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Evaluation of larvicidal potential against larvae of Aedes aegypti (Linnaeus, 1762) and of the antimicrobial activity of essential oil obtained from the leaves of Origanum majorana L.

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Reviewer #1: Dear authors,

This manuscript deals with the chemical composition of Origanum majorana essential

oil and its mosquitocidal, antimicrobial, cytotoxic and antioxidant potential. The results of this laboratory study are interesting in that they extend our knowledge about larvicidal potential against Aedes aegypti and antimicrobial activity of Origanum majorana essential oil.

Further down you will find some suggestions of major importance that would probably benefit the manuscript.

Line 126: In the statistical analysis for the larvicidal bioassays it should be noted that the dose response data were analyzed by probit analysis and that LC50, LC90 values along with the confidential limits and the slope were generated.

Line 255: In the results concerning the larvicidal effect against mosquitoes, I propose to add a table with the LC50 and LC90 values with the confidential limits, along with the slope values and x2 and R2, for the treatment with the essential oil and the positive control at 24 and 48 hours in order for the reader to compare statistically the performance of the treatments.

Line 105: As a major drawback of the study design is that the major compounds, that were identified in the essential oil used, were note tested against Aedes aegypti larvae. The performance of the major compounds would help to interpret the toxicity of the essential oil and identify toxic active substances against Aedes aeypti larvae. Please comment.

Lines 273-274: The discussion concerning the larvicidal effect of the essential oil should be elaborated more presenting literature data for the larvicidal effect of O. majorana essential oil against other mosquito species.

Lines 279-282: The larvicidal effect of the major compounds of the essential oil used, namely pulegone, verbenone, trans-menthone, cis-menthone, piperitone, 3-octanol and isopulegol against primarily Aedes aegypti and other mosquito species from the literature should be discussed, in order to interpret the action of the current essential oil against Aedes aegypti.

Reviewer #2: The authors studied the larvicidal, antimicrobial, cytotoxic and

antioxidant potential of Origanum majorana essential oil.

Although the topic is relatively interesting and is suitable for publication in PONE, the MS shows some defects that prevent me from recommending the MS for publication.

Major comments:

1. In the introduction, explain goals of the work better. Why did you choose plant - Origanum majorana and why EO and not need extracts - in terms of industrial use of plants. What is the practical impact of work? How does antioxidant capacity and bactericidal activity relate to insecticidal activity? Why other non-target organisms have not been selected.

2. Results: The authors give lethal doses; however, if they want to find correct and relevant values, they should use the probit analysis and compare the CI95 intervals. Only in this way can they claim that a significant difference or progression in efficacy in time has been achieved. The term Positive Control (Table 2) is not correct. This term is used to describe the control variant where a commercial insecticide has been used (to compare biological efficacy of a standard insecticide and EOs). It is not clear if the percentages (eg Table 5) were transformed before statistical analysis. The calculation of LD50 (Table 2) for 48 hours is inaccurate because the lowest mortality was 57%, and for 24 hours the mortality for the two different concentrations was the same (40%) - it is not clear which of the values was taken to calculate the lethal concentration.

3. The discussion should be improved. Chemical composition is very important for the discussion and for understanding the mechanism of action. The authors should give a better comparison of their achieved efficacy to other authors who studied EOs with a majority content of pulegone (see e.g. DOI: 10.17221/48/2013-PPS; https://doi.org/10.1016/j.indcrop.2015.06.050 ect.) or EOs obtained from Origanum majorana against mosquitoes (see e.g. DOI: 10.12980/APJTB.4.2014APJTB-2014-0392; Int J Pharm Pharm Sci, Vol 8, Issue 3, 372-376 ect.). EO efficacy can be influenced by various external factors including the post-application temperature – this should be discussed (see e.g. DOI: 10.1016/j.indcrop.2018.01.021). The efficacy of sublethal doses or concentrations has been studied – and this should be discussed, as well. The implementation method is yet another aspect to be discussed.

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Reviewer #1: Dear authors,

This manuscript deals with the chemical composition of Origanum majorana essential oil and its mosquitocidal, antimicrobial, cytotoxic and antioxidant potential. The results of this laboratory study are interesting in that they extend our knowledge about larvicidal potential against Aedes aegypti and antimicrobial activity of Origanum majorana essential oil. Further down you will find some suggestions of major importance that would probably benefit the manuscript.

Line 126: In the statistical analysis for the larvicidal bioassays it should be noted that the dose response data were analyzed by probit analysis and that LC50, LC90 values along with the confidential limits and the slope were generated.

