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PONE-D-22-20673Near point-of-care HIV viral load testing: Uptake and utilization in suburban Yangon, MyanmarPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Tun, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Reviewer 2 has requested significant changes that are necessary to clarify what was done in this study and to raise the level of usefulness of the data presented. In addition, be sure to have the grammar checked before submitting a revision. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 19 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This was a very nicely written manuscript that touches on an important topic in a clear, structured way. Major Comments 1. The Abstract was a little unclear regarding the time of first viral load after initiation. Line 42-43 indicates 2.8 years after introduction of near POC VL, but then line 44 says 0.9 years in those becoming eligible after near POC VL. 3.7 years before near POC VL introduction. It would be helpful to clarify this as I’m guessing the intention was for the three different groups and/or one was an overall. Additionally, the results only includes two of those three timings and would benefit from including all (lines 263-266). 2. Please also review the patient numbers. The results were a bit unclear here. The abstract and results list 5271 PLHIV started ART between July 2009-December 2019. Line 230, however, lists 4291 PLHIV initiated ART. Then, Group 1 (794), Group 2 (2386), Group 3 (1111). Line 244 repeats 4291 initiated ART during the same timeframe and then indicates 3205 were eligible after near POC introduction (Group 3, earlier with n=1111). Finally, line 263, presents 945 eligible after near POC. It would be very helpful to ensure accuracy throughout and perhaps clearer explanations. The use of ‘Group 1’, ‘Group 2’, etc might also help. 3. It would be helpful to discuss whether clinicians and facilities received more clinical training and/or viral load training refreshers at near POC VL implementation and that this could partly be a cause of the improvements seen. 4. Some references could use an update. References 2 and 3 are on older WHO guidelines (2013 and 2016). These are referenced in the introduction and methods. These could be updated to 2021 as the referenced recommendations have all been carried forward and are the relevant, present guidelines. 5. The WHO treatment monitoring algorithm should be updated: testing is suggested at 6 months, 12 months, and yearly thereafter. The timing at 12 months post-ART initiation seems to be missing. 6. In the discussion, it would be helpful to touch on the possible role of near POC VL with uptake and implementation of DTG-based regimens, given the higher barrier to drug resistance and higher viral suppression rates. Further, please discuss how the current political situation in Myanmar could impact this strong system built. 7. It would be helpful to discuss the previous NHL testing strategy. Why would they only accept 1-2 samples per clinic per month? Are they only testing one day a month? Is it due to staff, funding? This seems incredibly low and a waste of available resources. 8. In the discussion, please touch on data quality and the confidence you have in its accurateness, not just completeness. 9. Please touch on how data were collected to ensure confidentiality – given that some patient identifying information was necessary to link across databases and files. 10. In the discussion, it would be quite imperative to discuss the health of those initiating ART. Table 1 indicates that nearly 50% have advanced HIV disease and over 60% have WHO stage 3 or 4. Further, it was suggested that the majority of PLHIV in Myanmar identified as key populations, yet Table 1 has only 21%. Please explain and discuss this discrepancy. 11. For the results on lines 269-272 and in the discussion, it would be good to indicate that the value of the first viral load was the ‘only’ significantly associated metric of those assessed. Further, it would be good to include the OR in the text as well. Nearly 3x is important and significant. 12. In lines 309 and elsewhere in the discussion, it may be important to note that it isn’t expected that a technology or device can do it all and/or impact adherence, retention, etc. Those must still be strengthened, etc. 13. Line 326-327 is a little troubling, suggesting that adherence counseling not be necessarily for those with a first high VL. However, 36% of PLHIV in this study re-suppressed after adherence and likely were much better off staying on 1st line then switching unnecessarily. Further, this (EAC and switch hesitation) is likely to be particularly important with DTG scale-up. 14. When discussing the recent WHO recommendation on POC VL (lines 356+), it may be useful to note that they are conditional based on high volumes and limited device throughput, particularly in high burden settings. To this point, it would be helpful to highlight the differences and challenges with POC vs near POC (ie same day versus not same day, need for clear follow-up structures and resources to maximize near POC use, possible improvements in TAT and clinical decision-making vs lab-based). Particularly as the model developed at these sites in Myanmar is clearly incredibly strong and well-resourced given impressive retention, etc. Minor Comments 1. Line 49, should this be ‘ninety-three’? 2. It would be helpful to reference lines 74-76. 3. For references on lines 82-83, it would be good to also reference Sacks et al: https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/31274537/. 4. Line 101 is missing ‘in’ prior to ‘2017’. 5. Line 127: Abbott should be written with two ‘t’s. 6. Line 163, it is unclear what ‘KAP status’ means. 7. Please look at line 193-194, it seems incomplete. 8. The sentence from line 208-210 seems irrelevant and could be removed. 9. Line 311, ensure inclusion of ‘near POC’. 10. Lines 329-330 should also reference MSF’s work on the VL cascade: https://msfaccess.org/sites/default/files/MSF_assets/HIV_AIDS/Docs/AIDS_report_Part_1_MakingViralLoadRoutine_MSF_VL_Programmatic%20Report_Web_2016_ENG.pdf (Table 1). 11. Lines 340-341 seemed a bit out of place with that paragraph. 12. Line 347, I might suggest ‘…generalizable to other public facilities.’ 