PONE-D-24-26485The co-occurrence of multimorbidity and polypharmacy among middle-aged and older adults in Canada: A cross-sectional study using the Canadian Longitudinal Study on Aging (CLSA) and the Canadian Primary Care Sentinel Surveillance Network (CPCSSN)PLOS ONE

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Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: The submitted manuscript presents valuable evidence on the prevalence of polypharmacy (PP) and multimorbidity (MM) on a countrywide scale in Canada. It is authored properly in standard English and is properly structured as well. However, two points should be taken into consideration. First, concerning the abstract, the maximum permitted length is 300 words (provided with ~ 380). Second, as stated in the data resource profile of the CPCSSN (doi: 10.1093/ije/dyw248) “… older adults and females are over-represented in the CPCSSN database as compared with the national population. As such it is important to consider age and sex standardization and/or adjustment for all surveillance and research studies employing these data”, it is advisable also to report the age- and sex-standardized values of the overall prevalence of the co-occurrence of MM and PP (and each in isolation) for this dataset, or to state the reason(s) for the exclusion of this step.

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Reviewer #2: Dear Author, Thank you for conducting this study. However, The following points should be considered:

1- The abstract is relatively long and could be more concise, particularly in the results section, to enhance readability and clarity.

2- Although the authors stated that they conducted a descriptive study, a statistical comparison (e.g., Chi-squared test in Table 1) could be useful for better understanding the differences between the two cohorts.

3- The discussion section could be strengthened by addressing the following points:

A. The reasons for the differences in the prevalence of poly-pharmacy and multi-morbidity between studies.

B. The clinical consequences and health impacts of poly-pharmacy and multi-morbidity should be addressed.

C. Discussing the influence of factors such as socioeconomic status and lifestyle on poly-pharmacy and multi-morbidity can enhance understanding of the topic and the significance of the study.

D. The discussion should align with the results and emphasize the significance and effectiveness of such studies.

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Reviewer #1: Yes: Shahrokh Mousavi

Reviewer #2: No

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The co-occurrence of multimorbidity and polypharmacy among middle-aged and older adults in Canada: a cross-sectional study using the Canadian Longitudinal Study on Aging (CLSA) and the Canadian Primary Care Sentinel Surveillance Network (CPCSSN)

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