Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 28, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-37230Single cell genome sequencing of laboratory mouse microbiota improves taxonomic and functional resolution of this model microbial communityPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Pollard, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 11 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This manuscript describes a single cell genomics approach for mouse microbiota in improving our current knowledge about taxonomic distribution and functional resolution. The topic should be very interesting; I however find that the manuscript does not explain everything very well, especially in the methodology part. Below I give my reviews. 1. The methodology of this manuscript is vague, especially in the computation part. For example, the manuscript mentioned that “selected the 150 SAGs from each sample that maximize the phylogenetic diversity and exclude SAGs with low probability of high genome recovery (Method).” The method however only refers to a python code without explaining anything, and the code is also vague at best (for example, what does the ‘costs file’ mean, and where one can obtain the Newick tree, etc.) As a result I have no idea in how the “maximization” is conducted and how the 150 SAGs from each sample are selected or determined. I of course can guess that the tree is probably from the GTDB-Tk results, but please make the methods as clear and reproducible by others as possible (just imagine someone who really want to try this approach based on this paper). Another example is how the assembly is conducted (Line 256 and beyond). I stress that these are NOT the only two places that have this problem so please look through the manuscript and add into methodology details as clear as you can. 2. How low is low-coverage and how high is high-coverage? I know that the mean reads number is 765,918, but what are the coverages after reads trimming? Please report coverages instead of reads count for both low and high coverages. 3. How one of the two samples of the wild type mice is selected? Random? 4. Method is too succinct. No description about how reads processing/trimming, assembly, and taxonomic lineage assignment were conducted. Please include the methodology even if the previous literature provides the description. 5. Line 292: DIAMOND should be all capital letters. 6. Please indicate software version numbers is available, for example checkM, GenomeTreeTk, or GTDB-Tk (I may not be comprehensive so please check it throughout the manusccript). If the authors also know the version of affiliating software version to the tools (e.g. pplacer for GTDB-Tk or DIAMOND for EggNOG-mapper), please also indicate them. 7. Line 90: “Further sequencing and assembly of DNA from the corresponding cells produced 298 high-coverage SAGs after quality control.” � again, please fill in details. 8. The study only talked about the increase of phylogenetic diversity of the Muribaculaceae and Bacteroidaceae families. But what about “f__Lachnospiraceae”? My impression from Figure 2 is that it is quite wide, but the authors did not even mention this family throughout the manuscript except in Figure 2. This also goes back to how the author “calculate” how much the current GTDB-Tk tree can potentially “gain” by adding the genomes. Please try clarifying these points. 9. This is up to the author’s discretion, but in my opinion I think Figure 3 are better described as Venn diagram instead of Euler diagram. I understand that for the plots in Figure 3 both diagram types are very similar. Maybe the authors can check out the definitions of both Venn and Euler diagrams and see if they agree with me. 10. Did the authors filtered the output results of CRISPRCasTyper, say whether the probability of the trustworthiness of the predicted CRISPRs to be real? I asked this question because there are CRISPR with only operons but no array. This question also reflects back to the previous question of describing the entire workflow as precise as possible, including the tools/parameters and what you do on handling or filtering. 11. There should be more to be discussed on CRISPR instead of just mentioning that Prevotella have both Type I and III systems in your data. For example, what benefit can the entire CRISPR analysis bring to this study? How the arrays are distributed within/between clades? These analysis should be able to bring merits to the manuscript and the associating genomes. 12. What does “hash” in Methods and figure S4/S5 means? If this means “k-mers” as I guessed, please just use “k-mer” or similar terms. 13. Also what are the y-axes in figure S4/S5 and how to interpret the figures? For example, for the most top-left figure “dnr” I can probably guess that the scg_ref lines indicates the reads or k-mer numbers that can be mapped to the database. But why distributions instead of just a number or two? And are the y-axes linear in a way that can connect different samples together? Please explain this figure as clear as you can. 14. There should be a way to depict the results represented in Figure S4/S5 into a clear message in the main manuscript. For example a few (but not too many) boxplots or violinplots that one can see very clearly that the combination of scg and current genome set can indeed classify better. Please consider adding a figure that says this message better. Reviewer #2: The authors acquired the genomes of the novel bacterial species in gut microbiota of laboratory mice by single cell genome sequencing. It seems that the authors achieved expansion of the genome database about mice gut microbiota. However, some additional information may be required to support the author’s claim. � Though the SAGs were selected to maximize phylogenetic diversity, it seems that 70% of the SAGs derived from p__Bacteroidota and 40% of the SAGs derived from g__Prevotella from figure 3. Is it reflect the composition of microbiota? If not so, how the authors think what is the cause of taxonomical bias of the single-cell genomics? The taxonomical bias may be a limitation of improving taxonomic resolution by single-cell genomics. � (Fig. 1, S1) Please add the histogram or box plot of contamination to the figures. � (Line 70) Which is the evidence for the text that the range of GC% across the assemblies became wider by the WGA-X? If the ratio of bacteria containing genomes with ≧ 60 GC% is small, the range of GC% does not seem to change (from ref. 12). � (Line 119) Can the authors add the information about which SAG the new gene was obtained from? If the novel genes were acquired from SAGs of novel bacterial species, it may highlight that increasing the number of mouse gut species improve the microbial community analysis. � (Line 135) What is the meaning of “substantial novelty” in the title of Fig 3. � (Line 152) “outer ring of Fig 3” → Fig 2? � (Line 153) It was not clear how Prevotella SAGs form a subcluster. If it means that the subcluster distinguish from the already known Prevotella genomes, please add the data about that. The presence of the CRISPR-cas system or BGC depends on the completeness of the SAG, so the completeness should be added to Fig. 2 if possible. � (Line 262) Please write the threshold of SAG filtration. 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Single cell genome sequencing of laboratory mouse microbiota improves taxonomic and functional resolution of this model microbial community PONE-D-21-37230R1 Dear Dr. Pollard, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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I trust that this minor issue can be corrected by the authors and do not need another round of evaluation by me or the reviewers. Please work with the editorial office directly. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have successfully addressed my comments and concerns. I only want to point a citation that I did not catch in the first round of review. Citation [73] is incorrect in both the author name and the DOI. The correct citation should be as follows. R Core Team (2016) R: A Language and Environment for Statistical Computing. R Foundation for Statistical Computing, Vienna, Austria. Reviewer #2: The authors have satisfactorily addressed previous comments and suggestions raised by the reviewers. I have no additional comments on the current version of the manuscript. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-21-37230R1 Single cell genome sequencing of laboratory mouse microbiota improves taxonomic and functional resolution of this model microbial community Dear Dr. Pollard: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Chih-Horng Kuo Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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