Peer Review History
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PONE-D-21-22288 Asymmetry and changes in the neuromuscular profile as a result of strength training PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Pakosz, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Your ms has been revised by two experts in the field. As you can see in the report, there are several major points the reviewers have raised. In particular, consider the indications provided by Reviewer 1 about the static approach used. Also, consider making as strong revision of the English as both Reviewers indicated to revise it. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 16 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The article is original and presents novel information in what concerns to short track athletes adaptations to strength training. The procedures are appropriate to accomplish the objectives of the study. The English is understandable but should be improved. The title is too generic. I recommend to change it to “Asymmetry and changes in the neuromuscular profile of short track athletes as a result of strength training” In the introduction it would be important a briefly presentation of the physiological demands of the sport, and a brief overview of the TMG signals adaptations to strength training. The sample size is small, but the fact that the participants are high level athletes in a poorly studied sport is a valuable input of the article. Although the athletes are clearly very experienced in what concerns to the sport, their experience in what concerns to strength training may not be the same. With an average age of 18,8 years old and probably encompassing athletes u-18, the number of years of strength training may not be the same and this would result in different neuromuscular chronic adaptations of the athletes and therefore it would influence the magnitude of the results obtained in each athlete. Can you provide this information? Or can you ensure the homogeneity of the strength training status of the athletes? The type, intensity and volume are described in the text, but it would be beneficial to the reader if this information is presented in a table. For example, a table with the microcycles of both mesocycles in lines and the training types in columns (endurance, strength/power and ice). It is optional to the author but I think it would help readers without knowledge about the sport, the physiological demands and the type of training. It is not clear if the recovery mesocycle took place right after or before the preparation mesocycle. The paragraph in ll.105-119 presents many repeated ideas of the previous paragraph. The sentences that are entirely equal should be rewritten or they should mention the above paragraph information. The participants had a familiarization during the warm-up with the CMJ? It is a technical jump, and the learning during the first attempts should be considered. ll.226. You start the sentence with “the differences in strength”. This should be used with caution because you do not measure strength of the lower limb directly in the jumping movement or indirectly in any maximum strength test (e.g. squat, leg press or mid-thigh pull), you measure the flight time and you assume that the observed differences are due to increased strength of the lower limbs. Am I right? I think this paragraph should be rewritten, and maybe you should describe information of other studies clearly showing that differences in flight time are caused by differences in peak force or rate of force development. ll.247. It should be plantar flexion muscles GL and GM Reviewer #2: The present study aimed to "assess the strength and characteristics of short track female athletes' muscles, as well as biomedical signal changes in the neuromuscular profile under the effect of a monthly period of exercises focused on improvement in muscle strength parameters, and secondly focused on recovery." I'd like to provide some positive feedback to the authors, although I have several major concerns. i) assessing elite athletes is always hard; ii) the detailed description of the training program and "recovery" program is not so common to read in scientific literature and it should be exactly the way the authors did it. Concerns: 1. The manuscript is hard to read and follow the main ideas. I strongly recommend that authors some proof-reading. This is critical since the motivation and rationale is very confusing, and partly due to English issues. 2. The introduction hardly leads the reader to the proposed aim and hypotheses. Just to provide an example of what I mean. in the last paragraph of the intro one can read "In the short track, the athletes always skate to the left, so it was also checked, how much the parameters of the muscles in both lower limbs vary among themselves in the athletes in this asymmetric sport discipline and to determine the reference values for the discipline."...which I believe the authors intended to discuss and point out potential asymmetries in this sport. However, such topic is hardly discussed within the intro and a common reader hardly understands why does it matter (is it really "bad" to be asymmetric in such "a asymmetric sport"). I am not trying to say it does, or does not, matter. But this needs a clear discussion so the reader can get the whole picture of what and why the authors are investigated such thing. Note this is just one example of the lack of a strong rationale within the introduction 3. statistical analysis: are you really calculating ICC analysis (note: please report SEM values), correlations, and a 2 factors design with an N =7? I am sorry, but no matter how large the effect size can be...this is potentially tremendously biased. I fully understand this is an elite group, and maybe you only have access to 7 elite athletes. But there are many others statistical approaches to deal with such type of data set (e.g. single-subject analysis. 4. Study design: At a certain point I got very confused. The authors mentioned a pre vs post, left vs right, and experimental vs control (note: this last one does not seem the best terminology to be). I couldn't see this design being tested in your statistical approach, I may have missed some. I do have some other minor comments but I would like to see these ones addressed before further detailed comments. 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Asymmetry and changes in the neuromuscular profile of short-track athletes as a result of strength training PONE-D-21-22288R1 Dear Dr. Pakosz, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Emiliano Cè Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No |
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