Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 3, 2020 |
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PONE-D-20-20611 Simplified cough test can predict the risk for pneumonia in patients with acute stroke PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Nakamori, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: I have received the comments of the reviewers on your manuscript. The specific comments of the reviewers are included below. Please provide point by point response in your revised manuscript. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by due date. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Aspiration pneumonia is a critical issue in patients with stroke. The authors investigated the association between the results of a simplified cough test, aspiration risk and pneumonia onset in 226 patients with acute stroke. No patient had pneumonia before stroke onset. For the simplified cough test, performed on admission, patients orally inhaled a mist of 1% citric acid– physiological saline using a portable mesh nebulizer. When the first cough was evoked or if it remained absent for 30 seconds (indicating an abnormal result), the test was ended. Patients also completed the repetitive saliva swallowing test (RSST) and modified water swallowing test. Patients were monitored for pneumonia signs for 30 days following admission. Eighteen patients exhibited an abnormal simplified cough test result. On multivariate analysis, an abnormal RSST result was independently associated with an abnormal simplified cough test result. Seventeen patients developed pneumonia. Statistical analysis revealed that the simplified cough test had predictive power for pneumonia onset (hazard ratio, 10.52). Seventeen patients developed pneumonia, of whom 10 patients had an abnormal simplified cough test result. Among these 10 patients, 6 patients had a normal RSST or MWST test result, which revealed that conventional bedside screening tests cannot predict the risk of aspiration pneumonia adequately. These findings suggested that the simplified cough test should be added to the existing bedside screening tests. The authors concluded that the simplified cough test is a strong indicator for predicting the pneumonia development in patients with acute stroke and that it should be added to existing bedside screening tests for predicting pneumonia risk, allowing appropriate and timely intervention. In addition, an abnormal simplified cough test was associated with an abnormal RSST, which suggested that silent aspiration might influence swallowing dysfunction. General comments: This is an interesting study. Mainly, it describes a simple, noninvasive and inexpensive means of assessing risk for aspiration and pneumonia in patients with acute stroke as an alternative to videoesophagofluoroscopy/endoscopy. The paper is well-constructed, and contains the necessary sections of introduction, question asked, methods, results, discussion and conclusions. Specific comments: 1. Since patients were admitted with acute stroke, I would assume many, if not all, had hypertension and were being treated for it. Were any patients receiving beta-blockers or ACE inhibitors? Both classes of medications are known to cause bronchospasm and/or cough which potentially could make the airways more reactive and lower threshold for cough. 2. Were patients with neuromuscular disorders also excluded? They often have bulbar dysfunction and may be hard to distinguish from strokes with brain stem involvement. 3. Tables should be placed at the end of the paper, rather than amongst the text. 4. Line 149: Small point, but in Table 1, the age of all 226 patients is said to be 72.8 ± 13.1, but the age of the 208 “normal” subjects was 74.2 ± 15.9. Since this is the larger group by far, I would expect the overall mean to be closer to 74 rather than to 72.8. Please check the calculations. In all the other variables, the overall mean is closer to the “normal” means. Reviewer #2: This paper is very interesting because it focuses on a convenient method available at the bedside. It will be more valuable with some modifications. 1, Please clarify the concrete method how to prepare the orally inhaled a mist of 1% citric acid. Is it made of medical drug or general product? 2, Was the NIHSS measured only once? Or was it measured repeatedly? Please tell me how many times the authors evaluated on average per patients. 3, I think it is better to clarify the interventions of the stroke to each patient. 4, If the simplified cough test is positive, what should clinicians be careful of in daily medical care? Is there any specific methods to prevent aspiration pneumonia? Please suggest such contents in discussion. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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