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Original SubmissionMarch 24, 2021
Decision Letter - Davor Plavec, Editor

PONE-D-21-09706

Laminar flow ventilation system to prevent airborne infection during exercise in the COVID-19 crisis: a single-center observational study

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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Reviewer #1: I think it is a very valuable paper especially in regard to present situation. Though I would be very happy if you could perform Power analysis (then you do not have to say in limitations that you have a small sample)

Also regarding the language. Do not use WE did this, WE did that. Please use impersonal, passive voice.

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Revision 1

To Reviewer #1

#1. I think it is a very valuable paper especially in regard to present situation. Though I would be very happy if you could perform Power analysis (then you do not have to say in limitations that you have a small sample)

Response:

� Thank you very much for pointing this out. As suggested, a power analysis was performed. Based on a pre-performed Shapiro-wilk test, multiple comparisons of changes in the number of airborne particulates involving each incremental exercise period from the warm-up were made using the repeated analysis of variance with the Dunnet test as a post-hoc test. It revealed a significant and gradual increase in the respiratory droplets with time with a large effect size. Also, Cohen’s d was calculated using the value of t for paired t test to compare the droplet concentrations from spray or from the oral cavity during vigorous exercise before and after the activation of LFVS. We revised the related parts of the Materials and Methods, Results, Discussion, and Table, as shown below:

-Method section (Statistical analyses)-

The results are presented as means with standard deviations for continuous variables and as percentages for categorical variables, as appropriate. Based on a pre-performed Shapiro-wilk test, multiple comparisons of changes in the number of airborne particulates involving each incremental exercise period from the warm-up were made using the repeated analysis of variance with the Dunnet test as a post-hoc testSteel test. Student’s paired t-test was used to compare the droplet concentrations from spray or from the oral cavity during vigorous exercise before and after the activation of LFVS. We calculated Cohen’s d using the value of t for paired t test. SPSS, version 25.0 (SPSS Inc., Chicago, Illinois), was used for analysis, and p<0.05 (2-sided) was set to define statistical significance.

-Result section-

Monitoring particulates during exercise

Baseline characteristics of the subjects are summarized in Table 1. The subjects were predominantly male (80%), with an average age of 29 ± 12 years. Figure 3 shows the representative data for the particulates, lactate in sweat, and heart rate during exercise. A steady number of particulates before the LT was followed by a significant and gradual increase in the respiratory droplets after the LT, particularly during anaerobic exercise with a large effect size (Fig. 3 and Table 2).

-Result section-

Effect of the LFVS on the particulates during vigorous exercise

The LFVS was activated during a constant load of exercise intensity above the LT, in which the concentration of particulates in the exhaled air increased. Notably, particulates exhaled during exercise were almost completely removed by the LFVS (>0.3 μm: 2120800±759700 vs. 560 ± 170; p<0.001, p<0.001, n=10; Fig. 4 and Table 3).

-Discussion section-

Limitations

The present study has some limitations. First, as a single-center observational study, there may have been a selection bias. Second, the number of subjects was small. Third, our study did not allow for an examination of the possibility of LFVS in preventing the COVID-19 infection. A further randomized study with a large sample size and long-term follow-up for the prevention of COVID-19 infection is required to overcome these limitations.

#2. Also regarding the language. Do not use WE did this, WE did that. Please use impersonal, passive voice.

Response:

� As you mentioned, we revised the manuscript to remove the use of “We” when not appropriate.

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� As suggested, we revised the manuscript in accordance with PLOS ONE's style requirements.

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3. During the internal evaluation of the manuscript we have noted in the Methods section that one patient experienced a subdural hematoma. Please provide further clarification regarding whether this was a direct result of the exercise intervention. Please provide details regarding any treatment which the participant received.

Response:

� As suggested, we have revised the Methods section, as shown below:

-Method Section-

Subjects aged 20-80 years were recruited via a web system in October 2020. Exclusion criteria included receiving medication and having comorbidities, such as hypertension, diabetes, or active lung diseases. Twenty healthy subjects were enrolled recruited in this study The subjects had a broad spectrum of aerobic capacities and fitness levels, including athletes, and had no comorbidities, such as hypertension, diabetes, or active lung diseases. One of them had experienced a subdural hematoma 6 months ago. At the time he participated in this study, he was cured of his disease and was not receiving ongoing treatment. In addition, he was actively engaged in daily exercise. All of them received no medication. They can be considered representative of a larger population. The study protocol was approved by the Institutional Review Board (IRB) of Keio University School of Medicine [permission number; 20190229], and the study was conducted in accordance with the Declaration of Helsinki. Subjects provided verbal informed consent, because the IRB approved use of oral consent in accordance with Japanese guidance for clinical research. Verbal consents were recorded as experimental notes in this study.

