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Original SubmissionMay 31, 2021
Decision Letter - Itzhak Benenson, Editor

PONE-D-21-17971From road centrelines to carriageways - a reconstruction algorithmPLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: I Don't Know

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: 1. What is the novelty in the current work? Discuss how the present work adds value to the exiting works.

2. List out the main contributions of the current work.

3. Some of the recent work on intelligent transportation systems such as the following can be discussed in the paper: "CANintelliIDS: detecting in-vehicle intrusion attacks on a controller area network using CNN and attention-based GRU, Deep learning-based traffic safety solution for a mixture of autonomous and manual vehicles in a 5G-enabled intelligent transportation system".

4. Compare the results obtained with recent state of the art.

5. What is the computational complexity of the proposed approach?

Reviewer #2: 1. What are the limitations of the existing works that motivated the current work?

2. List out the main contributions of the current work.

3. Compare the results of the current work with the recent state-of-the-art.

4. Discuss the drawbacks of the current work in the conclusion.

5. Performance Comparison of proposed system with state-of-art literature is not provided any where in the article.

6. The disadvantages of the existing schemes must be discussed in tabular form.

7. The last paragraph of the Introduction must represent the structure of the paper in a more inspiring way.

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Reviewer #2: Yes: Dr. Kadiyala Ramana

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Revision 1

Thank you for your comments. Please, find our response to your suggestions below:

# Editor's comments

1. You focus on the local match between the reconstructed and real carriageways.

- What is the overall match between the reconstructed and real networks for the city neighborhood or region?

We are not ensuring a matching with the real-world carriageways, but instead we are confident enough that the carriageways we produce are a good approximation of the network. This is based on the fact that we trust the original datasets, both OSM as a reliable crowdsourced dataset of the roads network and the areal representations as they are of official institutional sources (i.e. local governments). Ensuring a high accuracy match between the reconstructed and real networks is out of the scope of this research. Instead, we are focusing on how to extract an approximation as representative enough as it can be based on the original data. The motivation of this research is to be able to automatically create a carriageways' network from easily accessible and actively maintained data. We amended our introduction to state that our work is about creating an approximation of carriageways to clarify this.

- How you can compare the reconstructed and real patterns formally?

We don't believe such a comparison can be achieved unless official sources of carriageway networks are provided. In this context and given the scope of our research, we evaluated our output's quality visually using satellite imagery and used our personal knowledge of some areas (Toronto and The Hague) to ensure that the output is, indeed, a good approximation.

- Are all matches/mismatches equally important?

The importance of mismatches between the reconstructed and real carriageways is heavily relying on the specific application for which the network is intended for. We set as the most important requirement for our work that the connectivity of the network is preserved. In order to ensure that our work is generic enough both application-wise and geographically we made most decisions prudently. As a result, we expect that some complex areas of the network, mostly flyovers or irregular and high-degree intersections, remain of lower detail in order to ensure that the connectivity persists. We highlight a few of these cases in our paper and we comment on the challenges that arise from them. We amended the manuscript to better reflect that, by making it explicit in the introduction and the conclusions that our methodology is about creating an approximation of carriageways. We, also, added a paragraph in the conclusions to clarify the features of our method that we prioritised the most.

2. Is your study the first of this kind? If yes - claim that. If not - compare your algorithms to the existing ones

While we review other research about creating carriageways and lanes from satellite imagery, to our knowledge there is no other work that relies on open vector data to do so. Therefore, we believe that our current phrasing of a "novel reconstruction algorithm" in the introduction and conclusions fairly represents the uniqueness of this work. Nevertheless, we remain open to any other phrasing suggestions.

3. Your algorithms are heuristic. How can you know that they are sufficient for resolving all OSM problems? Note that this remark is tightly related to the question about quality of your reconstruction at the regional level

Resolving any potential issues from OSM is out of the scope of this research. We developed our algorithm to be applicable in a wide variety of areas and, therefore, our focus was on ensuring that the output network is valid with respect to the input data provided. Our methodology can be easily adopted to work with other data sources. Nevertheless, we do trust OSM as a reliable source of data for our use case. We added a paragraph at the end of our conclusions to clarify the generic nature of our methodology and that it can be easily adopted to work with other centerline datasets.

# Reviewer 1 comments

1. What is the novelty in the current work? Discuss how the present work adds value to the exiting works.

While we review other research about creating carriageways and lanes from satellite imagery, to our knowledge there is no other work that relies on open vector data to do so.

2. List out the main contributions of the current work.

Our methodology works automatically. It, also, works with easily accessible and open vector data and is geographically and application neutral. We appended the conclusions to state these more explicitly.

3. Some of the recent work on intelligent transportation systems such as the following can be discussed in the paper: "CANintelliIDS: detecting in-vehicle intrusion attacks on a controller area network using CNN and attention-based GRU, Deep learning-based traffic safety solution for a mixture of autonomous and manual vehicles in a 5G-enabled intelligent transportation system".

This paper has nothing to do with our research, and we feel strongly that we do not need to include it in our paper.

4. Compare the results obtained with recent state of the art.

Based on our answer to question no 1, due to the vastly different nature of our research compared to other works and their use of proprietary data, we believe that it is impossible to provide a formal comparison between our work and any other studies related to carriageways reconstruction.

5. What is the computational complexity of the proposed approach?

We introduced a computational complexity analysis section in the paper to address this issue.

# Reviewer 2 comments

1. What are the limitations of the existing works that motivated the current work?

Current works use satellite imagery which is hard to find and expensive to acquire. In addition, there is no work about creating carriageways from vector data automatically.

2. List out the main contributions of the current work.

Our methodology works automatically. It, also, works with easily accessible and open vector data and is geographically and application neutral. We appended the conclusions to state these more explicitly.

3. Compare the results of the current work with the recent state-of-the-art.

Based on our answer to question no 1, due to the vastly different nature of our research compared to other works and their use of proprietary data, we believe that it is impossible to provide a formal comparison between our work and any other studies related to carriageways reconstruction.

4. Discuss the drawbacks of the current work in the conclusion.

We already discuss the drawbacks extensively in the discussion and future work, therefore we see no benefit of repeating them in the conclusions.

5. Performance Comparison of proposed system with state-of-art literature is not provided any where in the article.

We introduced a computational complexity analysis section in the paper to address this issue.

6. The disadvantages of the existing schemes must be discussed in tabular form.

We believe that our methodology is so vastly different to other works related to carriageways reconstruction, that such a table would not benefit the structure of the paper.

7. The last paragraph of the Introduction must represent the structure of the paper in a more inspiring way.

We find it hard to identify what an "inspiring way" means in this context. Unless some examples or clarification is provided regarding this point, we are satisfied with the existing phrasing of our structure of the paper.

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Decision Letter - Itzhak Benenson, Editor

From road centrelines to carriageways - a reconstruction algorithm

PONE-D-21-17971R1

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Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed

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2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

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Reviewer #2: (No Response)

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Reviewer #2: (No Response)

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Reviewer #2: (No Response)

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Reviewer #2: (No Response)

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Reviewer #2: (No Response)

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Reviewer #2: Yes: Dr. Kadiyala Ramana

Formally Accepted
Acceptance Letter - Itzhak Benenson, Editor

PONE-D-21-17971R1

From road centrelines to carriageways - a reconstruction algorithm

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