PONE-D-21-18182

Diet impacts on the biological aspects of pink bollworm, Pectinophora gossypiella (Lepidoptera: Gelechiidae) under controlled laboratory conditions

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Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: The article entitled "Diet impacts on the biological aspects of pink bollworm, Pectinophora gossypiella (Lepidoptera: Gelechiidae) under controlled laboratory conditions" describes the diet impacts on biological parameters of destructive pest of cotton.The overall composition of the manuscript is good, is written in a clear and understanding manner with a very nice introduction to the topic. All used procedures are correct. The paper is scientifically and methodologically accurate, and the conclusions drawn are convincing. The linguistic style is sufficient for publication and the reference section is adequate. This manuscript will find the interest of many readers and researcher of entomology. However, there are few gaps still remains. In my opinion, these gaps must remove before publications.

The manuscript can be accepted after the following issues are addressed.

Minor comments:

Introduction

Line 17, suggested to write as There are limited studies were published to focused

Line 20, replace influence to impacts

Line 31, write as parameters were significantly varient across all treatment

Line 33, must removed some insights into

Line39, correct grammar and sentences

Line 40, write as, more than 100 countries with an estimated

Line 41, replace percent with % an same as in the Line 42

Line 43, write technical name of pink bollworm and whole manuscript as well

Line 46, correct sentence

Line 50, suggested to write white greenish eggs or bunch of 15 or 20 eggs that changes the color

Reference in text section should be changes with latest reference

Line 91-93, suggested to write The purpose of this study was to determine the impacts of different diet composition on developmental, larval and pupal weight of pink bollworm by separately rearing their larvae in reared cups to strictly avoid to any contaminations

Line 96, Write Insect collections

Line 136, remove space

Line 140. Write as and given in table 2

Line 147, remove space

Line 168, remove repetitions

Line 180, remove space

Lin 200-2001, remove space

In the discussion section must include latest reference

Line 307, replace facilitate

The sequence, heading, sub heading of manuscript should be according to journal requirements

Reviewer #2: Reviewer comments

Article title: Diet impacts on the biological aspects of pink bollworm, Pectinophora gossypiella (Lepidoptera: Gelechiidae) under controlled laboratory conditions

Editor in Chief

Thank you for providing me with an opportunity to review the article for your prestigious journal, PLOS One. I have reviewed the article and here are my comments/suggestion for the authors.

Comments for authors

Abstract

1. Line # 15. “Asia and preferably invade cotton crop, Gossypium hirsutum (L.)”, rephrase as “Asia and preferably invade cotton (Gossypium hirsutum L.) crop.

2. Line # 16. put comma after commercially.

3. Line # 18-19. G. hirsutum rearing ------------ conditions, rearing what? Make correction.

4. There are few grammatical and punctuation mistakes author need to carefully revise this section.

5. Introduction/Background

1. Cotton, Gossypium hirsutum (L.) change this to Cotton (Gossypium hirsutum L.)

2. Line # 38 & 40. Cotton is grown in more ----- employment needs, make this sentence grammatically correct.

3. Line # 51-59, require substantial rephrasing, the sentence/s are too long, and contain grammatical errors. Further, too many outdated citations.

4. There are several overlapping information in this section, authors are advised to remove such information.

5. Remove all outdated references and keep the latest.

Material and Methods

Authors described very detailed MM section.

Results

1. Results are described without heading, make sub-headings and describe information under those sub-headings.

Discussion

1. The discussion need to revised make it more focused based on results.

2. Remove the overlapping information/statements.

References

1. Update the reference section with latest findings keep only those old reference which are utmost important.

Comments for Editor

1. Article can be accepted after suggested modifications.

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Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: No

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Diet impacts on the biological aspects of pink bollworm, Pectinophora gossypiella (Lepidoptera: Gelechiidae) under controlled laboratory conditions

PONE-D-21-18182R1

Dear Dr. Ali,

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Adnan Noor Shah, PhD

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