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Original SubmissionNovember 30, 2022
Decision Letter - Sawsan Abuhammad, Editor

PONE-D-22-32981Chemosensory continuity from prenatal to postnatal life in humans: A systematic review and meta-analysisPLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Applicability of results:

Even if the results of a meta-analysis are statistically significant, they must be useful in clinical practice or serve as a message for researchers planning future investigations. The findings must have external validity or generalizability and must have an influence on the management of a specific patient. Furthermore, the research included in the metaanalysis should contain infants groups observed in actual practice.

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Reviewer #1: Yes: Alaa Dalky

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Revision 1

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Response 1: The manuscript has been revised according to the journal style requirements (please see the revised manuscript).

Comment 2. Thank you for stating the following in the Acknowledgments Section of your manuscript:

"This study was undertaken as part of a Ph.D. thesis funded by the Turkish Ministry of National Education. The funder has not had any role in the study protocol, analysis, or preparation of the manuscript. The review was not registered."

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Response 2: The funding statement has been removed from the revised manuscript. We would like to keep the current funding statement as follows: "This study was undertaken as part of a Ph.D. thesis funded by the Turkish Ministry of National Education. The funder has not had any role in the study protocol, analysis, or preparation of the manuscript."

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Response 3: The declaration of competing interest has been removed from the revised manuscript. We have stated “The authors have declared that no competing interests exist” in our cover letter.

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Response 5: The manuscript has been revised according to the supporting information guidelines (please see the revised manuscript).

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Response to Reviewer #1 comments:

Comment 1: Applicability of results:

Even if the results of a meta-analysis are statistically significant, they must be useful in clinical practice or serve as a message for researchers planning future investigations. The findings must have external validity or generalizability and must have an influence on the management of a specific patient. Furthermore, the research included in the metaanalysis should contain infants groups observed in actual practice.

Response 1: We would like to thank the reviewer for the useful remarks. Regarding the generalizability, the following sentence has been added to the manuscript:

“All the studies included in this review and meta-analysis recruited samples of healthy infants from healthy pregnant mothers. The behavioral responses of the infants to the transferred flavours from the maternal diet can therefore only be generalised to a healthy infant population” (page 23, line 332-334).

Additionally, as we stated in the discussion (page 22, line 323-325), we found that maternal consumption of five specific flavours during pregnancy influence infant behavioural outcomes, but it is difficult to generalise this result to all flavours because different flavours might have different transfer mechanisms in the prenatal environment. Thus, the following sentence has been added to the manuscript:

“However, the results from the current work cannot be generalized to different types of flavours because food flavour molecules are metabolised in unique patterns due to their diverse chemical compositions [45].” (page 22, line 325-328).

Comment 2: Clinical relevance of results:

The final stage in thoroughly evaluating a meta-analysis should be analyzing the clinical usefulness of the data. The results of a meta-analysis may be statistically significant yet have a little practical impact.

Response 2: The corresponding excerpts from the revised manuscript follow (changes highlighted in yellow): (page 26 line 408 – page 27 line 422).

“By providing the evidence of chemosensory continuity from fetal to neonatal life, it can be argued that exposing pregnant women to diverse and healthy vegetables is a potentially plausible way to improve lifelong health and drive healthy choices in populations widely concerned by the obesity pandemic by facilitating the process of infant vegetable acceptance. Furthermore, the findings provide evidence that repeated flavour exposure facilitates the plasticity of preferences acquired in utero, and thus the results have important implications for our understanding of perinatal continuity in stimuli perception and memory from fetal to neonatal life. Longitudinal prospective studies and randomised clinical trials starting from fetal stage until infancy, childhood and adulthood are required to explore chemosensory continuity over the life span.

The current study allows us to argue that fetuses are not protected from maternal food choices, a situation exposing them inescapably to the environmental regimen mediated by the mother’s body. Thus, this study call to research on materno- fetal flavour transfer of other ingested or inhaled compounds and their possible long-term effects relating to the concept of food-related behaviours.”

Additional revisions from the authors to help orient the reader: highlighted in blue in the revised manuscript.

1. The following sentences have minor changes for clarification:

“This review advances current knowledge of the impact of the prenatal environment on postnatal life.” (page 25, line 385-386).

“Future studies investigating fetal behavior directly (e.g., via 4D ultrasound scanning) are required to understand how a fetus perceives and responds to the prenatal flavor environment.” (page 26, line 405-406).

2. We have added the ref number 45 (Jeleń, 2012) in the revised manuscript to make our justification clear in the text.

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Decision Letter - Sawsan Abuhammad, Editor

Chemosensory continuity from prenatal to postnatal life in humans: A systematic review and meta-analysis

PONE-D-22-32981R1

Dear Dr. Ustun,

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Chemosensory continuity from prenatal to postnatal life in humans: A systematic review and meta-analysis

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