Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 7, 2025 |
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Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to contribute as a reviewer for this manuscript. I believe this review is important and valuable for advancing the field of T2DM care. Abstract: • It is a good, concise introduction. I think it would be better to be more clearly specifying the importance of self-management in relation to T2DM. The current version makes me understand that self-management is essential for disease control in general e.g. other chronic diseases (not specific to T2DM). • The last sentence mentioning the use of ICF as a guide for data analysis which I think it might better fit under the “Methods” rather than “Context and Objectives”. Introduction: • The introduction is concise and easy to understand. However, in line 78-84, could you explain more the rationale for the need of this study according to the limitation of previous study (limitations regarding the inclusion of instruments for individuals with T2DM) and show how your review addresses this gap in knowledge. Methods: • Eligibility criteria: I am wondering why study designs such as cross-sectional studies and post-intervention analyses will be excluded, and what study design or research type will be included in this review (e.g. psychometric study)? I understand that this review is focussing on the study targeting the development and validation of instrument. In case of the paper regarding instrument development were reported in qualitative study, would it be included or excluded? • Search strategy: o Would the hand search of the reference lists (backward citation tracking) of all study mean those study met eligibility criteria, or all study retrieved from databases? o I am thinking that forward citation tracking could also be beneficial for this review. o Well-structured and thorough search terms (according to Supplementary File 1). Certainty of evidence and instrument recommendation: The instrument recommendation within this review is very important and it will benefit research and practice in the field of T2DM. Data synthesis: • You mentioned that you will use a narrative synthesis. My thinking is that it would be good to give citation to make it clearer that which (version of) narrative synthesis you will be using. I also think it could be helpful for reader if you can provide a very short list/steps of narrative synthesis you are planning to do. • It is a good point that you mentioned “If a validation study of the same instrument for different populations exists, its measurement properties results will be considered as a single instrument”. I noticed that one of your inclusion criteria is to include cultural adaptation study and that I would assume that you might include this kind of study which may have different language versions of instrument. It would be good to mention this as well. Discussion: Clear justification to conduct this review and provided implication of the result of this review. Reviewer #2: The manuscript is well-organized for a systematic review. The design follows recognized guidelines (COSMIN, PRISMA-P, and GRADE), reflecting good methodological rigor. However, there are areas that need improvement. Abstract: The objective is valid but could be rephrased to be clearer and more concrete. It would be ideal to add a final sentence summarizing what is expected to learn or contribute with this review. Additionally, including main results and conclusions is recommended. Introduction: The study’s justification is relevant, but it could be enriched with a brief overview of existing instruments for self-management in T2DM, as well as a critical reflection on previous reviews. This would help better position the manuscript’s added value. Methods: Search strategy: It would be useful to specify an estimated cutoff date for the bibliographic searches. Contact with authors: Though mentioned later, it would be worth clarifying whether any contact was made with the authors of the reviewed articles and under what terms. Results: As a systematic review, it would be interesting to include the results of each search conducted across different databases, along with a brief outline of how the instruments will be classified. Discussion: The current section is somewhat generic. To strengthen it, we could delve deeper into the clinical and methodological implications of the study, anticipate potential limitations, and highlight how this review surpasses or complements previous work. Also, consider adding conclusions from the systematic review. Finally, the basis for classifying the reviewed instruments and their analysis is unclear. Reviewer #3: General assessment This is a well-designed and timely protocol for a systematic review of self-management instruments in type 2 diabetes mellitus (T2DM), including an evaluation of their psychometric properties and linkage to the International Classification of Functioning, Disability and Health (ICF). The protocol is clearly structured, adheres to COSMIN guidelines, and proposes a comprehensive search strategy. The inclusion of instrument databases such as PROMIS and PROQOLID is a notable strength, and the authors’ decision to assess content via ICF coding adds an innovative dimension. The protocol addresses an important topic with practical implications for clinical and research contexts, particularly in the identification of reliable and valid tools for assessing self-management in chronic illness. Major points for clarification and improvement 1. Instruments with subscales for self-management The exclusion of instruments measuring more than one construct is understandable; however, many validated instruments include distinct subscales for self-management. It is unclear whether such tools will be excluded altogether or considered based on the relevance of the subscale. The authors are encouraged to clarify this point, as it could impact the comprehensiveness of the review. 2. Choice of databases – rationale for excluding Cochrane and PEDro The protocol omits both the Cochrane Library and PEDro, despite their relevance. Cochrane CENTRAL could include validation studies nested within trials, and PEDro may contain relevant psychometric evaluations in physiotherapy contexts. If these databases were deliberately excluded, the authors should briefly justify this decision. 3. Lack of explicit quality thresholds for instrument evaluation While the authors refer to COSMIN and GRADE frameworks, there is no indication of the thresholds that will be used to assess whether an instrument demonstrates adequate reliability, validity, or responsiveness (e.g., Cronbach’s alpha ≥ 0.70). Including these definitions would strengthen the transparency and reproducibility of the review. 4. Handling of shortened or alternate versions of instruments The protocol does not specify how the authors will deal with instruments that have short forms or multiple validated versions. Will these be reviewed separately, combined, or will only the original versions be considered? This decision should be made explicit. 5. Purpose and operationalization of ICF linkage Although the plan to link instrument content to the ICF is an interesting innovation, the rationale and utility of this approach remain vague. Will this linkage be used to recommend instruments for specific clinical needs or populations? How will it inform the interpretation or selection of tools? 6. Language strategy in search procedures The authors state that there will be no language restrictions, but the search strategies do not indicate how non-English terms will be incorporated. Will search terms be translated into other languages? Will translators be used to assess studies in different languages? Clarifying the technical implementation of this inclusive strategy would be helpful. 7. Lack of data sharing plan The protocol does not specify whether and where the extracted data, quality assessments, or ICF mappings will be made available upon completion of the review. Including a plan for data sharing (e.g. via OSF, Figshare, or journal supplements) would align the protocol with open science practices and enhance its utility for researchers and practitioners. Summary This is a promising and well-constructed protocol with strong methodological foundations. Addressing the six points listed above would enhance its clarity, transparency, and completeness, ensuring the resulting review is as rigorous and comprehensive as possible. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Assessment of the Psychometric Properties of Self-Management Measurement Instruments for Individuals with Type 2 Diabetes: A Systematic Review Protocol PONE-D-25-17107R1 Dear Dr. Almeida, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Manuela Mendonça Figueirêdo Coelho, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Dear Authors, We are pleased to inform you that your revised manuscript has been accepted for publication in PLOS ONE. The revisions made in response to the editorial and peer reviewer comments have significantly improved the clarity, methodological rigor, and transparency of the protocol. We commend your team for the thoughtful and thorough responses provided, as well as for the scientific quality and relevance of the proposed systematic review. Your study addresses a important gap in the literature by mapping and evaluating self-management instruments for individuals with type 2 diabetes mellitus, and we believe it will make a valuable contribution to both research and clinical practice. Congratulations on the acceptance of your manuscript. You will receive a follow-up message from the production team regarding the final steps for publication. Thank you for choosing PLOS ONE as the venue for your work. Reviewers' comments: |
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