Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 17, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-17376Misophonia in the UK: Prevalence and norms from the S-Five in a UK representative samplePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Vitoratou, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. First of all, apologies for the delay in the feedback. It has been considerably challenging to locate a suitable (and available) reviewer for this submission. Your paper has been now reviewed by an acknowledged expert, who provides a set of interesting comments, queries, and suggestions. Please carefully address and respond to all of them in both the rebuttal letter and the revised version of the manuscript, making the changes visible through a suitable tracking method. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 01 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The current manuscript represents a psychometric evaluation of the S-Five in a UK sample, with a goal of developing a clinically significant symptoms threshold that is consistent with clinician consensus. A secondary goal is to use this threshold to measure the UK prevalence of misophonia. While the study itself is straightforward, the introductory framing leaves a bit to be desired, and some care should be taken to the formatting and presentation of results to make them more interpretable to a reader not intimately familiar with each of the S-Five items. Introduction Page 3 line 69 the authors refer to their previous work in the third person and then refer to their current work in the next sentence in the first person. It is clear this is the same group of people (most authors overlap) so it would make sense to say something like “our research team used the responses…” and “our work resulted” to make it clear this is a continuation of an ongoing body of work rather than building on someone’s else’s work. Additional justification for why a prevalence rate is needed specifically for UK population would be helpful. Although prevalence has varied across studies on misophonia, most report somewhere between 12-20%, similar to the studies cited here. Do the authors expect the UK to be different? The more interesting question here is how the S-Five corresponds to semi-structured interviews and clinician consensus to determine a severity or diagnostic threshold for clinically significant symptoms, yet the majority of the introduction is focused on prevalence. Given that the S-Five, while very useful for addressing intensity of a misophonic response, is currently limited compared to scales like the MQ because it does not have a diagnostic threshold score, this study represents a major step forward in usability of the scale. I would suggest refocusing the introduction a bit to highlight the psychometric aspects of this study rather than just getting a prevalence rate. Methods Methods are appropriate as described, however I am curious as to why the authors omitted the Anxiety Sensitivity Index from their targeted analyses, since it was administered according to the Supplement, and anxiety is highly co-occuring in the misophonia population. Might it not be more sensitive than the GAD-7, particularly when it comes to anticipatory anxiety, which is also more common in misophonia than the general population? Results The sample skews quite old compared to some of the other samples (most of the larger studies were in undergraduate students). Can the authors comment on whether this was expected to impact responses or prevalence ratings and whether this is comparable to the other studies? In Table 1 the ICC for every single question is 0.8. Is that really true or a typo? Table 5 some of the words in the top header bar are cut off. Table 6 the fourth item is just listed as “sound of”? Several of the items are listed as “normal” or “repetitive” which makes it difficult to know what they are referring to from the table alone. Please modify this column to be more descriptive. Discussion The authors discuss frequency of reporting negative emotional response and its variation by sound type, with some sounds being more frequently reported in the general population as at least irritating, and some sounds, mostly mouth sounds being more discriminative of misophonia. These findings are largely consistent with a recent study in a US sample that used the older S-Five (so not perfectly comparable, but the trigger sounds of greatest importance are the same). This may help the author’s case that this finding is a general one and remove the limitation that this particular finding at least might be specific to the UK population. (Norris JE, Kimball SH, Nemri DC and Ethridge LE (2022) Toward a Multidimensional Understanding of Misophonia Using Cluster-Based Phenotyping. Front. Neurosci. 16:832516. doi: 10.3389/fnins.2022.832516). The results regarding depression and anxiety questionnaires and their correspondence to S-Five scores is not discussed. They deserve at least a short mention. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Misophonia in the UK: Prevalence and norms from the S-Five in a UK representative sample PONE-D-22-17376R1 Dear Dr. Vitoratou, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Sergio A. Useche, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Thanks so much for the adjustments made. The paper can now be considered as suitable for publication. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No ********** |
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PONE-D-22-17376R1 Misophonia in the UK: Prevalence and norms from the S-Five in a UK representative sample Dear Dr. Vitoratou: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Sergio A. Useche Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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