The requirement was met, as can be seen in the lines 158-162 and 163.

Line 255: In the results concerning the larvicidal effect against mosquitoes, I propose to add a table with the LC50 and LC90 values with the confidential limits, along with the slope values and x2 and R2, for the treatment with the essential oil and the positive control at 24 and 48 hours in order for the reader to compare statistically the performance of the treatments.

The requirement was met, as can be seen in the lines 305-312.

Line 105: As a major drawback of the study design is that the major compounds, that were identified in the essential oil used, were note tested against Aedes aegypti larvae. The performance of the major compounds would help to interpret the toxicity of the essential oil and identify toxic active substances against Aedes aeypti larvae. Please comment.

The requirement was met, as can be seen in the lines 132-134.

Lines 273-274: The discussion concerning the larvicidal effect of the essential oil should be elaborated more presenting literature data for the larvicidal effect of O. majorana essential oil against other mosquito species.

The requirement was met, as can be seen in the lines 315 – 328.

Lines 279-282: The larvicidal effect of the major compounds of the essential oil used, namely pulegone, verbenone, trans-menthone, cis-menthone, piperitone, 3-octanol and isopulegol against primarily Aedes aegypti and other mosquito species from the literature should be discussed, in order to interpret the action of the current essential oil against Aedes aegypti.

The requirement was met, as can be seen in the lines 293 – 302.

Reviewer #2: The authors studied the larvicidal, antimicrobial, cytotoxic and antioxidant potential of Origanum majorana essential oil. Although the topic is relatively interesting and is suitable for publication in PONE, the MS shows some defects that prevent me from recommending the MS for publication. Major comments:

1. In the introduction, explain goals of the work better. Why did you choose plant - Origanum majorana and why EO and not need extracts - in terms of industrial use of plants. What is the practical impact of work? How does antioxidant capacity and bactericidal activity relate to insecticidal activity? Why other non-target organisms have not been selected.

The requirement was met, as can be seen in the lines has 53–61 and 86-93.

2. Results: The authors give lethal doses; however, if they want to find correct and relevant values, they should use the probit analysis and compare the CI95 intervals. Only in this way can they claim that a significant difference or progression in efficacy in time has been achieved.

The requirement was met, as can be seen in the lines -310-317.

The term Positive Control (Table 2) is not correct. This term is used to describe the control variant where a commercial insecticide has been used (to compare biological efficacy of a standard insecticide and EOs).

The requirement was met, as can be seen in the lines 308 - 309.

It is not clear if the percentages (eg Table 5) were transformed before statistical analysis.

No. The percentages were calculated before statistical analysis. Statistical analyzes were performed based on percentages.

The calculation of LC50 (Table 2) for 48 hours is inaccurate because the lowest mortality was 57%, and for 24 hours the mortality for the two different concentrations was the same (40%) - it is not clear which of the values was taken to calculate the lethal concentration.

The statistical analysis was redone to understand the data more precisely. The requirement has been met, as can be seen on lines 303–305. The two 40% concentrations in Table 2 remain the same in 24 hours, as they are part of the larvae mortality control, but do not compromise the OE larvicidal activity, being more active in 24 h than in 48 h. Mortality decreased dramatically during 48 hours and in the static analysis it presented estimated values with very low and insignificant variation in larval mortality, but this result does not compromise the effective larvicidal activity of the EO.

3. The discussion should be improved. Chemical composition is very important for the discussion and for understanding the mechanism of action. The authors should give a better comparison of their achieved efficacy to other authors who studied EOs with a majority content of pulegone (see e.g. DOI: 10.17221/48/2013 PPS; https://doi.org/10.1016/j.indcrop.2015.06.050 ect.) or EOs obtained from Origanum majorana against mosquitoes (see e.g. DOI: 10.12980/APJTB.4.2014APJTB-2014-0392; Int J Pharm Pharm Sci, Vol 8, Issue 3, 372-376 ect.)

The requirement was met, as can be seen in the lines 323-335 e 341–353.

EO efficacy can be influenced by various external factors including the post-application temperature – this should be discussed (see e.g. DOI: 10.1016/j.indcrop.2018.01.021). The efficacy of sublethal doses or concentrations has been studied – and this should be discussed, as well. The implementation method is yet another aspect to be discussed.

The requirement was met, as can be seen in the lines -354-377.

