Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 19, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-34344Impact of COVID-19 on the utilisation of in-patient and out-patient healthcare services in Bangladesh: analysis of routine healthcare system dataPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Manna, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 18 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: 1. Title: The title is quite long. A more concise version would be: “Impact of COVID-19 on Healthcare Utilization in Bangladesh: Analysis of Routine Data.” 2. Short Title: Please correct the short title to: “Impact of COVID-19 on In-Patient and Out-Patient Care.” 3. Language: The article needs to be revised by a native English writer to improve readability and clarity. Abstract: 4. Abbreviations: Abbreviations should be defined the first time they are used in the manuscript. Introduction: 5. References: Provide the reference for lines 42-45. 6. References: Provide the reference for lines 70-72. 7. Clarity: The introduction needs to be rewritten to avoid repetition and to be more concise. Methods: 8. Could you please provide a detailed paragraph outlining the assessment methods utilized in your research? This should include a description of both the direct and indirect methods employed, such as tests, surveys, interviews, or observational techniques, and how these methods contributed to the reliability and validity of your findings. Data Analysis: 9. Using the Durbin-Watson statistic to check for autocorrelation is correct. However, note that the Durbin-Watson test is typically used for linear regression models. For Poisson regression, you might consider using other methods like the autocorrelation function (ACF) or partial autocorrelation function (PACF). (line 135) 10. Clarify whether you used Poisson regression or linear regression for the final analysis. If Poisson regression was used, remove the mention of applying a linear regression model. (line 137) Results: 11. Please correct the sentence in lines 147-148 to: “The number of OPD visits fell in 2020 (34.1 million) compared to 2019 but showed an upward trend, reaching the targeted predicted value in 2021.” 12. Correct “increases” to “increased” in line 150. 13. Line 220, table 2: The confidence interval for Dhaka in 2020 is listed as (0.83-0.78), which seems incorrect because the lower bound should be less than the upper bound. Discussion: 14. Please compare your major findings to previous studies found in the literature. 15. Write a small paragraph recommending possible measures to manage such pandemics in the future, while citing experiences from previous pandemics Reviewer #2: Overall this is an interesting piece of work to validate the hypothesis that the COVID-19 pandemic impacted utilisation of outpatient and inpatient care. -The introduction is very well written and well describes the context of the study and need to better understand the problem. The materials and methods -Generally are well written and clear. PlosOne required the data to be made publicly available so please recheck this criteria/allowances. -Indicators on line 117: would be nice to highlight if certain departments were not captured in the DHIS Results -Lines147-151: Suggest a minor rewriting as at the moment not clear if difference in visits were 34.1million and 37.5million or declined to that value. -Line 158: Results should not traditionally contain any subjective statements e.g. "interesting". Would rather suggest a rephrasing to state exactly what the trend was (i.e. sudden increase etc.) as a simple statement. -Line 166-67: Again, please re-highlight this point in the discussion offering some deductions/explanations. -Line 167-8: Please double check this grammar through the document as should state "number of IPD admissions declined" and remove the word "were" from this statement. In Line 168 please also remove the word substantial and replace with something more objective. -Line 170-71: Suggest replacing "could not touch" to "did not reach the predicted values" -Line 179: remove the word "was" from "OPD visits was drastically declined". Likewise in line 180. -Line 188: See suggestion about from lines 167-8 Discussion -Line 260-261: Would be nice to offer some suggestion as to why this significant rebound was observed, do we think it's due to catch-up from backlog? Limitations: -Line 285: Please state what proportion of the population access healthcare in private facilities to understand what amount of data is missing from this analysis. Important to understand how we can apply the results to the general population of Bangladesh. -Line 290-93: Please explain why this more detailed analysis on age/departments/gender could not be assessed. Is that due to limitations with data access, limitations in the data itself or not the purpose of this study. Figures: -Minor suggestion to include commas in the y-axis to help readability of the numbers ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Impact of COVID-19 on In-Patient and Out-Patient services in Bangladesh PONE-D-24-34344R1 Dear Dr. Manna, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Rajib Chowdhury, M.Sc.; MPH Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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