Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 18, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-41343Trends in the estimated proportion of outpatients with menstrual disorders and the number of prescribed low-dose estrogen/progestin drugs in Japan: A descriptive studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Nakao, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 05 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Additional Editor Comments: The results presented in this study " Trends in the estimated proportion of outpatients with menstrual disorders and the number of prescribed low-dose estrogen/progestin drugs in Japan: A descriptive study" offer a comprehensive overview of national trends in outpatient visits for menstrual disorders and endometriosis, symptom reporting in population-based surveys, and the utilization and pricing of low-dose estrogen-progestin (LEP) contraceptives over the past two decades. While the descriptive findings are valuable, several critical issues regarding internal consistency, methodological robustness, and interpretative depth require further consideration. #1. One of the most prominent concerns arises from the divergence between trends in self-reported symptoms and outpatient visits. According to the Patient Survey data, the proportion of follow-up outpatient visits for menstrual disorders and endometriosis has markedly increased since 2014. In contrast, data from the Comprehensive Survey of Living Conditions indicate that the proportion of individuals reporting irregular menstruation or menstrual pain peaked in 2007 and subsequently declined or stabilized.This incongruity raises important questions: • Does the increase in outpatient visits reflect improved diagnosis and management rather than a true rise in disease burden? • Could changing diagnostic thresholds, increased public awareness, or health system reforms (e.g., insurance coverage for LEPs starting in 2019) have influenced patterns of care-seeking behavior? • Are individuals with milder symptoms less likely to report them in surveys while still engaging with the healthcare system? Without addressing these inconsistencies, the narrative on disease burden and healthcare utilization remains incomplete. #2. The results indicate age-specific peaks in outpatient visits and symptom reporting, with notable shifts over time. For example, follow-up visits for menstrual disorders showed an unexpected increase among individuals in their early 20s in the 2020 survey, while endometriosis-related follow-ups increased among women in their 30s. However, the study does not offer a thorough explanation or control for external variables, such as demographic shifts or public health initiatives, which may have impacted these trends. Further stratified analyses or age-standardized rates would enhance interpretability. Could you discuss these questions? #3. The observed 3.8-fold increase in LEP prescriptions from 2014 to 2021, particularly among younger women, is attributable to enhanced accessibility following expanded insurance coverage. Nonetheless, the results focus primarily on prescription volume and drug pricing, without addressing treatment adherence, efficacy, or patient-reported outcomes. The clinical relevance of increased LEP use—whether it translates to improved symptom control, reduced disease progression, or better quality of life—remains speculative without such data. What do you think about this point? 3.1. Moreover, while drug utilization data are detailed, the lack of correlation with outpatient visit or symptom trends weakens the integrated understanding of treatment effectiveness. Could you give us new insights on this point? #4. The discussion and conclusion sections present a well-structured narrative linking the increased use of LEPs (low-dose estrogen–progestin combinations) to policy changes and access to affordable treatment. However, a deeper academic analysis raises important questions that were not sufficiently explored. First, while the association between LEP coverage and the rise in follow-up visits is clearly outlined, causality is assumed rather than critically interrogated. Were other potential contributing factors—such as increased public awareness, evolving cultural attitudes toward menstruation, or improvements in diagnostic capabilities—considered and ruled out? The study would benefit from discussing possible confounding variables that might influence health-seeking behaviors. 4.1. Moreover, the authors note a discrepancy between increasing medical follow-ups and the stagnation or slight decline in self-reported symptoms; however, this paradox is only superficially addressed. This inconsistency raises questions about the nature of symptom perception versus medical diagnosis. Could there be a growing recognition of menstrual disorders as legitimate medical conditions, even if subjective experiences remain stable? Alternatively, are there socioeconomic or educational factors influencing who seeks treatment and who does not? These gaps suggest that further qualitative research might help clarify why follow-up care has increased without a corresponding rise in symptom reporting. #5. Minor revisions: -How can future studies address the inability to distinguish between primary and secondary dysmenorrhea in aggregated data? - What are the underlying reasons why many women still opt for over-the-counter (OTC) medications instead of seeking medical treatment for menstrual disorders? - How significant is the reduction in economic burden due to generic drugs, and how does this affect long-term adherence to treatment? - Are there cultural stigmas or societal norms in Japan that discourage women from visiting healthcare providers for menstrual-related symptoms? - Could the insurance coverage for LEPs be extended to include other menstrual-related conditions, and what would be the potential impact? - How can the data from this study be used to predict future trends in menstrual health and improve healthcare accessibility for younger women? [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: An interesting work on the part of the authors. However, in my opinion, the study has two major problems: 1. The design of the study includes two research questions: First question: Why the proportion of outpatients with menstrual disorders obtained from the Patient Survey (1999-2020) diverges from the proportion of persons reporting irregular menstruation or menstrual pain, obtained from the Comprehensive Survey of Living Conditions (1998-2022)? The answer to this question could be developed in a separate article. This would lead to the literature on self-perceived health status and the psychocultural conditioning factors that determine it. Moreover, to explore those conditioning factors from a women’s health perspective could be a promising research line. Second question: Is the prevalence of menstrual disorders (regardless of the database used) and the prescription of LEPs obtained from NDB Open Data statistically correlated? Are there are clinical and epidemiological reasons to assume so? in my opinion the article should better justify the reason why this association is assumed. If the research question is the first one, this implies a completely different article. Conversely, if the research question is the second one, I don’t see the reason why to use two different datasets to infer the prevalence of menstrual disorders. 2. The article claims that no studies have provided reliable statistical information on the extent to which women with menstrual symptoms visit their doctors and are prescribed LEPs. However, according to the authors the study is purely descriptive. I don’t see reliable statistics. In fact, the usage of publicly available aggregate data and the absence of a minimal statistical analysis reduces the level of evidence that supports the conclusions. I think the authors made a significant effort to investigate, aggregate and describe the different sources of data related to the menstrual disorders and that is the contribution of the article. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Trends in the estimated proportion of outpatients with menstrual disorders and the number of prescribed low-dose estrogen/progestin drugs in Japan: A descriptive study PONE-D-24-41343R1 Dear Dr. Nakao, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Marcio Alexandre H. Rodrigues, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Dear authors, The changes made following the peer reviewers' comments demonstrate a significant improvement in the manuscript and effectively address the limitations of the study by clarifying its descriptive nature and emphasizing the need for further detailed analyses using individual-level data. The revisions provide a more balanced interpretation of the findings, avoiding overstatements and ensuring transparency regarding the study's scope and methodology. Additionally, the expanded discussion on temporal trends, healthcare utilization, and the impact of social and systemic factors adds depth and relevance to the research. These enhancements have strengthened the overall quality and clarity of the manuscript. Best Regards Prof Marcio Alexandre H Rodrigues Academic Editor Reviewers' comments: |
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