Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 10, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-57148The Chilean Burden of Disability-Adjusted Life Years due to Cardiovascular Diseases: Results from the Global Burden of Disease Study 2021PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Petermann-Rocha, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 18 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Abstract • The abstract lacks a mention of statistical methods used in the study. Please include a brief description to enhance clarity and transparency. • The abstract does not provide concrete recommendations for public health or policymaking. Incorporate actionable outcomes to strengthen its impact and relevance. Introduction • The transition from global statistics to Chile-specific challenges is abrupt, disrupting the narrative flow. Include a bridging sentence to improve coherence, such as: "While the global burden of CVD is well-documented, Chile faces unique challenges stemming from its diverse geography, aging population, and healthcare disparities." • Repeated phrases like "leading cause of mortality". Consolidate by using synonyms, such as replacing "leading cause of mortality" with "primary contributor to death and disability," to enhance readability and avoid redundancy. Methods • The gender-specific analysis methodology is not described adequately. It is unclear whether statistical tests were applied to validate differences. • Excluding third-level risk factors is not sufficiently justified, which may leave readers questioning the comprehensiveness of the study. • No mention of ethical approvals or permissions for using secondary data, which is a standard requirement for publication. • Include statistical tests used for gender-specific trends, e.g., "A t-test was conducted to evaluate the statistical significance of differences between gender-specific DALYs." • Justify exclusions, e.g., "Third-level risk factors were excluded to simplify analysis and focus on the most impactful contributors to CVD burden." • Add a note on ethical considerations, e.g., "As this study utilized publicly available secondary data, no ethical approval was required." Results • Figures and tables are referenced but not thoroughly explained in the text, which may confuse readers unfamiliar with the dataset. • Trends like the increase in atrial fibrillation and endocarditis are mentioned but not explored in depth. • Add explanations for key figures, e.g., "Figure 1 illustrates the decline in CVD DALYs over time, with the steepest reduction observed between 2000 and 2010." • Analyse trends more deeply, e.g., "The rise in atrial fibrillation and flutter may be attributed to increased detection rates due to advancements in diagnostic tools." Discussion • The discussion about atrial fibrillation and vascular cognitive impairment is lengthy but loosely connected to the study’s objectives. • Recommendations are broad and lack specificity for Chile. • Focus on directly relevant implications, e.g., "The gender-specific burden of stroke and ischemic heart disease highlights the need for tailored interventions addressing unique risk profiles in men and women." • Provide concrete recommendations, e.g., "Increased funding for hypertension screening programs in rural areas of Chile could reduce DALYs attributed to high systolic blood pressure." Reviewer #2: It is better to stratify not only by sex, but also by other very important variables; for instance; residence, occupation et. other wise the paper looks nice; on the my view it is interesting and pass to publication. Reviewer #3: The manuscript titled "The Chilean Burden of Disability-Adjusted Life Years due to Cardiovascular Diseases: Results from the Global Burden of Disease Study 2021" is a research study that examines the impact of cardiovascular diseases (CVD) on the population of Chile over the past three decades. The study uses data from the Global Burden of Disease Study 2021 to analyze age-standardized rates of disability-adjusted life years (DALYs) due to various CVDs from 1990 to 2021, focusing on gender differences and key risk factors. The study highlights the need for continued public health efforts and multi-level interventions to address the key risk factors contributing to CVD in Chile. The authors emphasize the importance of targeted strategies to reduce the impact of high SBP, dietary risks, and other modifiable risk factors on cardiovascular health. I want to congratulate the authors on embarking on this all-important study. The methodology used in the study appears to be robust and comprehensive. However, this study has some limitations. As with any ecological research, there is a risk of ecological fallacy, where associations observed at the population level may not necessarily apply to individuals. The study notes that the measurement of low physical activity within the GBD framework is simplified, which may underestimate its impact. The study reports national-level data and does not include subnational information, which could be relevant for understanding regional differences within Chile. Overall, the methodology is well-suited to the study's objectives and thoroughly analyses the CVD burden and its risk factors in Chile. While the study is comprehensive and well-conducted, several aspects could be improved to enhance its robustness and applicability. Incorporating subnational data could provide more detailed insights into regional variations within Chile. This would help to identify specific areas with higher burdens of CVD and tailor public health interventions more effectively. The study mentions that the measurement of low physical activity is simplified. A more detailed analysis that considers different dimensions of physical activity (e.g., intensity, duration, type, and domain) could provide a clearer understanding of its impact on CVD. The study excludes third-level risk factors, such as specific dietary risks. Including these could offer a more nuanced understanding of how specific dietary components contribute to the CVD burden. While the study examines trends over time, a more detailed longitudinal analysis could help to identify causal relationships and the impact of specific interventions over the study period. Including socioeconomic factors in the analysis could provide insights into how income, education, and access to healthcare influence the CVD burden and its risk factors. Incorporating qualitative data, such as patient interviews or focus groups, could provide context to the quantitative findings. Analyzing the impact of specific public health policies and interventions implemented in Chile over the study period could help to identify successful strategies and areas needing improvement. Expanding the range of environmental factors considered, such as urbanization, climate change, and occupational hazards, could provide a more comprehensive view of their impact on CVD. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #1: Yes: Faizul Akmal Abdul Rahim Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: U S H GAMAGE ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org . 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The Chilean Burden of Disability-Adjusted Life Years due to Cardiovascular Diseases: Results from the Global Burden of Disease Study 2021 PONE-D-24-57148R1 Dear Dr. Petermann-Rocha, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #3: The document is a manuscript draft for a research article analyzing the burden of disability-adjusted life years (DALYs) due to cardiovascular diseases in Chile, based on data from the Global Burden of Disease Study 2021. The authors have adequately addressed Reviewer comments. They acknowledged the limitations of their study, which stem from the use of aggregated, national-level data from the Global Burden of Disease (GBD) Study 2021. Specifically: 1. Subnational Data: The authors agreed that incorporating subnational data would provide valuable insights but clarified that such data is not available in the GBD dataset. They acknowledged this limitation in the Discussion section 2. Physical Activity Measurement: The authors recognized the simplified measurement of physical activity in the GBD framework and discussed this limitation in the Strengths and Limitations section. 3. Exclusion of Third-Level Risk Factors: The authors justified the exclusion of third-level risk factors to improve clarity and focus on the most impactful contributors to the CVD burden. 4. Longitudinal Analysis: The authors acknowledged the value of longitudinal analyses but explained that the ecological and descriptive nature of the GBD dataset does not allow for causal inference or intervention-specific tracking. 5. Socioeconomic Factors: The authors noted the absence of socioeconomic variables in the GBD dataset and mentioned this limitation in the Discussion section. 6. Qualitative Data: The authors agreed that qualitative data could complement their findings but clarified that their study design, based on secondary data, did not involve primary data collection. 7. Public Health Policies: The authors acknowledged the importance of analyzing the impact of public health policies but explained that the GBD database does not include information on policy timelines. They encouraged future research in this area. 8. Environmental Factors: The authors recognized the importance of factors like urbanization and climate change but noted that their analysis was limited to the environmental risks reported in the GBD dataset. Overall, the authors provided thoughtful responses to Reviewer 3's comments, acknowledged the study's limitations, and emphasized the need for future research to address these gaps. Reviewer #4: I believe all questions and concerns have been addressed suifficiently and the manuscript is suitable for publish. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy . Reviewer #3: Yes: U S H GAMAGE Reviewer #4: Yes: Alireza Ramandi ********** |
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