Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 28, 2024 |
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PONE-D-24-08032Advancing ensemble learning techniques for residential building electricity consumption forecasting: Insight from explainable artificial intelligencePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Nam, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Academic editor's comment: Please carefully address all the reviewers' comments and produce a response (rebuttal) letter detailing your point-by-point responses. Thank you. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by May 10 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please also include the statement “There was no additional external funding received for this study.” in your updated Funding Statement. Please include your amended Funding Statement within your cover letter. We will change the online submission form on your behalf. 4. Please amend the manuscript submission data (via Edit Submission) to include author Dayeong So. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Partly Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: i) In my view, your literature review requires reconsideration and reorganization. Currently, you've listed recent papers employing deep learning algorithms, while presenting the black box nature of these algorithms and the SHAP technique using decision tree-based algorithms as a novelty to address this. I concur that deep learning methods pose challenges for explanation, but recent advancements utilizing these algorithms may outperform decision tree-based algorithms in terms of accuracy. Hence, it's essential to distinguish between algorithmic performance superiority and explainability. Other studies might not explain their models but could achieve more reliable and accurate predictions. Thus, a discussion on the performance debate of these methods is warranted. Following this, you can emphasize the practicality and potential superiority of decision tree-based algorithms (if supported by literature), then discuss recent papers employing SHAP with tree-based models. I've come across a couple of works on this when searching Scopus. Subsequently, highlight the additions you've made to the existing literature. Your paper may not be the first to explore tree-based models with SHAP for forecasting electricity consumption. Hence, additional efforts are needed to establish your novelty and contributions. ii) In the abstract, the first, the second, and the last sentences convey similar messages. Instead, consider emphasizing the research gap and lessons learned. iii) Table 2 needs relevant citations to substantiate the claims made. iv) I suggest moving the definitions of performance metrics to the methods section, as these definitions do not constitute results. v) Hyperparameter tuning necessitates a table displaying your grid search intervals and tuned parameters. This is essential for a machine learning-based study. vi) Please reconsider the captions for tables 3, 4, and 5. They are identical. Rewrite the captions to highlight the distinct content in each table, possibly utilizing the footnotes provided. vii) The discussion section requires significant refinement. As a scholar who has employed SHAP technique in nearly a dozen papers, I believe that key insights and lessons derived from these plots should be comparatively discussed with similar literature. The feature importance and contributions of input variables to the learning phase (whether positive or negative) as depicted in SHAP plots should be compared with recent studies. How do your findings corroborate or contradict existing research? viii) Furthermore, consider whether Figures 11 and 12 truly belong in the discussion section or if they should be relocated to the results section. ix) Your discussion section should include a segment dedicated to the algorithmic debate. How did you interpret the performance of RF, LightGBM, CatBoost, GBM, and XGBoost? Do you believe they offer superior performance compared to deep neural networks? Additionally, what are your thoughts on the practicality of employing the TreeSHAP library with decision tree-based models, and do you have any plans for future studies to enhance the significance of your work? To support your approach, could you provide other examples of papers utilizing these algorithms with SHAP? These examples need not be limited to your field; you can search for the "algorithm name-SHAP" combination on search engines to identify similar methodologies across various disciplines. In my view, it's crucial to broaden the scope of your paper to encompass other domains, as each dataset may differ while employing the same machine learning framework. A debate of this nature would undoubtedly yield valuable insights for an interdisciplinary journal. Reviewer #2: The manuscript explores how explainable artificial intelligence can enhance decision tree–based ensemble learning methods for more effective short-term load forecasting in residential energy systems. The manuscript is written well and the analysis seems sufficient. The following comments must be addressed for possible acceptance of the manuscript. 1. Why this 80% training and 20% testing subsets considered? The usual ratio is 70:30. 2. Different input variable configurations not clearly explained. Mention them separately in model development section. 3. Fig 11, insert linear trendline in the scatter plots. 4. Theoretical overview of ensemble methods must be presented. 5. Try incorporating Taylor Diagrams for comparative evaluation of models developed. 6. Enhance the results and discussion part by comparative analysis with existing literature results. 7. Mention the limitations and future scope of work. Reviewer #3: Areas for Improvement and Recommendations: Validation of Results: The study should include additional validation of the models with external datasets to ensure the robustness and generalizability of the findings. Consider employing other metrics for model evaluation to complement MAPE, CVRMSE, and NMAE for a more rounded assessment of model performance. Comparison with State-of-the-Art: A comparison with the latest state-of-the-art methods in electricity consumption forecasting could strengthen the manuscript's contribution to the field. This includes deep learning and hybrid models not limited to decision tree–based methods. Methodological Clarifications: The manuscript would benefit from a clearer explanation of the criteria for selecting the ensemble learning techniques analyzed. Including information on why certain methods were chosen over others would provide readers with a deeper understanding of the study's scope. Further elaboration on the data preprocessing steps and their impact on the results would enhance the methodological transparency. Discussion on Limitations: While the manuscript highlights the advantages of integrating XAI, a more detailed discussion on the limitations and challenges encountered during the study, including the handling of complex datasets and computational requirements, would provide a more balanced view. Future Work: The conclusion section could be expanded to outline specific directions for future research, such as exploring the application of the proposed methodology to other types of buildings or integrating additional types of data (e.g., renewable energy sources, occupancy patterns). Reviewer #4: 1. The article has taken up well, but it can be written better by avoiding many short forms. 2. The authors have taken the harmonic mean of three matrix in experimental results section, any specific reason for using harmonic mean? ********** 6. 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PONE-D-24-08032R1Advancing ensemble learning techniques for residential building electricity consumption forecasting: Insight from explainable artificial intelligencePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Nam, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. MINOR REVISION:Some issues still need to be addressed.Please refer to the reviewers' comments for details. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 08 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have made clear and satisfactory revisions to address my queries and suggestions. I have no further comments to add, and I believe the manuscript is ready to proceed to the next steps of the peer-review process. Reviewer #2: The authors have thoroughly revised the manuscript, incorporating my suggestions and comments. I do have a few additional minor comments for further improvement. 1. As per figure 1, the model explanation using SHAP is presented in the form of Summary plot, Interaction plot, Dependence plot and Heatmap plot. However, in the manuscript, I was unable to find the heatmap plots explaining the SHAP results. 2. To improve the depth of your literature review, I recommend incorporating insights from recent publications (e.g., https://doi.org/10.1016/j.eswa.2024.123729 ; https://doi.org/10.1109/TSG.2022.3140212) 3. Tables 5-10: Mention the units of CVRMSE and NMAE. Reviewer #4: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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