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Response:

� Thank you very much for pointing this out. The IRB approved the use of oral consent in accordance with Japanese guidance for clinical research. The verbal consent was recorded as an experimental note in this study. Subjects aged 20-80 years old were recruited. We revised the Methods section, as shown below:

-Method Section-

Subjects aged 20-80 years were recruited via a web system in October 2020. Exclusion criteria included receiving medication and having comorbidities, such as hypertension, diabetes, or active lung diseases. Twenty healthy subjects were enrolled recruited in this study The subjects had a broad spectrum of aerobic capacities and fitness levels, including athletes, and had no comorbidities, such as hypertension, diabetes, or active lung diseases. One of them had experienced a subdural hematoma 6 months ago. At the time he participated in this study, he was cured of his disease and was not receiving ongoing treatment. In addition, he was actively engaged in daily exercise. All of them received no medication. They can be considered representative of a larger population. The study protocol was approved by the Institutional Review Board (IRB) of Keio University School of Medicine [permission number; 20190229], and the study was conducted in accordance with the Declaration of Helsinki. Subjects provided verbal informed consent because the IRB approved use of oral consent in accordance with Japanese guidance for clinical research. Verbal consents were recorded as experimental notes in this study.

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"Yoshinori Katsumata has a financial relationship with Kimura Memorial Heart Foundation Research Grant for 2019, Suzuken Memorial Foundation, Foundation for Total Health Promotion, and Research Grant for Public Health Science. Eiji Kobayashi has a financial relationship with Nippon Medical & Chemical Instruments Co. Ltd. Motoaki Sano, Hiroki Okawara, Tomonori Sawada, Genki Ichihara, and Kazuki Sato declare that they have no competing interests."

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Response:

� As suggested, we revised the Methods section, as shown below:

Funding Statement

The laminar airflow ventilation system was developed in collaboration with E.K. and Nippon Medical & Chemical Instruments Co. Ltd. This work was partly supported by a Grant-in-Aid from Scientific Research from the Japan Agency for Medical Research and Development [ID. 21ek0210130h0003] and by Kimura Memorial Heart Foundation Research Grant for 2019 [N/A], Suzuken Memorial Foundation [N/A], Foundation for Total Health Promotion [N/A], and Research Grant for Public Health Science [N/A].

The funders provided support in the form of financial supports for authors [Y.K., E.K.], but did not have any additional role in the study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript. The specific roles of these authors are articulated in the ‘author contributions’ section.

Competing Interests Statement

Yoshinori Katsumata has a financial relationship with Kimura Memorial Heart Foundation Research Grant for 2019, Suzuken Memorial Foundation, Foundation for Total Health Promotion, and Research Grant for Public Health Science. Eiji Kobayashi has a financial relationship with Nippon Medical & Chemical Instruments Co. Ltd. Motoaki Sano, Hiroki Okawara, Tomonori Sawada, Genki Ichihara, and Kazuki Sato declare that they have no competing interests.

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Response:

� As suggested, we uploaded the minimal data set. And, we revised the manuscriot, as shown below:

Availability of data and material

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The datasets generated during and/or analyzed during the current study are not publicly available but are available from the corresponding author on reasonable request.

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� As suggested, we revised the manuscript.

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� As suggested, we completed the Content Permission Form.

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Response:

� Thank you. We have not cited papers that have been retracted. No changes were made to the references.

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Decision Letter - Davor Plavec, Editor

Laminar flow ventilation system to prevent airborne infection during exercise in the COVID-19 crisis: a single-center observational study

PONE-D-21-09706R1

Dear Dr. Katsumata,

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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Thank you for addressing my remarks regarding impersonal language, power analysis and limitations

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Reviewer #1: No

Formally Accepted
Acceptance Letter - Davor Plavec, Editor

PONE-D-21-09706R1

Laminar flow ventilation system to prevent airborne infection during exercise in the COVID-19 crisis: a single-center observational study

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