Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 21, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-26216 A qualitative study of clinicians’ perspectives on independent rights advice for involuntary psychiatric patients in British Columbia, Canada PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Cheung, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 05 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Best regards, Nikola Biller-Andorno Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. Please include captions for your Supporting Information files at the end of your manuscript, and update any in-text citations to match accordingly. Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A Reviewer #3: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear authors, congratulations on this interesting manuscript! My main point of criticism is the sole focus on Canada, limiting its relevance for readers from other countries. Please find additional comments below: Major points: Consider adding information on the frequency of certification in BC to the introduction to give the reader (who may not be from Canada) a sense of the scope of the issue. To me, the paragraph in lines 58-61 would be better suited for the background section, as it is an argument pro independent rights advice. To me, the structure of your background section is somewhat confusing – I recommend sorting it into pro and con arguments. Also, a discussion of ethical arguments is lacking (principle of respect for autonomy). In order to make your manuscript more relevant to readers from countries other than Canada, I recommend reviewing (or citing a review of) the situation in other jurisdictions, too (briefly, and possibly limited to the US and Europe, f.ex.) In your methods section, please justify the choice of focus groups for your project. As you repeatedly refer to participants working in a rapid-assessment setting in your results section, I believe you should report on how many participants worked in such a setting in your methods section. Did you collect data on whether the participants of your study had work experience in a setting with legal rights advice service (f. ex. In another jurisdiction or in the context of the project you describe from line 126 on). As such experience would likely influence participants’ views, I believe it would be important information for your sample description. In my experience, 15 minutes is a rather short time frame for a focus group. Please report the average number of participants per individual focus group including a measure of variance and comment on whether participants felt they had enough time to respond to the introductory question (“How would you feel about a model where a rights advisor…”). I believe that the lack of physicians in your sample is a serious limitation to your study and should be discussed. Another limitation is the lack of service user participation. Minor points: Lines 178-179: “In 2019 a court ruled that this provision of the Mental Health Act unconstitutional [20].“ I believe this sentence is missing a verb (but I am not a native speaker of English, so if you are, feel free to ignore this comment). Reviewer #2: Thank you for giving me the opportunity to review this manuscript, which I find clearly written, methodologically sound and relevant both from a clinical as well as from a mental health policymaking perspective. Besides some minor points (see below) there is one major issue I would like to raise: Overall, the manuscript seems to be conceived from a very practical, hands-on point of view on the topic. Neither the background nor the discussion include some more theoretical reflections on the issues at stake. As it stands, the results are very much in line with this i.e. the themes being raised by the participants are primarily practical in nature. There is however one practical concern, namely the timing of providing legal information and advice, which entails an important ethical challenge on further reflection, I believe: Admitting a person against her will is only justified if this person is in severe need of treatment (and, at least according to some legislations, lacks capacity to consent to it). But arguably, understanding - and even more so acting on - legal information and advice requires similar cognitive and emotional abilities than the capacity to decide for or against treatment. Of course, capacity is always situational and decision-/topic-specific and of course a person who lacks capacity in some respects has rights about which she has a right to know. But - and here comes the ethical challenge - whilst promoting patients' rights and autonomy might seem ethically imperative, might it not also be unethical because it overburdens someone with decisions that she is incapable of taking? Even though the participants did not raise this fundamental challenge, I think the theme of 'timing' and participants' (yet shallow) reflections on how to inform and advise patients in a way that they can understand invites a more in-depth consideration of this issue in the discussion. Minor points: - I would add 'involuntary admission' or something alike to the keywords. - Please provide some detail about the legislation on detainment in the background section. Who can detain a person in BC (psychiatrists, any medical doctor...? one person alone or is there always a second opinion)? A the doctors who detain the person/who issue the certificate working on the unit(s) on which the person is then treated or is there a separation between detaining and treating physician and institution? For how long is a person detained for? What are the legal requirements for detention (is lack of capacity one of them)? I realise that some of this information is offered later on in the manuscript, but it is an important background for the reader against which to consider the results and it helps to have all of this information in the beginning rather than being offered it bit by bit. - Overall, the design seems well-suited to assess the issue in question. However, 15 minutes are extremely short for any kind of in-depth discussion. Please comment on this and provide some description of the flow/the dynamics of the conversation in the focus group sessions. - Please discuss the absence of psychiatrists and other physicians in the sample in more detail. As you note yourself, this a major limitation of the study which should be reflected thoroughly. Reviewer #3: The submitted research article for potential publication in the PLOS ONE “A qualitative study of clinicians’ perspectives on independent rights advice for involuntary psychiatric patients in British Columbia, Canada” addresses a very important question from a clinical, legal, and ethical point of view. The aim of the study was to assess within a qualitative study design how clinicians feel about the recommendation of an independent body (instead of clinicians) to give rights advice to patients upon admission. The aim of the study is well-defined. However, the research questions could be stated more precisely (see additional comment below). The methods are appropriate and well described. The data are sound. Although I am not an expert of the qualitative methods used, I am easy able to follow the presentation and interpretation of the findings. The manuscript adheres to the relevant standards for reporting and data deposition. However, the statement that “The dataset of anonymized focus group transcripts is available via Simon Fraser University’s data repository at https://researchdata.sfu.ca/pydio_public/43fd77.” should be stated in the manuscript. The discussion and conclusions are balanced and adequately supported by the data. Limitations of the work are clearly stated (see additional comment below). The title and abstract do accurately convey what has been studied. The writing is good. Suggested Minor Revisions: 1) The study focuses on the situation and law in BC, Canada. It makes sense that the authors provide the reader with the legal background on rights advice elsewhere in Canada. However, for the readership of this international journal, it would be interesting if the issues were embedded in the context of the international conceptual literature on involuntary hospitalization and rights advice. In addition, a short overview on the legal background in other constitutional democracies could be provided (e.g., the US, European countries, Australia, NZ etc.) 2) It would help the reader if the research question(s) were stated more precisely. The sentence on the lines 80-82 (“This paper presents focus group findings on the perspectives of clinicians who currently give patients rights information about the possibility of independent rights advisors.”) seems rather a summary for the abstract, and the applied methods belong to the Methods section. What follows the above-mentioned sentence on the lines 80-82 is the Background section. It would make more sense to state the research question(s) based on the Introduction AND the Background sections just before the Methods section. 3) Even for a qualitative study, the results section is very long with more than 3,000 words (more than 17,000 letters). Consequently, the authors should shorten this section. - In the Limitations section, the authors state that “Second, although all clinicians who give rights information were invited to participate, the study was not able to engage any physicians, and they are the only clinicians authorized under the Mental Health Act to complete the medical certificates to detain involuntary patients.” In fact, no psychiatrists, no other physicians, and only one psychologist participated in the focus group. I consider this THE major limitation of the study, and the authors should discuss the reasons for that fact. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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A qualitative study of clinicians’ perspectives on independent rights advice for involuntary psychiatric patients in British Columbia, Canada PONE-D-20-26216R1 Dear Dr. Cheung, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Nikola Biller-Andorno Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-20-26216R1 A qualitative study of clinicians’ perspectives on independent rights advice for involuntary psychiatric patients in British Columbia, Canada Dear Dr. Cheung: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Professor Nikola Biller-Andorno Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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