13. Line 360 likely needs an ‘and’ after ‘COVID-19’. Reviewer #2: In this article by Tun et al., the authors describe implementation of near point-of-care quantitative HIV RNA testing in three clinics in Burma. The implementation of POC NAT for viral load monitoring is critical for HIV care and this manuscript presents important results. However, I found the analysis and presentation to be confusing and difficult to follow. It is unclear why baseline characteristics are being presented only after other data and only for a subset of the population. The first results presented should be the baseline characteristics of the populations for all three time periods, divided first into people initiating ART during the three time periods. Then I would suggest the main analyses to be presented are: 1) How many total HIV RNA tests were done before and after implementation of POC NAT, and what was the number per for patient on ART (note that this will be different than the baseline groups, because some people will carry forward into the next time period). What was the actual turn-around-time of POC NAT? I cannot find either of these results. 2) What % of eligible persons received their first VL testing in each of the three periods (<2013, 2013-2017, >2017)? These are the data shown in Fig 2 and I believe in lines 219-224. If these are the same data, they should be labeled on the actual figure and can be removed from text. Is there an explanation for why the number was so much lower in 2017 c/w 2019? That explanation should be included in the Discussion. The comparison (line 223) should not be 2010-19 v 2013-19 v 2017-19, and there is probably a more informative statistical test that could be used here to show the magnitude of change. 3) Comparing the two time periods (2013-2017 and after 2017): Of persons who had a first VL>1000, what % had a second test? If they had a second test, what % had a second VL >1000 Of persons with a second VL>1000, what % had an ART change Of persons with an ART change, what % had a follow-up VL < (under) 1000. I do not see any data on the 2013-17 period. 4) Among people starting ART in 2017 who had access to POC NAT, was there lower mortality compared to historical controls (perhaps people starting ART in 2013, when VL testing became available). This looks like it would be the data shown in Figure 3, although I am not clear on what definition of “attrition” is being used – is it discontinuation of ART? Transfer to another clinic? Lost to follow-up? Mortality? A combination endpoint of all of the above? This should be clarified in the Methods section. Mortality is, of course, the endpoint that matters most. It would be helpful to label the figure legend so that the reader can easily understand what Groups 1-3 represent. Note that these analysis groups will be different from those in the above (persons eligible for first VL) because there will be survivor bias among persons who were started on ART in the prior period and who survived without NAT into the next period (presuming there is a universal recommendation to start ART regardless of CD4 count and that persons initiating ART in the two periods do not significantly differ in baseline characteristics) Minor comments: ) I am not sure that this manuscript describes “uptake”, since it is not clear which patients were offered POC NAT and who declined. ) Please note somewhere (probably in the methods – around lines 121-126) whether the ART start guidelines changed (e.g. based on CD4 versus universal testing) and whether HIV treatment options changed over the course of the study period, as improvements in ART would confound the analysis. ) Methods, line 137 – please provide explanation for why the database was closed in 2019 (3 years prior to analysis) ) Methods, line 146 – weren’t all analyses retrospective? ) Data analysis, line 193 – continuous variables should be summarized with mean/SD when the variable has a normal distribution. ) Results – Table 1 – “key population” needs to be defined ) Discussion – lines 335-41. It is interesting, because in high income countries, high viral loads are considered more indicative of non-pill taking compared to resistant virus, as resistant virus is often less fit and is therefore associated with lower viral loads in the setting of ongoing partial suppression. It would be interesting to know if this finding was really dichotomous. Please also note this comment from PLOS ONE: "PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here." (Reviewer comment to authors): There are too many errors to note each one with this initial submission. Prior to submission of the revision, please edit the manuscript with regard to spelling, grammar, language, and clarity). ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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PONE-D-22-20673R1Near point-of-care HIV viral load testing: Cascade after high viral load in suburban Yangon, MyanmarPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Tun, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please pay close attention to the comments I have made concerning Reviewer 1's initial comments, as well as the new comments from Reviewer 2. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 20 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Here is a suggested addition to this figure legend: Panels A and B include all three groups while Panels C and D only. compare Groups 2 and 3. Table 3: add the explanation for “part of key population” to Table 3 that was used in Table 1 so the reader does not need to remember. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: In this manuscript, Tun et al present an updated report describing the implementation of POC VL testing in Burma. Thank you so very much for an extremely thoughtful revision to the original comments. Seeing these data, I only have one comment: In new Table 2, there are two main conclusions one could draw. The first is the very clear finding that more people received VL testing when POC testing was available. The second, however, is that people who had VL testing done and who had a VL>1000 copies - they were more likely to have documented suppression if their testing was done by the lab c/w POC testing - this is a bit counter-intuitive. If I'm reading the data correctly there were 49-23= 26 (49%) people out of the 53 with >1000 copies in 2013-2017 who had a documented suppressed VL after EAC and only 125-84 = 41 (28%) out of 149 after 2017 - p = 0.004. Are there possible explanations for this? ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Near point-of-care HIV viral load testing: Cascade after high viral load in suburban Yangon, Myanmar PONE-D-22-20673R2 Dear Dr. Tun, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Julie AE Nelson, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-22-20673R2 Near point-of-care HIV viral load testing: Cascade after high viral load in suburban Yangon, Myanmar Dear Dr. Tun: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Julie AE Nelson Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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