Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 1, 2021 |
|---|
|
PONE-D-21-30599Effects of double cycling on diaphragm thickness during the early phase of mechanical ventilation: A prospective observational studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Itagaki, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 25 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Steven Eric Wolf, MD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. Thank you for stating in your Funding Statement: “This work was partly supported by JSPS KAKENHI Grant Number JP21K16574 awarded to Dr. Taiga Itagaki. https://kaken.nii.ac.jp/grant/KAKENHI-PROJECT-21K16574/ The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.” Please provide an amended statement that declares *all* the funding or sources of support (whether external or internal to your organization) received during this study, as detailed online in our guide for authors at http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submit-now. Please also include the statement “There was no additional external funding received for this study.” in your updated Funding Statement. Please include your amended Funding Statement within your cover letter. We will change the online submission form on your behalf. 3. In your Data Availability statement, you have not specified where the minimal data set underlying the results described in your manuscript can be found. PLOS defines a study's minimal data set as the underlying data used to reach the conclusions drawn in the manuscript and any additional data required to replicate the reported study findings in their entirety. All PLOS journals require that the minimal data set be made fully available. For more information about our data policy, please see http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/data-availability. "Upon re-submitting your revised manuscript, please upload your study’s minimal underlying data set as either Supporting Information files or to a stable, public repository and include the relevant URLs, DOIs, or accession numbers within your revised cover letter. For a list of acceptable repositories, please see http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/data-availability#loc-recommended-repositories. Any potentially identifying patient information must be fully anonymized. Important: If there are ethical or legal restrictions to sharing your data publicly, please explain these restrictions in detail. Please see our guidelines for more information on what we consider unacceptable restrictions to publicly sharing data: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/data-availability#loc-unacceptable-data-access-restrictions. Note that it is not acceptable for the authors to be the sole named individuals responsible for ensuring data access. We will update your Data Availability statement to reflect the information you provide in your cover letter. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): Editor - Thank you for submitting your paper to us for review. I sent it to eight distinguished referees for comment and decision of whom two agreed to review; you will see these below. They thought that the paper has merit, but each have raised some substantial issues to be addressed in a revision. Please carefully consider the comments below and reply directly to each in a cover letter with appropriate marked and linked changes to the manuscript. I look forward to seeing the revision, which I will send back to the same referees for further comment and decision. Please understand that this is not a guarantee of future publication, as the revised manuscript itself must stand on its own merit. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I suggest to explore whether inspiratory effort and double cycling are independently associated with diaphragmatic thickness. Probably, a multivariable logistic regression may help to discern it. I suggest to modify the title to avoid the suggestion of a direct effect of double cycling on diaphragm thickness, by something like “Relationships between high respiratory effort and double cycling with diaphragm thickness….” Page 10. The issue of sedation needs more data demonstrating that sedation was reduced in “increased group”, whereas opioids were slightly higher. Patients with higher inspiratory effort commonly need more sedatives (except if excessive opioids induce higher respiratory effort in unconscious patients). In the limitations section, I suggest to include the specific topic of your use of Pressure assist/control modes and whether the problem should be higher in case of using Volume assist/control modes. Your “Clinical implications” section is not supported by your results. I suggest to focus it more on the interest of avoiding double cycling by ventilator settings adjustments Reviewer #2: Itagaki and colleagues nicely attempt to establish a relation between an important asynchrony and diaphgram thickness. Although the text is clearly written and results presented coherently, I would suggest a few clarifications to improve the message of the manuscript. 1. Study rationale and hypothesis: although the background is stated it is not clear to the reader what is the author’s hypothesis being tested. What is the hypothesized role of double cycling on thickness? Please clarify the hypothesis you are testing, and especially how the timing is expected to influence (the different days). 2. Introduction: However, the effects of patient–ventilator asynchronies on VIDD have not been evaluated in clinically settings. So are you making a direct parallel between thickness and function? 3. Still on research question, this can be clarified: “Moreover, the role of respiratory effort in the occurrence of double cycling during the early phase of mechanical ventilation was evaluated”. What do you mean by role? 4. Methods: “On days 1, 2, 3, 5 and 7 after the initiation of mechanical ventilation, the diaphragm thickness at peak inspiration and end-expiration (Tdiee) was examined via ultrasonography during spontaneous breathing”. Please be more specific to allow repeatability of your measurements. What does during spontaneous breathing means, were the patients still assisted in A-PCV (not PSV correct?). I understand the echo measurements were detailed in a previous work, but important to detail how patients were breathing when you made the measurement. 5. P value for trend in Figure 2: can you specify how this was obtained. Simply comparing two timepoints or by analyzing the trend? 6. Please do not repeat data that was put in tables again in the text e.g for table 2. 7. Results for RASS score and sedation are presented which were not anticipated in the methods. Please adjust. 8. Analysis of the primary endpoint: you state that the primary endpoint of the study is the “correlation between the DC index and the maximum change in D. thickness on the first 3 days”. Please specify in the statistical analysis if you analyze days separately to avoid lumping repeated measures. In the statistical analysis paragraph is useful to have the analysis of the primary endpoint come first, not last. 9. Discussion: I find you should accompany better the reader to the relation between double cycling – effort and thickness, as now it’s pretty confusing. E.g. you start by saying that “Considering that excessive inspiratory effort is a risk factor of double cycling[12, 13], double cycling and diaphragm hypertrophy are both associated with strong inspiratory efforts.” This sentence is unclear, please rephrase. I would use the first paragraph to discuss the primary outcome alone. What to grasp from the correlation between thickness and double cycling? Then introduce the effort and how this interacts. In addition the discussion is imbalanced, towards effort, while the primary aim is stated to be the study of double cycling. Is this a wanted feature? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Rafael Fernandez Fernandez Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
| Revision 1 |
|
Relationships between double cycling and respiratory effort with diaphragm thickness during the early phase of mechanical ventilation: A prospective observational study PONE-D-21-30599R1 Dear Dr. Itagaki, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Steven Eric Wolf, MD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: RAFAEL FERNANDEZ ********** |
| Formally Accepted |
|
PONE-D-21-30599R1 Relationships between double cycling and inspiratory effort with diaphragm thickness during the early phase of mechanical ventilation: A prospective observational study Dear Dr. Itagaki: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Steven Eric Wolf Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
Open letter on the publication of peer review reports
PLOS recognizes the benefits of transparency in the peer review process. Therefore, we enable the publication of all of the content of peer review and author responses alongside final, published articles. Reviewers remain anonymous, unless they choose to reveal their names.
We encourage other journals to join us in this initiative. We hope that our action inspires the community, including researchers, research funders, and research institutions, to recognize the benefits of published peer review reports for all parts of the research system.
Learn more at ASAPbio .