Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 24, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-23687Older Adults and Stroke Survivors Are Steadier When Gazing DownPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Koren, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 04 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The paper is very interesting and it discuss a very important topic concerning Older Adults and Stroke Survivors stability when gazing down reducing postural sway. It is very important in conidering basophobia and risk factor to predict future Falls in fragile patients. The topic is particularly interesting expecially for its impact on healthcare system, quality of life of patients and their proxies. Due to the pandemic it is of particular relevance for fragile patiens (https://doi.org/10.3390/app12157934). The paper is suitable for publication. I coud just suggest some implementation for the background session: - consider the impact of physical activity on physical and psychical outcome (10.1016/j.archger.2020.104109 and 10.1016/j.jamda.2019.01.128) - consider the impact of polymedication on older and mood (10.1017/S1041610217001715 and 10.1007/s40520-018-0893-1) - consider the role of technology in fall prevention (10.1186/s13063-022-06812-w). Thanks Reviewer #2: About: The study expands on a previous study (Koren 2021) on how gazing at different distances affects postural stability. The previous study focused on healthy subjects, whereas this study includes older adults and stroke survivors and tests if there are differences between the groups and different downward gazing conditions. The authors concluded that older adults and stroke survivors had improved postural stability with downward gazing like young adults. However, gazing too close to the feet causes decreased postural stability, especially in the stroke group. The manuscript is very interesting and well-written. The authors did a great job of reporting any missing data, the statistical tools and packages, determining the appropriate sample size, and discussing the limitations of the study. 1. Technical Sound The authors did a great job explaining the experimental methods and reporting some demographic information about the groups. However, some beneficial demographic information is missing, such as: i. Were subjects screened based on their vision? It would be interesting to know their ability to see even with corrective lenses. Did everyone have a 20/20 vision? As people get older, their vision tends to get worse, which could affect their postural stability when looking further ahead. Here is a review supporting this: Saftari, L.N., Kwon, OS. Ageing vision and falls: a review. J Physiol Anthropol 37, 11 (2018). https://doi.org/10.1186/s40101-018-0170-1 ii. It would be interesting to know more details about the people who had a stroke, such as clinical scores. This will give the reader an idea of the severity of their disability if they have any. Having this information would better support the authors’ claims and increase the replication of the results. If unable to provide the additional information, would this be considered a limitation to the study? 2. Statistical Analysis a. Lines 200, 218, 238, and 263: I can’t seem to find the symbol, *, on the figures that indicate a significant difference. Do you mean the arrows? b. The authors could consider putting the F and p scores in a table in the main results. c. Lines 194: “Exploring the interaction term … (see Figure 1b).” Although Figure 1b does seem to show differences between the stroke and age groups, it doesn’t seem to clearly point out that the interaction term between the age and stroke groups are different. For example, the arrows and horizontal bars point out they are significantly different. Consider, adding a marker to indicate the groups that were affected differently. 3. Data fully available I can’t seem to find the raw data used for the statistical analysis, other than the reported statistical results. Would the authors consider making the raw data available publicly if it currently is not? 4. Grammar and Spelling Here are some minor grammar edits to consider: Abstract: a. Lines 47-48: Consider replacing “persons with stroke” with “people with stroke” Background: b. Lines 62: “From these reports …” what are the specific reports that you are referring to? c. Lines 87-88: “No assumptions were made regarding the effect of age and stroke” This seems confusing to me. What led the authors to test for age and stroke if they didn’t have any assumptions? Methods: d. Lines 123: ‘while for the EC condition, no specific instructions were given besides “close your eyes”’ This can cause confusion since the participants seemed like they were instructed to close their eyes. e. Lines 133: It seems the three coefficients are missing references. It looks like the reference (Koren 2021) provides the equation to calculate the metrics. 5. Additional comments to consider although may not be necessary a. Additional figures would be great to include. For example, a figure showing the experiment setup. b. Lines 270: The abbreviation, DWG, is already defined and can be removed. Similar to the other abbreviations in the discussions. c. When reading the previous study that inspired this study, it seems like there were some differences that the authors took. For example, walking postural stability didn’t seem to be considered. Were some of the stroke survivors unable to walk? 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Older adults and stroke survivors are steadier when gazing down PONE-D-22-23687R1 Dear Dr. Koren, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Nili Steinberg Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Authors addressed comments and suggestions or argumented the choice. The topic is very interesting and important for field. The article is suitable of publication Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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