Peer Review History
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PONE-D-23-41641Malaria prevalence and use of control measures in an area with persistent transmission in SenegalPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Tairou, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 23 2024 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The study is well designed and easily explained. The manuscript is well written in a very simple and accessible language. Results are well presented with their respective public health implications. Lastly key recommandations are given to strenghten malaria surveillance in all age groupes and support national effort towards malaria elimination. However, Saraya being a high transmission area where SMC is implemented since almost 10 years, we cannot understand that SMC data was not collected among children under 10 years. The authors did not give any explanation on the absence of SMC data during data collection and analysis. The absence of SMC data is a major limit that needs to be adressed by the authors. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This study was conducted in a high malaria transmission area of Senegal, the district of Saraya where seasonal malaria chemoprevention (SMC) is implemented for children under 10 years of age. In Saraya district’s, under 10 children receive monthly a curative dose of antimalarial during the malaria transmission season from June to October. Why don’t the authors include the SMC coverage in their data collection? Is the low prevalence of asymptomatic and symptomatic malaria in children under 10 not due to SMC? I think that conducting a malaria prevalence study in an area like Saraya should take into account the coverage rate for a better interpretation of the results. I recommend that authors include the CMS coverage rate in their data collection. Corrections are also needed for Plasmodium species. P. falciparum instead of P. Falciparum Reviewer #2: General Comment: The title of the manuscript is suitable and relevant to the health challenges ravaging the sub-Sahara subregion of the world. The research is well-conceived and executed. The language of communication and the grammar are good. The methodology and data analysis are explicit. The result is well presented in tables and figures. The discussion is well written. References are ok. However, there are a few issues for clarification. Abstract: Page 3 Line 50-51 & 56-57. There are discrepancies between the statement on malaria by age group. Line 50-51. “There was no statistical difference in malaria infection by age group.” Line 56-57. “Participants aged 5-9 years were more likely to have malaria infection compared to under five children (aOR=1.40, 95% CI:1.02-1.91).” Introduction: Page 4. Line 74-78. It was observed that you used different indices for malaria mortality, which did not allow for an easy comparison of the trend in malaria mortality between 2020 and 2022. You are advised to use the same metric for comparison to ensure objectivity. Method: Page 6. Line 113. You will need to be explicit on inclusion and exclusion criteria as individuals on antimalaria may be asymptomatic at the time of the recruitment and should have been excluded as they may still harbour the parasite. Page 7. Line 161-163. Provide a reference for the Senegalese population used to compare the proportion of each age group recruited. Page 8. Line 183-189. Information on individuals concerned with preparing the smear should be provided. Were they trained? Page 12. Table 1. The table shows that 43.2% had no occupation, while 25.7% were students. What, then, is the main source of livelihood for most of the populace? Table1. page 12. Different spellings were used for the “Quranic” school….”Koranic”….”Choranic”. Kindly reconcile the spelling. Page 14-15. Consistent use of abbreviation for Plasmodium falciparum as P. falciparum. Ensure the same abbreviation after the initial full written form. Discussion. Ok Page 22. Line 452-458. The study limitation, which considers the microscopy method used in this community study to be a possibility of missed diagnosis in low-density infection, may need to be revised. In a study by Berzosa et al. 2018 in Equatorial Guinea, the microscopy used in your research is still recommended by WHO as it is cheap, allows for species differentiation, and is the acclaimed gold standard for diagnosis by WHO. “Berzosa, P., de Lucio, A., Romay-Barja, M. et al. Comparison of three diagnostic methods (microscopy, RDT, and PCR) for detecting malaria parasites in representative samples from Equatorial Guinea. Malar J 17, 333 (2018). https://doi.org/10.1186/s12936-018-2481-4” three metho References. 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Malaria prevalence and use of control measures in an area with persistent transmission in Senegal PONE-D-23-41641R1 Dear Dr. Tairou We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. If you have any questions relating to publication charges, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Sylla Thiam, M.D, MPH Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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