Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 13, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-19442 A Short Plus Long-Amplicon Based Sequencing Approach Improves Genomic Coverage and Variant Detection In the SARS-CoV-2 Genome PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Raj, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 09 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Article entitled “A Short Plus Long-Amplicon Based Sequencing Approach Improves Genomic Coverage and Variant Detection In the SARS-CoV-2 Genome” provides an approach to supplement ARTIC’s short amplicon sequences with long amplicons to generate more complete and high-quality sequencing data for mutation detection and phylogenetic analysis. This article may be considered after revision. Comments • Nasopharyngeal swabs were taken only from 5 patients , is that sufficient for the analysis? • Here, They reported two of the spike gene variants at nucleotide positions 23604 (P681H) & 23709 (T716I) , ? is it novel variants? • Main claim is new strategy that capture the mutating SARS-CoV-2 genome more accurately and efficiently, allowing for improved analysis of genomic information on evolving strains. How this approach is better when compare to other approaches ? • Is these any similar approach which reported with better efficiency? • Results parts need more discussion comparing other variants linked to specific population. • Are the five COVID-19 positive patients from same location ? Reviewer #2: "A Short Plus Long-Amplicon Based Sequencing Approach Improves Genomic Coverage and Variant Detection In the SARS-CoV-2 Genome" by Arana et al. describes a study comparing short amplicons, long amplicons, and a hybrid analysis approach for tiled amplicon genome sequencing of SARS-CoV-2. The study design and analysis is systematic and allows for robust comparison between the methods. The ability to minimize drop outs due to deletions or under-amplification with a given short amplicon primer pair is an advantage of this method. Several questions and requested clarifications are below, but pending these revsions I support the publication of this manuscript in PLOS One. Major points and questions -We routinely get high (>99.5%) coverage with ARTIC primers, though this is dependent on the sequencing depth of the sample and also sensitive to Ct and sample type. Do you have Ct values or other estimates of viral load for the samples that were analyzed in this study? -Figure 2B,D,F - Is this coverage at at least 1x or with some other threshold applied? -Figure 2B,D,F - The ARTIC primers don't cover 100 percent of the viral genome (and you will also lose some coverage at the 5' and 3' ends if primers are trimmed), so it is surprising that some of these bars say 100%. I am guessing this is rounded from 99 point something, but the authors should include another decimal place or otherwise clarify these coverage numbers. -Figure 2G - Are these variants called with a minimum read depth threshold as indicated in the methods? Which of the three variant calling pipelines was used to generate these numbers (or was it a consensus between the three tools)? -Figure 2G - It might be good to include a similar Venn diagram (as panel H or a supplement) that summarizes the overlap if only regions with adequate coverage in both data sets are considered to complement the discussion at the beginning of page 15. -Figure 2G - The Venn diagram seems to indicate 60 mutations present in more than one analysis (41 + 10 + 4 + 5), but the text and Table 6 lists 59. What is behind this discrepancy? -Figure 4B - I am not sure that the MJ network figure provides useful information since these are just 5 random patient samples. It might be better to show the Nextstrain plot with these samples highlighted to put them in context of the global viral diversity. -Discussion - Given that high coverage can be routinely obtained with short amplicons in most cases and the fact that adding a second library prep and sequencing dataset adds significant cost and time to the analysis workflow (the "slightly increase" wording is deceptive and should be changed as this at least doubles the cost). It would be useful to reframe the discussion to focus on when application of this technique would be most beneficial. I think it is hard to imagine (and likely overkill) for most routine large-scale surveillance sequencing, but may be useful as a reflex option for problematic samples or in a clinical context where complete coverage and additional confidence in the data is required. Minor points -Page 8 - Abstract: Please qualify first sentence "High viral transmission in the COVID-19 pandemic has enabled SARS‐ CoV‐ 2 to acquire new mutations that *may* impact genome sequencing methods." -Page 9 - Introduction: "overtime" should be two words "over time." -Page 12 - Step 4: Sequencing section. Please define "quality pass sequencing reads" or clarify this phrase. -Page 12-13. The data analysis seems to be described twice (once in the sequencing section and once in the data analysis section). Please consolidate these descriptions. Reviewer #3: In this paper, authors have used three methods including long and short read technologies for sequencing of SARS-CoV-2 genome and concluded that, combination of short and long sequencing reads gives better representation of SARS-CoV-2 variants. However, I have few concern mentioned below. 1. Nowadays, scientific community is looking for cheaper alternatives and wanted to reduce the cost of sequencing as much as low. In this direction, authors have used two different sequencing technologies to achieve the target, which in turn, increase the cost per sample. 2. Authors have used only five samples for sequencing. Were all the samples of the same lineage? or of different lineages? If, they were of the same lineage, authors must validate their long-amplicon primers on different lineages of the SARS-CoV-2. 3. Why authors have checked the quality of RNA on bioanalyzer? Which module, I mean Prokaryotic or Eukaryotic was used to run? Based on bioanalyzer results, how the quality of viral RNA was decided? 4. The Thermo Fisher Scientific, SARS-CoV-2 NGS panel consist of two pools with amplicons ranging from 125–275bp in length for complete coverage of over 99% of the viral genome and variants and that is irrespective of the virial lineage. How your method is superior to this? 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PONE-D-21-19442R1A Short Plus Long-Amplicon Based Sequencing Approach Improves Genomic Coverage and Variant Detection In the SARS-CoV-2 GenomePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Raj, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 16 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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A Short Plus Long-Amplicon Based Sequencing Approach Improves Genomic Coverage and Variant Detection In the SARS-CoV-2 Genome PONE-D-21-19442R2 Dear Dr. Raj, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Chandrabose Selvaraj, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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PONE-D-21-19442R2 A Short Plus Long-Amplicon Based Sequencing Approach Improves Genomic Coverage and Variant Detection In the SARS-CoV-2 Genome Dear Dr. Raj: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Chandrabose Selvaraj Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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