj.c181.long for guidelines on how to de-identify and prepare clinical data for publication. For a list of recommended repositories, please see https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/recommended-repositories. You also have the option of uploading the data as Supporting Information files, but we would recommend depositing data directly to a data repository if possible. Please update your Data Availability statement in the submission form accordingly. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** Reviewer #1: This study conducted a secondary analysis of hospital admission records for which economic/neighborhood groups of LGBTQ+ older individuals were treated at some academic medical centers. Almost all patients were there for treatment of pulmonary symptoms. The majority of LGBTQ+ patents (66.4%) were from areas with low socioeconomic disadvantage. The authors expressed surprise about this finding. The authors discuss patient ease of access, support, insurance, and community factors facilitating their care saying policy should address LGBTQ+ patients from less affluent neighborhoods with higher social disadvantage. This is a reasonable recommendation. There is no discussion of health outcomes. Likely this information was not in the health records that they consulted. Is this a limitation? Reviewer #2: This article aims to determine if a relationship exists between LGBTQ+ older adult hospitalizations and the county-level socioeconomic conditions in which they reside, and to interpret this relationship through the lens of the SGM Health Research Framework at the individual, interpersonal, community, and societal level. This reviewer believes the authors were mostly successful in accomplishing their aims. The manuscript appears technically sound and the data supports their conclusions; this reviewer is not well-versed enough in statistical analyses to address their appropriateness or rigor; the authors do not provide access to the data, citing unspecified privacy/ethical concerns; and while most of the manuscript is intelligible and written in standard English, there are a number of spelling/grammatical errors that require correction. The major and minor issues that should be addressed prior to publication are detailed below: 1. One major area of concern is the lack of justification for the exclusion of emergency room visits. In the Introduction, the authors reference previous studies linking socioeconomic status and rates of hospitalizations, rehospitalizations, and emergency visits. It is not made clear in the Methods section why emergency room visits were not included. 2. Relatedly, another major area of concern is in the authors’ examination of “ADI Groups and Patient Characteristics” in the Results section. The authors do not mention any analyses regarding relationships between ADI groups and primary diagnoses nor hospitalizations per patient. If no relationships were found, this should be stated. 3. Another area of concern: in the Discussion section, “Interpersonal Level Factors”, on lines 268-270, the authors do not adequately provide reasoning for why differences in sexual orientation across low, moderate, and high disadvantage areas suggests differences in social support and community connection. What is the reasoning behind this claim? No references are provided for differences in social support and community connection between lesbian/gay-identified older adults and asexual older adults. 4. Of more minor concern is the writing of this article. While much of the article is perfectly intelligible and well-written, there are multiple spelling and grammatical errors, and several sentences that are unclear throughout the paper. Please see the following lines for errors that should be addressed prior to publication: 99-101, 163-166, 192-193, 194, 201, 203, 228, 260, 280, 284, 290-292, 338-339, 346, 350, 352, 354. This reviewer also recommends the entire article be reviewed for any spelling mistakes and grammatical errors, in case any were missed in the above list. 5. Of minor concern: on line 165, the article says “(see XX et al. 2023[21])”. It is unclear if this is meant as a purposeful blinding, or if it was mistakenly left in. 6. Of minor concern: while comparisons to heterosexual and cisgender counterparts are made in the introduction section, the Discussion section does not bring this up as a potential future direction of research. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org . Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Dear Dr. May, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. We invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 22 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols . Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols . We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Saima Aleem Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** Reviewer #1: The review has addressed all of the reviewers' concerns and queries. The authors did a competent job in refining this submission. Reviewer #2: A majority of the original comments were addressed. The manuscript is technically sound, the data support the conclusion, and the analyses were appropriate and rigorous. The authors indicate the data cannot be shared publicly because of data privacy, but is available upon request. However, minor revisions are recommended as there are still a large number of grammatical errors in the text that were not addressed. It is recommended the authors correct the following errors and review their manuscript carefully for any additional grammatical errors missed by the reviewer: Line 165: “…or it can be entered it in the clinical setting…” to “…or can be entered in the clinical setting…” Line 195-196: “…when there is a significant overall effect was detected.” to “…when a significant overall effect was detected.” Line 243: “…the majority of (66.4%) of hospitalized LGBTQ+…” to “…the majority (66.4%) of hospitalized LGBTQ+…” Line 276: “…backgrounds are more likely to receive support from multiple sources…” to “…backgrounds being more likely to receive support from multiple sources…” Line 287: typo—change “my” to “may” Line 291: typo—change “tavel” to “travel” Line 298: typo—change “my” to “may” Line 299: typo—change “aniti-discrimination” to “anti-discrimination” Line 350-351: “Street level data would would have…” to “Street level data would have…” Line 362: “…particularly or older…” to “…particularly for older…” Line 364: “Since the pandemic there…” to “Since the pandemic, there…” Line 366: “Depending on which disadvantage index used…” to “Depending on which disadvantage index is used…” Except for these grammatical issues, the manuscript is well-written and engaging. In particular, the Discussion, Future Directions, and Limitations sections were well executed and robust. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org |
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Social determinants of health in lesbian, gay, bisexual, transgender, queer, and other sexual and gender minority (LGBTQ+) older adults: Impact of socioeconomic disadvantage on inpatient hospitalizations PONE-D-25-01218R2 Dear Dr. May, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Saima Aleem Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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