Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 4, 2025 |
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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Thanks for sending this interesting paper for review. I found the topic to be very current, the questions well-formed and articulated and the findings interesting. My comments are designed to improve the ms further and appear in the order they arose while reading the ms. 1. The main limitation of the paper in my view is that only 5 clients contributed to the data (in contrast to 15 professionals), but this is acknowledged with reasons. There is also a big question in my mind about the suitability of using frequency counts to the extent that they appear in the ms for this type of methodology (See comment 12 below) 2. I thought that the ms could benefit from mention of the recent work on the digital therapeutic alliance concept (e.g. Tremain H, McEnery C, Fletcher K, Murray G. The Therapeutic Alliance in Digital Mental Health Interventions for Serious Mental Illnesses: Narrative Review JMIR Ment Health 2020;7(8):e17204 doi: 10.2196/17204) . Most obviously from line 70-90 of the introduction where therapeutic alliance is mentioned and perhaps again in the discussion as context for and implications of the findings on the compassion framework. How might the authors’ findings inform the development of digital technologies themselves to create or enhance the sense of compassion from within the digital intervention itself? 3. Furthermore, raising awareness of the work on digital therapeutic alliance could help to shift attitudes towards DMHIs particularly within less convinced clinicians. 4. Line 168 – error in referencing. 5. I would recommend that the authors read, reference and incorporate the recommendations from the RTARG paper and corresponding checklist - which now represents best practice reporting in thematic analysis. [Braun V, Clarke V. Supporting best practice in reflexive thematic analysis reporting in Palliative Medicine: A review of published research and introduction to the Reflexive Thematic Analysis Reporting Guidelines (RTARG). Palliative Medicine. 2024;38(6):608-616. doi:10.1177/02692163241234800] 6. Another limitation on the sample was that it contained only female clients mostly female professionals. Although this is mentioned in the limitations I don’t think this is done appropriately. It is inevitable that a different sample would produce different perspectives – as the aim of qualitative research is to give one set of perspectives, not to produce generalisable or replicable findings. Instead there should be some reflection on how this largely female perspective might contextualise the findings. What might be the unique links or connections between being female and the findings ? 7. Please add information on how ‘professional’ was defined (e.g with a clinical practice qualification, or a set amount of training or just experience or other?) 8. Please justify why and how EMDR counted as a digital technology? This therapy can be entirely non digital. 9. Sentence line 215-6 is unclear and poorly worded (‘If a code….’) - please expand on what is precisely is meant. 10. The Researcher reflexivity (better header than ‘researcher characteristics’) statement should go further: detail how the researcher's background, experiences, and perspectives may have influenced the research process and findings. This includes acknowledging potential biases, assumptions, and values, and explaining how these were considered and managed throughout the study. The statement should also address the impact of the research on the researcher, including any emotional or personal responses. See the RTARG reference above. 11. Table what? L247. ‘2’ missing 12. Using frequency counts in relation to themes has been long criticised – not just by RTARG (where using frequency counts as a justification for themes presented is listed as not appropriate). Throughout the paper frequency counts are used to support the interpretation and findings. This is arguably, bringing a quantitative lens to a qualitative method and is largely shunned by qualitative experts. They are listed in tables, in text and in theme headings. As an essential minimum I’d suggest removing them from the theme titles; if they are retained in narrative text and tables then a strong justification should be provided – but the best solution is probably to remove them entirely (or demote to supplementary files. 13. While the results are interesting they are also very long and text heavy. To aid getting the main messages across I would suggest a thematic map or other diagram or visual representation. I found the current tables a bit too granular and too many to get an overall picture of the findings – which is where a visual could help. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Compassion as a guiding framework for the implementation of digital mental health interventions: an interview study with clients and professionals. PONE-D-25-08553R1 Dear Dr. van Lotringen, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Weifeng Han, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewer #1: Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The authors have been very responsive to all the comments . Thank you. Data availability statement is well justified ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Professor Jenny Yiend ********** |
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