Tables:

Line 429: Table 3 changed to Table 4

Line 435: Table 4 changed to Table 5

Line 4561: Table 4 changed to Table 6

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Evaluation of larvicidal potential against larvae of Aedes aegypti (Linnaeus, 1762) and of the antimicrobial activity of essential oil obtained from the leaves of Origanum majorana L.

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Reviewer #1: Dear authors,

Thank you for considering my comments that have been addressed in the manuscript noting however the following:

In table 2 it should be clarified if the LC50 value for the positive control was at 24 or 48 hours. Also, the significant difference in the larvicidal effect between the tested EO and the positive control should be mentioned in the text since the positive control was included in the study.

Please note that the chemical analysis gives us an indication of the implication of the components to the effect of the essential oil, however the most appropriate approach is to test the major compounds against the target organism.

I recommend to remove Lines 357-373 from the final (clean) draft manuscript (That is why this study tests the insecticidal….composition of the OE [66]) as non-relevant detailed information about the effect of temperature in insecticidal effect, considering that this was not subjected in the current research work

Reviewer #2: Authors corrected the manuscript according to reviewers' comments, I have no further comments.

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Please amend to link an affiliation 4 to each or remove if added in error.

The requirement was met, as can be seen in the lines 5-8.

Renata do Socorro Barbosa Chaves1, Rosany Lopes Martins1, Alex Bruno Lobato Rodrigues1, Érica de Menezes Rabelo1, Ana Luzia Ferreira Farias1, Lethicia Barreto Brandão1, Lizandra Lima Santos1, Camila Mendes da Conceição Vieira Araújo2, Talita Fernandes Sobral2, Allan Kardec Ribeiro Galardo2, Sheylla Susan Moreira da Silva de Almeida1*

2. Thank you for including your ethics statement: 'N/A' and thank you for stating in your methods section that:

'The leaves of O. majorana L. were collected in the district of Fazendinha (00 "36'955" S and 51 "11'03'77" W) in the Municipality of Macapá, Amapá. Five samples of the plant species were deposited at the Amapaense Herbarium (HAMAB) of the Institute of Scientific Research and Technology of Amapá (IEPA).'

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The requirement was met, as can be seen in the lines 103.

a) The study was carried out on private land with permission from the owner.

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The requirement was met, as can be seen in the lines 104-106.

i. There was no need for specific permissions for the study site/activity, as it is a private property where the owner has given authorization to collect the plant material.

ii. The study did not involve threatened or endangered species.

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Decision Letter - Horacio Bach, Editor

PONE-D-19-23621R2

Evaluation of larvicidal potential against larvae of Aedes aegypti (Linnaeus, 1762) and of the antimicrobial activity of essential oil obtained from the leaves of Origanum majorana L.

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Dear authors,

My comments were partially addressed in the manuscript not affecting, however, the robustness of the study. As a final comment, please check if the LC50 values for the positive control (esbiothrin) against mosquito larvae were indeed the same for 24 and 48 records of mortality.

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Comments to the Author

6. Review Comments to the Author

Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)

Reviewer #1: Dear authors,

My comments were partially addressed in the manuscript not affecting, however, the robustness of the study. As a final comment, please check if the LC50 values for the positive control (esbiothrin) against mosquito larvae were indeed the same for 24 and 48 records of mortality.

The requirement was met, as can be seen in the lines 298-300 and in the table 305-306.

Dear reviewer, analyzing Table (in the lines 312-313), it was necessary to use bold in the title of table 3; remove the spacing that existed between the title and table 3; add the parenthesis after the LC50 value 124.17 (103.23; 171.63) in 24 h, apply the superscript and subscript of the LC50 values (IC95) µg.mL-1, CL90 (IC95) µg.mL-1, R2, X2 and apply italic in X2. In addition, it was necessary to indent the paragraph after table 3 (in the lines 314-315).

Regarding the corrections in the references, the word "Portuguese" was removed on lines 357, 625, 656, 857, 874, 892 and 905.

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Decision Letter - Horacio Bach, Editor

Evaluation of larvicidal potential against larvae of Aedes aegypti (Linnaeus, 1762) and of the antimicrobial activity of essential oil obtained from the leaves of Origanum majorana L.

PONE-D-19-23621R3

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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed

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Reviewer #1: Yes

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Thank you for considering my comments. After your last response the manuscript could be accepted for publication.

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PONE-D-19-23621R3

Evaluation of larvicidal potential against larvae of Aedes aegypti (Linnaeus, 1762) and of the antimicrobial activity of essential oil obtained from the leaves of Origanum majorana L.

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