Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 4, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-03621 Accuracy of deep learning-based computed tomography diagnostic system of COVID-19: A consecutive sampling external validation cohort study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ikenoue, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 11 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This study carried out an external validation of a commercial tool Ali-m3. This is necessary for the area of AI-based medical systems. A number of concerns should be resolved before a further decision could be made. 1. The tool is a commercial tool on the cloud system, which means the commercial provider may change the code and models as they want. And the source code of Ali-m3 is not publicly available. Please clarify how this study ensure the replicability of this tool Ali-m3. 2. The authors mentioned that their data are unavailable to the public, either. The validation data are simply chest CT images, which are very easy to be anonymized. There are many freely available databases of chest CT images. So the chest CT images, the clinical data, and the diagnosis results of the samples need to be released to the public, after being anonymized. The prediction results of the tool Ali-m3 should also be released to the public for the replication purpose. 3. The free access to the commercial tool and online data storage IS a financial support. Please clarify this in the conflict of interest statement. 4. The current cohort consists of 617 patients, with 289 COVID-19 positive patients, and 223 patients with severe symptoms (needing oxygen support). The practical situation has many more COVID-19 negative patients. Considering the specificity is only 43.2% using the Ali-m3 score threshold 0.2, please clarify how to handle the increasing high number of false positives. 5. The results should be strictly discussed. For example, in the Abstract, “sensitivity increased for both cut-off values after 5 days”. But only one threshold 0.2 was mentioned in the Abstract. 6. And for the “223 patients who required oxygen support”, it’s misleading to skip mentioning the specificity. If we set the threshold to the extreme value (like 0), we can get 100% in sensitivity. But that is not an intelligent tool. 7. The commercial provider for Ali-m3 has a website in Japanese only. It’s impossible to review whether this company is a solid AI company or maybe just a contractor of this tool Ali-m3. So the quality and stability of Ali-m3 is unpredictable. 8. Does Ali-m3 have a medical license approved by some governmental agencies? 9. This study cited the commercial tool Ali-m3 by an internal report of a commercial company, which is not the service provider “m3”. Please clarify this. 10. And what is the online like to the validated tool Ali-m3? It’s not acceptable to ask the anonymous reviewer to contact the commercial provider to access the cloud-based tool. Reviewer #2: The manuscript is about a system for real-time sentiment prediction on Twitter streaming data for coronavirus pandemic. The paper is well-organised, but I still have some concerns: 1) In my idea, the paper contributions are not significant. There is no novelty. 2) There is some repetitive information in different parts of the manuscript about Twitter and sentiment analysis, etc. 3) The result part is the written form of tables. 4) The discussion part didn't discuss anything; it's just repeating the result section in other words. 5) There is some punctuation mistake in the manuscript. Reviewer #3: The contribution of this research paper isn't clear. Sorry to say that, however, I can't get the point of this paper from the manuscript. Although you state your purpose as "Ali-M3, ... However, Ali-M3 has not been externally validated.", this statement didn't show anything about what you want to do in this research paper. Based on the conclusion of this paper, "Our results indicated that AI-based CT diagnosis could be useful for ...", it seems that you want to prove that Ali-M3 can be used to diagnose COVID-19, but the data samples used to evaluate Ali-M3 and the results are not good enough to support your conclusion. There are only several hundreds of samples in your evaluation process, even more, you didn't provide background information about those samples, such as how were they collected and which groups of people they covered. So, in my opinion, they can't represent all COVID-19 situation. Besides the insufficient testing samples, the performance of the model with AUC 0.79, 0.82 isn't very good. How could a model with such performance be used in COVID-19 diagnosis? Another question, what is your work in this research? From the manuscript, I see that you ran the Ali-M3 model which is already a usable deep learning model, with patients data which I don't know you collected it or not, and take some simple analysis about the results. Are these all you had did in this research? What's the significance of what you did? Maybe you could add more contents in your manuscript about what you did, such as data collection, sample pre-processing, model adjustment, deep analysis, diagnosis direction, practice guideline, or some other things. A lot of analysis were done focusing on cut-off point adjustment. However what's the meaning of those analysis? Sensitivity and specificity have big changes when you use different cut-off values and they can be affected by the ratio of positive and negative samples of testing dataset. So I think it's not necessary to analysis those values because they can't represent real performance of prediction model. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Accuracy of deep learning-based computed tomography diagnostic system of COVID-19: A consecutive sampling external validation cohort study PONE-D-21-03621R1 Dear Dr. Ikenoue, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Haoran Xie Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: In my idea, although this study has a lot of limitations, it can be a good start to use AI in clinics. Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No |
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